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 Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 6:56 pm
“Dance Alone”
A woman dances all alone
Music plays in her ear
And she doesn’t speak a word.
Her white gown flows
As she twirls around
As she listens
Without a word.
Her feet slide along
On a floor made of tears
The music keeps on playing
As she glides around the room.
The white shroud twirls around her
As she speaks of nothing heard.
She waltzes with her ghosts
While music plays
Lips sealed shut
Forever dancing alone.
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:36 am
Very pretty! I love how it's simple and elegant yet still holds it's mysteries.
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 11:36 am
Pup in Fluff Very pretty! I love how it's simple and elegant yet still holds it's mysteries. Thank you 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:03 pm
I like the way that the words flow, simple yet elegant at the same time.
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 7:10 pm
Krys_Night I like the way that the words flow, simple yet elegant at the same time.
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 10:07 am
Very Deep, depending on interpertation, I'd say that woman's had a tough life, and isolated herself.. I love it ^.^ heart
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:28 pm
Very creative, and very well written. Good job. It's amazing, and the words flow so well I just want to keep reading it over and over. Again, well done.
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 6:41 pm
This is haunting within its core.
There is such deep pain and longing.
I simply drank the words into my being and awaited for more.
You have a delicious way of placing a vision into the mind and a feeling of great emotion to flow for the reader.
This is a simplistic elegance.
Thank you, for sharing this fine poetic work! smile
Later....
..............WildWildWindWhispereri
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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