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 Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 1:04 am
With all my fury, every inch of pain
This violent anger tearing us away
Hate, destruction, human consumption
Creates division, blinded in vision I haven't drawn really anything without a tutorial or a base in a while, so I tried it using a different method than before. But I need a real artist's critique so I can get better c: So, how is it in ALL honesty? Raging like the wave, crashing to its place
Such violent delights have violent ends
So furiously, my insanity, trapped in vanity
Scrounged in desire, raging like a fire
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:13 am
ok.. so i think your drawing is cute 4laugh and i didn't notice your mistakes at first because it really is cute like that heart
but your mistakes are the eyes, don't know how to explain it... you could add a little bit more shape to it.. and be careful because it's not all that simetrical
and even if it's chibi the shoulders could use some "exercise" meaning that you could cut a little bit out of it... but i really think it's cute smile heart
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:19 am
chatastrophero ok.. so i think your drawing is cute 4laugh and i didn't notice your mistakes at first because it really is cute like that heart but your mistakes are the eyes, don't know how to explain it... you could add a little bit more shape to it.. and be careful because it's not all that simetrical and even if it's chibi the shoulders could use some "exercise" meaning that you could cut a little bit out of it... but i really think it's cute smile heart
This violent anger tearing us away
Hate, destruction, human consumption
Creates division, blinded in visionOhhh o: Thank yuh! xD
Yeah, it's one of my main struggles when I draw >.< but I dunno how it isn't symmetrical, though.. i copied and pasted the eyes cause imma cheater like that ;D (but hey, if it's an option, why not use it? x3)
And I'll try fixing some things in another drawing sometime ^^
Thanks for the help heart Raging like the wave, crashing to its place
Such violent delights have violent ends
So furiously, my insanity, trapped in vanity
Scrounged in desire, raging like a fire
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:19 am
Her left eye (on our right side) is the mess up. It makes it look like she is looking down and cross eyed. And the shoulders could be the mistake.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:20 pm
You can draw better than me using a mouse, on a computer. Plus, the drawing is absolutely adorable! Ten! 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:30 pm
She has Derpy's eyes. Otherwise it's quite nice.
Note: Derpy is AWESOME, so comparing your art to her only succeeds in making your art MOAR AWESOME.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:44 pm
The eyes were pointed out already. For a chibi drawing, it is rather well done. Though, you could spare a tad more detail on the face I guess, (such as eye lid lines, eyebrows, ect.) For a mouse drawing, it is really good. Your nose is also a bit off, being a sideways pointing arrow, when the drawing is facing head on.
Though, if you were aiming for something that wasn't chibi, I'd suggest investing time in studying a bit of proportions. Just keep drawing, and don't be afraid of experimenting different lines and things.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:56 pm
Alexander J Luthor She has Derpy's eyes. Otherwise it's quite nice. Note: Derpy is AWESOME, so comparing your art to her only succeeds in making your art MOAR AWESOME.
This violent anger tearing us away
Hate, destruction, human consumption
Creates division, blinded in visionlmao, you should have seen it before the hair was on, though. That white part is only the shine, actually. No, she isn't cross-eyed xD
You mean.. Derpy the pony? or whaa? o-o Raging like the wave, crashing to its place
Such violent delights have violent ends
So furiously, my insanity, trapped in vanity
Scrounged in desire, raging like a fire
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:11 pm
The shoulders are kind of weird, in my opinion. I think that the drawing itself is pretty cute, but the proportions are kind of distracting from the other parts of the drawing. Even if your goal isn't true realism, I would suggest trying to get proportions juuuuuuust a little more accurately.
On the plus side, I really like the colour scheme of the hair, and the shirt design is pretty cool.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 11:03 pm
--Untoten Kase-- Alexander J Luthor She has Derpy's eyes. Otherwise it's quite nice. Note: Derpy is AWESOME, so comparing your art to her only succeeds in making your art MOAR AWESOME.
This violent anger tearing us away
Hate, destruction, human consumption
Creates division, blinded in visionlmao, you should have seen it before the hair was on, though. That white part is only the shine, actually. No, she isn't cross-eyed xD
You mean.. Derpy the pony? or whaa? o-o Raging like the wave, crashing to its place
Such violent delights have violent ends
So furiously, my insanity, trapped in vanity
Scrounged in desire, raging like a fire [/quote What other Derpy is there? O A O!!
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Posted: Fri Aug 05, 2011 11:50 am
first impressions - cute!
I guess there's something strange going on with her second eye and the proportions are a little out, but I'm loving the hair 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 10:14 am
Looks adorable. Im impressed that its all done in a 8-bit kinda way. Doesnt look easy.
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Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:17 am
How cute! heart
I love it. I also love how your ava looks, I'm all for the glittery pink-- caught my eye right away!
Only thing I noticed on your art piece was she had a bit of broad shoulders, maybe make them a little slimmer since she's skinny.
What did you draw this on?
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:55 pm
Its cute but..there are a couple of things that bother me here. On a normal person the shoulders are about 3 times the size of there head (or 2.5 for girls) But i always think you can shorten them a little for style reasons. Her arms are wider then her waist which is...impossible. Else wise i think its cute.
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 12:58 pm
The shoulders and eyes don’t work to me.
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