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 Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:22 pm
So the picture is my OC Maren's nameless younger brother jumping on his back- him not expecting it, and another character Londun, he's just kinda watching them.
Though I am terrible with interactions like this, and will use references/mirrors the best I can but I dont think I can get this referenced in real life- not easily anyway.I will attempt this one later sweatdrop New subject- going to be Maren, his younger brother, and Londun. Maren and his younger brother are hugging, Londun is just kinda hanging out in the background I guess ^^' So its still just the rough outline, but redlines and/or critique would be very much appreciated! 
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:07 pm
If it's an unexpected leap/catch, I would think they would be hunched over more to try to keep their center of gravity since there is now a large weight basically rushing at their back. Maybe a bit more like this?  I think the leg placement seems good even with the more forward upper body.
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:11 pm
jaggedbubbles If it's an unexpected leap/catch, I would think they would be hunched over more to try to keep their center of gravity since there is now a large weight basically rushing at their back. Maybe a bit more like this? I think the leg placement seems good even with the more forward upper body. Yeah, would be nice if I had two people willing to try this, but the people living in my house wouldnt work so well sweatdrop Im going to attempt this again later- when I have more skill for this- but Thanks : D I will keep this in mind when I attempt it again. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:20 pm
Vanna1994 jaggedbubbles If it's an unexpected leap/catch, I would think they would be hunched over more to try to keep their center of gravity since there is now a large weight basically rushing at their back. Maybe a bit more like this? I think the leg placement seems good even with the more forward upper body. Yeah, would be nice if I had two people willing to try this, but the people living in my house wouldnt work so well sweatdrop Im going to attempt this again later- when I have more skill for this- but Thanks : D I will keep this in mind when I attempt it again. 3nodding I did find a couple of reference photos, maybe they can help you out a bit when you do? The drawback is the leaper is obviously larger than a child. Piggy BackLeapt upon
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:26 pm
jaggedbubbles Vanna1994 jaggedbubbles If it's an unexpected leap/catch, I would think they would be hunched over more to try to keep their center of gravity since there is now a large weight basically rushing at their back. Maybe a bit more like this? I think the leg placement seems good even with the more forward upper body. Yeah, would be nice if I had two people willing to try this, but the people living in my house wouldnt work so well sweatdrop Im going to attempt this again later- when I have more skill for this- but Thanks : D I will keep this in mind when I attempt it again. 3nodding I did find a couple of reference photos, maybe they can help you out a bit when you do? The drawback is the leaper is obviously larger than a child. Piggy BackLeapt uponTrue, but I can always make them smaller/use another reference to get the child's body the right size- and actually they are 13 and 15 so neither are all that big ^^' Thanks a ton!
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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 8:33 pm
I can't draw men worth a damn, but there were a lot of mistakes with your girl >.< but you did GREAT on the kid. i'd just raist the arm and shoulder higher. Or if you don't raise it higher, but the shoulder farther back. 
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 1:27 pm
actually, even in my redline I made the stomach on the girl way too long. it should be much shorter
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 7:35 pm
Imalyose actually, even in my redline I made the stomach on the girl way too long. it should be much shorter My anatomy is way off sweatdrop none of them are girls sweatdrop They are all boys- I dont think I have a character with hair above their chins, one might be bottom of ear length but he done count I havent drawn him much gonk but dont worry, I cant draw properly to save my life right now sweatdrop I need to work on that..
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 9:21 pm
Vanna1994 Imalyose actually, even in my redline I made the stomach on the girl way too long. it should be much shorter My anatomy is way off sweatdrop none of them are girls sweatdrop They are all boys- I dont think I have a character with hair above their chins, one might be bottom of ear length but he done count I havent drawn him much gonk but dont worry, I cant draw properly to save my life right now sweatdrop I need to work on that.. don't sweat it. just practice like a sumbitch
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:42 pm
The first major thing I noticed when I looked at the pic is that your oc's hand is the wrong way. You have a right hand on a left arm. I think you might need to shoerten all the arm lengths a little as well, and the torsos of the two taller guys. They have awkwardly long torsos and it doesn't really look right. The kid brother's proportions look like they're good thugh, so good job on that ^_^ Also, with the tall guy, the hand he has on....his hip? looks kinda wierd. Since his belly is showing, I'm assuming the shirt doesn't go that far down, yet it looks like he's got something pinched between his fingers, like he's pinching himself for some reason.
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:18 pm
Imalyose Vanna1994 Imalyose actually, even in my redline I made the stomach on the girl way too long. it should be much shorter My anatomy is way off sweatdrop none of them are girls sweatdrop They are all boys- I dont think I have a character with hair above their chins, one might be bottom of ear length but he done count I havent drawn him much gonk but dont worry, I cant draw properly to save my life right now sweatdrop I need to work on that.. don't sweat it. just practice like a sumbitch I will! I will be trying to do some from life drawings, but I also have a busy schedule, will have to try and find something to draw at school, and at night mostly ^^'
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Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:21 pm
Nandoral The first major thing I noticed when I looked at the pic is that your oc's hand is the wrong way. You have a right hand on a left arm. I think you might need to shoerten all the arm lengths a little as well, and the torsos of the two taller guys. They have awkwardly long torsos and it doesn't really look right. The kid brother's proportions look like they're good thugh, so good job on that ^_^ Also, with the tall guy, the hand he has on....his hip? looks kinda wierd. Since his belly is showing, I'm assuming the shirt doesn't go that far down, yet it looks like he's got something pinched between his fingers, like he's pinching himself for some reason. Yeah, I started working on fixing the torso issue, its been twice now that I got this far and then noticed that issue, was upsetting.. I have no idea how I missed that earlier.. (I always seem to have at least one proportion issue ^^') and I do backwards hands all the time, bad habbit sweatdrop I havent done much with his hand, and his belly isnt showing, it looks like it is, but its just part of the shirt design. (My clothing designs tend to be trial and error, I may try something and it end up ugly xd ) Thanks! : D
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