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So, any advice for me?

LongLongAgo

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Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:20 pm

I was wondering if anyone could give me a critique of this or perhaps a little advice on a way to make it better. Feedback would be much appreciated.

This would be it.

Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:08 pm

That's not bad. I would suggest not using too many black lines for folds and creases- either that or make them neat. Don't go over the same lines too many times. The hair makes the head a bit large looking- and unless you really most have it, showing the face more is a sign of artistic confidence. In consideration of the arm to your left, it is a bit too short and thin around the elbow area, but the hand was drawn well.
I hope this helps you. =]

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Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:12 pm

It's very well done.
The only thing I would change are the size of her legs. They seem to be in a way smaller in proportion to her torso and head.
I have allot of trouble with legs so that's why I usually never draw them xD
But anyway other than that I love it! 3nodding

Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:07 pm

Thanks so much for your advice! I thought something was wrong with her limbs but I couldn't really figure it out.

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Moonsuh

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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:39 am

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☆The pose is great, I love it *W*
Well you can try to do less black lines, and color the shades spaces with an color more darker than the one that is your 'base' :3 That gives more texture ^^ or just do more soft lines ...

Hope it helped <33

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