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katran6666

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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:54 pm

hello all
i am a big fan of poetry
i try and write some but i aint very good at it
i would love to see some of your poetry or just your favorite poems by other people
i might even post a few of my poems when ever i get up the courage to

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 2:40 am

well my poems ore dark but here gose

WHAT THE...

I’m there without knowing
I kill without hesitation
you cannot see me… you are frightened of me… yet you know what I am and how I work thus you are not scared and I grow weak because of you
you mind when you don’t you kill me when I try to kill how can I be the same for all yet different to all you run form me and try to hide yet you cant I always creep up and get you some how
how could it be
how should u look
as they look
what do they see
as they come they go as you dream your mind is week as u come u go as this happens your valuable and susceptible to the evil which no one should live on

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:28 am

well here is one of my poems i wrote when i woke up in the middle of the night from a dream

Unnamed
As i sit here on this rusted old bench
a question comes to mind.
I can't help but to ask
Why me?
As the sunsets turning blue into red
I sit still wondering
Then my mind wanders even further
I am so lost in thought i don't notice
The subtle change in temperature
You sit down next to me
"Its going to rain" is all you say
Those simple words
Seemed to break my trance.
You stand up as to leave
That is when i ask
"Will you marry me?"
You seem to stagger
"What?" is all you say
"Will you marry me?"
I repeat louder, as i pull a ring from my pocket
As i await the answer it begins to rain
A soft patter turns into a downpour
"Well?" is all i say
Then the thunder
And i awake to an empty bed

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:01 am

This one's about a bully I had in school.

Bully

A dirty sneer and veiny balls of hail
drunk with power stare at me.
The beast descends upon me.
I'm a sheep.

Embarrassing things it did to me
made my face burn red with shame and anger.
The monster gave me chills.

But then,

I'll always remember
that day it showed me the
soft underbelly of its arm
telltale parallel markings,
as if by ice skates.

I get it now.
The ice, cold and barren,
is all he's ever known.
I see your weakness now, beast.
All you wanted was my warmth.

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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:37 pm

Hey all, I just launched a poetry contest here and I'd love to get submissions from you biggrin

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 4:29 pm

i love to write poems razz
here goes one

I Am The One
I am the one who cried all night
I am the girl whose afraid to say good-bye
I am the one who won't forget,
the beautiful smile you had on your face

I am the one that came to you
I am the girl who saved you
I am the one that now regrets,
all the good things she did to you.

I am the one who sees you cry
I am the girl that stood by your side
I am the one that won't forget
the beautiful time we had, till she came

I am the one which saw you fall
I am the girl who'll cry no longer, for
the only guy she ever cared for
I am the one who said good-bye
to find someone else that's worth her time

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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:26 pm

You are the shinning light that every girl wishes to have
It's unbelievable that your the blind and I'm the one crying like a wolf, to be mine
Realize I'm falling and you don't care
I could just walk away and start again
But it's impossible to forget that one person who has that strong personality
The one that makes you laugh when he makes awkward faces out of nowhere
The one that caught your attention out of a million other guys that could never be compared to him. ♥

Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:31 pm

Just To Compliment You

I wash your clothes,
I clean your room,
I clean the house,
Your butt too

Seeing your smile
Your childhood life
compliments me
to be alive. biggrin

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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:40 pm

The Hunter
With pitch-black fur I walk
I glide from shadow to shadow
Stalking my prey
Silently i sneak
My opportunity comes
I jump, claws at the ready
Fangs sinking into flesh
My prey bucks like a bull
Yet with strong jaws and claws
I keep my grip
My jaws tighten with every breath
My prey stops moving
I bite harder waiting for the crunch of its spine
Then silence
The ecstasy of the hunt is gone
All that is left is to eat,
And live for another day

Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:12 pm

katran6666

The Hunter
With pitch-black fur I walk
I glide from shadow to shadow
Stalking my prey
Silently i sneak
My opportunity comes
I jump, claws at the ready
Fangs sinking into flesh
My prey bucks like a bull
Yet with strong jaws and claws
I keep my grip
My jaws tighten with every breath
My prey stops moving
I bite harder waiting for the crunch of its spine
Then silence
The ecstasy of the hunt is gone
All that is left is to eat,
And live for another day

your poetry's are awesome but they seem like a adventure story

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