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 Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 10:44 am
Konnichiwa minna-san!!! Hi everyone!
Well let me inform you all that I will no longer be able to to make promises((god my spelling stressed )) on dedlines for chapters. It has been demenstraighted((DEAR GOD SHOOT ME NOW!!!!!)) already at how true that is. For give me, but band camp is simply cruel. Also for those of you you have already read the first three chapters when I first submited them, read it again. I did a grammer and spell check. It should and hopefully is at least a little bit better. But still remember people, this is my first public fanfiction! Bare with me ok?
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters! The people that made the game do! And sadly, these charcters own me. crying
Warning: remember people, this is my first public fanfiction! Bare with me ok? Some Shounen-ai/yaoi cuteness in this story. Also some possible Kari bashing in later chapters. (yes I hate her!) also my grammer,spelling,and punctuation skills are not so great as some of you already know!
Note: I will accept flames, not like I can stop them anyways. Critz are welcome and deeply appreciated! Need them to improve my writting skills. Comments PLEASE!!!! Read and review guys come on! complements and all that deeply appreciated! DUH!! but anyways time to read!
One more thing! I know the summery and titles suck but deal with it!
[Fan fiction] [Kingdom Hearts] {SoraXRiku}
Info: Sora and Riku have been through so much together. You'd think nothing could tear them apart considering right?
Nothing… except death. They made a promise to each other two years ago, to meet again on Destiny Islands. But when that
day comes, tragedy strikes before they can. Riku is late, and while waiting for him Sora, Donald, and Goofy are attacked
by a hoard of Heartless. Finally Riku arrives just in time to see the one he loves fall.*
Chapter 1. "Forgive me"
"Firaga!" I shouted aiming the key blade at a few Heartless, sending a huge fireball at them. They shrieked and disappeared but only to bring more from the shadows. Where are they all coming from? There's just no end to them, and I can't hold out for much longer. I looked around me, but could get no sight of Donald or Goofy. All I could see was a never-ending wave of small black yellow-eyed bodies surrounding me. I refocused my attention to the swarm of shadows around me. It seemed that for every one I killed three more would appear. My body hurt from the cuts and bruises. My clothes were torn and stained crimson with blood. I was getting weak. I killed another small group of Heartless when I heard a familiar voice not far from me.
"SOORA!!!" I heard Donald shout from somewhere behind me. I shouted a reply of "Here!" But that was a fatal mistake.
I had gotten distracted and let my guard down, allowing the enemy to strike. They attacked me simultaneously. Starting at my sides then moving in to completely engulf me. They were smothering me. They began clawing into my skin and biting me, spilling more blood. Falling to my knees, I desperately tried to fight back, ignoring the sting of my wounds and clenching my teeth. But it was no use. I had lost. I felt a last blow to my head, as I screamed.
But the pain was soon replaced with something else. My body went numb and I hit the ground hard. My vision blurred. Everything started to go dark. I heard the cries of "Sora!" from Donald and Goofy once more, but could not call out. Their voices seemed so far away. The world faded. I laid in the cold darkness. Feeling so I alone and helpless. I could feel my life slipping from me and I began to grow tired. I was dying.
`But I can't die yet! I still have to see Riku! `
My tear filled eyes fought desperately to stay open. I couldn't die, not without seeing Riku one last time. But the ebony darkness soon swallowed me whole. And just as the last small bit of me faded I called out for the one person I knew I would never see again, the one I loved.
"Riku…Forgive me …”
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Chapter 2: "Please don't leave me."
I screamed as I watched in horror. I saw that beautiful brunette, my one and only light in darkness, fall to the ground. He didn't move. I ran to him, as the heartless disappeared. I leaned down and picked up his frail body.
"Sora! Sora…please answers me!" I sobbed and tears began to fall down my face. I held him close, gently caressing his cut up cheeks, pushing away some lose strands of hair. His body was so light, too light. Lifeless.
I sat there, crying, with him in my arms. I don't know how long. But it felt like time had stopped. Almost like someone had ended it on purpose so I would have to suffer this moment. Why? Why does Sora have to die? The one person I love. He is my one and only light that guides me in the darkness. And then I heard that familiar laugh. One that was cruel in tone.
Saix. He’s one of those Organization XIII scum.
I looked up and to see the said man. His bluish hair billowing behind him as a breeze swept over them. His face bore a scar in the shape of an “ X ” between his eyes. And that look of total amusement. He truly was pure evil.
"Poor poor Riku…you just couldn't make it in time to save your lover could you?" He smirked down at me. I laid Sora down, and stood. My face screwed up in rage.
"You b*****d! You did this didn't you?" I willed my key blade to appear in my right hand.
I saw a small glow of silver below me. It was Sora. In his hand appeared his own key blade. But it was one I had never seen before. Its key chain was a Paupu and a heart charm. The Blade had an inscription on it. It read, Aishiteru*(1). I bent down to pick it up for further examination, but there was another flash of light and it appeared in my left hand. Sora must have past it onto me. I smiled feeling immediate comfort.
I went into as defensive position ready for Saix to strike. But he just stood there with a smirk. Oh how I wanted to wipe that off.
“Oh know come on Riku, I’m not here to kill you, I would like to talk.”
I growled. “Talk then!”
He looked at me, then down to Sora. I growled again, growing impatient. He looked up with that same smirk.
“I have a proposition for you,” when I didn’t say anything he continued, “ I bring him back to life for you…but at a price of course.” His smirk became wider.
I glared at him. There had to be some kind of catch, I knew it. But I’ll do anything to get my beautiful koibito*(2) back. “Name your price.”
His smirk once again grew. “Your Eyes.”
I gaped at him. “Oh not your eyes completely, just your sight.” I looked down to Sora once again.
“Well?” I nodded. His smirk was really begging to piss me off. He walked towards me; before I could do anything he covered my eyes. They began to burn.
I screamed in pain, struggling to be free, but he was stronger and held me tight. I stole one last glance at Sora, who was coming too. Smiling I mumbled.
“ Aishiteru*, Sora.”
The world went black.
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Chapter 3: “Can you see me?”
“Unnh,” I moaned, opening my eyes and seeing only darkness before me. For a blissfully ignorant second I had no idea where I was. As my eyes slowly adjusted, I looked around. I was back on Destiny Islands. ‘But…didn’t I ……die?’ I heard voices and stayed still and also quite.
“Name your price,” said a young males familiar voice.
“Your Eyes.” an older male spoke this time.
The younger sounding man must have had some surprised face or something because the older male then chuckled and said, “Oh not your eyes completely, just your sight.”
There was a pause.
“Well?” The older male said, his voice impatient. I lifted my head slightly, and I saw two men. Both had long hair, the one I assumed to be the younger one silver hair, the older a bluish color hair. The silver haired boy nodded his head in agreement and the older began to walk towards him. Who were they? It was then that I finally saw the silver haired boy’s face.
RIKU!
I sat up quickly as the man who I soon recognized to be Saix, one of those Organization XIII members, covered Riku’s eyes. He began to scream. He pushed him away and looked to me before he fell. I heard him mumble something before closing his eyes.
“Aishiteru, Sora.”
“RIKU!!” I screamed running to his side. I jumped up and ran too him. How am I still alive? I saw Saix, disappear into a dark portal. But what I was worried most about was Riku. I Knelt beside him, and checked his pulse. Yes, still there. He was unconscious. The area around his eyes was red. What did Saix do to him? I carefully lifted his head and set in in my lap. I already knew that it wasn’t worth moving him. I could hurt him worse.
Brushing a few strands of his beautiful silver hair I caressed his face.
Why am I still alive? Didn’t I die? I thought I had. Then why…HOW…am I here still?
Could it have been Riku? Does this have anything to do with why I‘m back? Did he do this for me? I sat there thinking about for a while. Hours possibly, it would certainly explain why I was startled to find that the sun had gone down. I must have fallen asleep while deep in thought. Riku stirred. I looked down to see those beautiful aqua marine eyes looking up at me. But one thing troubled me about his eyes. Unlike the loving and cocky eyes he once had, these eyes were…emotionless. Empty. In fact it seemed as if he didn’t know I was above him. Like he couldn’t see me. I tested this by waving a hand back and forth in front of his face. He blinked once. But what happened next frightened me.
“W-w-whose t-there!” he said in a scared voice.
I looked down at him. Not believing what he had just said.
“Riku…it’s me!” I said caressing his face. His eyes grew wide, still empty however. He reached his hand up to caress my cheek as well.
“S-Sora?” His voice was shaky. What was going on? Could Saix have blinded him?
“Yes Riku I’m here. C-can you, see me?” He did answer just looked up at me with those hallow eyes of his. I felt my heart stop at his next words.
“No…”
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yay! should be able to update with chpt 4 soon! not for sure though.
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:15 am
crying crying crying crying * Ish in tears*
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 4:45 pm
~Riyu Umi Renku~ crying crying crying crying * Ish in tears* try writing that...... crying
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Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:44 pm
domokun crying crying crying
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Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 11:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 4:05 am
mwahahahaha!!!! clif hangers!!! sorry I haven't posted in so long. evil writers block! R&R!
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Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2006 11:27 pm
I need new Idea's for this fic! help meeeeee!!!!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 12:42 pm
wahmbulance this is shameful. I've been gone for like 2 months and not a single tiny comment, crit, or even FLAME!!!! I have truely failed this fic and at life. emo
anyways chapter 4 four comming soon. but If I don't get anymore comments or any responce from people I will discontinue and delete it. wahmbulance
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 3:32 pm
i want to read it pleassssssssssse i really really doooo
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Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:19 am
ok so heres a question....I think i should write the rest of the story in thrid person..I really hate 1st person...so should I?
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:43 am
i personally like both but i kinda like 3rd better so i would go with 3rd
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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 5:07 am
random rubber chicken!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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