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 Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 3:05 am
Hey everyone, just joined the guild thought I would introduce myself. My name is Tyler im studying at Academy of Art SF. here's my latest piece I completed for an album cover. tell me what you think heart X
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:00 am
Hey Tyler : D welcome to the guild!
Your drawing is really lovely, I especially love how you show off knowledge of musculature and shading in areas like the arms and torso : ) very lovely. I'm not sure if your open to cretics on your drawing right now as well, but I'd just thought I'd point a little something out, maybe for future reference and consideration : 3. Your left foot, the one thats closest to us, seems a little to twisted. With the angle of body and especially the angle of the knees I don't think the foot would be able to twist towards us so much as it is doing presently. Maybe just turn it more to a side view, and it should work better.
Other than that I really love the work you did so far on your drawing, the drapery is very nice : 3
Keep up the great work! I'd love to see more from you in the future : )
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 6:34 pm
nice!
i like her hair and pose! : D
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:01 pm
Kai_Chi Hey Tyler : D welcome to the guild! Your drawing is really lovely, I especially love how you show off knowledge of musculature and shading in areas like the arms and torso : ) very lovely. I'm not sure if your open to cretics on your drawing right now as well, but I'd just thought I'd point a little something out, maybe for future reference and consideration : 3. Your left foot, the one thats closest to us, seems a little to twisted. With the angle of body and especially the angle of the knees I don't think the foot would be able to twist towards us so much as it is doing presently. Maybe just turn it more to a side view, and it should work better. Other than that I really love the work you did so far on your drawing, the drapery is very nice : 3 Keep up the great work! I'd love to see more from you in the future : ) thanks girl blaugh critique is all good by me, I tend to stare at a piece for so long that I lose my discriminatory eye and I end up thinking it all looks good! This is the first full body ive done so the anatomy gave me some trouble, especially the proportions of the hands and feet.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:06 pm
iTaintedOm nice! i like her hair and pose! : D thanks! biggrin heart
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:14 pm
Hey for the first time try its pretty awesome the work you did : ) good job
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