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PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2013 12:47 am
So basically, I just joined this guild. And it looks so interesting, and I don't receive critiques from people about my art. Basically they don't really care OTL
Then I saw this page and why not? Haha
Rate this art? Give me a critique on how I can improve? c:

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so what do you guys think?  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 07, 2013 10:51 pm
Mm her waist could be more defined. The shading is a bit flat, more depth would help a lot. The angle of her feet doesn't match her torso (I think the deviation started at her knee?).

Hope this helps ^^  

Rooke

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PUMMMY


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:54 am
Rooke
Mm her waist could be more defined. The shading is a bit flat, more depth would help a lot. The angle of her feet doesn't match her torso (I think the deviation started at her knee?).

Hope this helps ^^

Oh thank you! It definitely helped a lot, thank you so much ^^V  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 11, 2013 6:40 pm
LOL....i'm the only one who voted.....but i totally agreee with Rooke-sama


P.S. I think your much better than me in using Photoshop xD  

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