Working on something & need help with the pose

[Xelyn Craft]

Hi guys. I'm working on a commission for someone and need a little help with the pose. I'm fairly happy with how the big guys pose turned out but something is definitely off with the little guy in his lap. Can someone give me some redlines or something to help fix it? And feel free to edit either character's pose, not just the little guy. I want to know if there is anything I can do to improve either.
Here is what I've got so far.

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[Nero-gataki]

Xelyn_X13

Hi guys. I'm working on a commission for someone and need a little help with the pose. I'm fairly happy with how the big guys pose turned out but something is definitely off with the little guy in his lap. Can someone give me some redlines or something to help fix it? And feel free to edit either character's pose, not just the little guy. I want to know if there is anything I can do to improve either.
Here is what I've got so far.

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It may be too late but ill give it a try smile although you are way better then me T-T anyway you could give me pointers on drawing the body so well?