Rate my art//tips?

[v v starlight lunaria v v]

This

This

And This

I'm trying to work more on drawing humans//human-like stuff.
I dun mind harshness, I know I suck lol.
Though, I am a bit better, having just started out drawing like this rolleyes

[made of nutella]

may I suggest something that helps me. I look at bases on Deviant to get ideas on they way to draw the body (spelling left me earlier)
It has helped me a lot.
but I am still working at it  

[azndreams]

Well for some reason the first link doesn't want to load for me. So I will tell you about the others.

The Second one. Now I like what you were going for, but well it seems like the eyeball is too big and well you need to work on spacing and the proportion of things to the other things. Sizing is the key. So I would rate it 2/5

The Third one. I like this one. Good and well I would say make the lines a little more crisp and maybe add in some shadowing. A good shadow or a thicker line can add so much more depth. So I would rate it also
2/5

Sorry if I'm harsh. I really luffs chuu.  

[neonchrome]

Proportion is pretty important to me when I am drawing or looking at someone elses art. You should definatly work on the proportions. I suggest sketching out the base first.
Also shading is huge. I can make an iffy piece of art really good looking to me.

I'm sorry for this, but the hand was not too good :/ I know they are complicated. I ******** hate them. But the palm was too big or the fingers were too small. Like I said before, you should work on the proportions  

[Anime Princess Luna]

Dont worry ^_^ i have problems with body proportion and placement and such often 3nodding i just keep practicing and since i do my art on tablet, i can easily fix my mistakes. just keep working at it and you'll do great 4laugh