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 Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:40 pm
Handful of Happiness
Beauty
That’s a mottled yellow
See the spots of black
Almost like dirty sand
Ironic, beauty being so ugly
Dreamy
That’s a pale blue
Almost like a clear sky
Jus after midday
Stormy skies create adventures
outshining any dream
Control
One of the darkest greens
You can only see under trees
In the midnight forests
Yet the forest grows wild
And is more beautiful because of it
Love
Pure shiny red
Not pure opaque or simply see through
More plastic reflecting light
In other words, a bit of fake
Sanity
A pure white
No imperfections
Or mars , just uniform
Just boring , life needs madness
What will these do for you
Make me happy, feel alive
Truly overwhelming life
At least until it kills you
True but in the moments
Before I start to die
I will be flying high
Out of this black and grey world
Far over the rainbow
Where the colors shine
With life overwhelming
You'll blaze with color
And then fade to forever black
All thanks to those little pills
Clenched so tightly in your hand
http://nerdnirvana.org/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/handful-of-happiness.jpg
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:31 pm
I guess the silence means you hate it. Come on, I really would like some comments, even the hurtful kind.
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:13 pm
I enjoy it. I like how you matched together thoughts or things people think of on a daily basses ( dreams, sanity, love) or that you feel in your own life with colors and pull in a sensation, then mass it away with a dark side to it. in the end for the color of death to show and death come with it. I also like how you had the speaker and a voice( gonna make the assumption its a voice in the characters head rather then someone speaking by the italics, though correct me if i'm wrong) is the one making the dark comments to each thing that the character says in response to each word.
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:34 pm
lunar link I enjoy it. I like how you matched together thoughts or things people think of on a daily basses ( dreams, sanity, love) or that you feel in your own life with colors and pull in a sensation, then mass it away with a dark side to it. in the end for the color of death to show and death come with it. I also like how you had the speaker and a voice( gonna make the assumption its a voice in the characters head rather then someone speaking by the italics, though correct me if i'm wrong) is the one making the dark comments to each thing that the character says in response to each word. I don't know how, but you managed to exactly put into words everything I was trying to express with this poem. And that is something that I never seem to be capable of. Also you are right about the voice. It is a speaker and a voice, although I think of the voice as being more of an angel on the shoulder rather than a voice in the head. A really sarcastic angel that more people might benefit from listening to.Might save a few lives if they did.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:13 pm
white_stranger lunar link I enjoy it. I like how you matched together thoughts or things people think of on a daily basses ( dreams, sanity, love) or that you feel in your own life with colors and pull in a sensation, then mass it away with a dark side to it. in the end for the color of death to show and death come with it. I also like how you had the speaker and a voice( gonna make the assumption its a voice in the characters head rather then someone speaking by the italics, though correct me if i'm wrong) is the one making the dark comments to each thing that the character says in response to each word. I don't know how, but you managed to exactly put into words everything I was trying to express with this poem. And that is something that I never seem to be capable of. Also you are right about the voice. It is a speaker and a voice, although I think of the voice as being more of an angel on the shoulder rather than a voice in the head. A really sarcastic angel that more people might benefit from listening to.Might save a few lives if they did. heh thanks, i'v been told i got a knack for it. and i like the idea of a sarcastic angel for the voice as well, its a good way to put things in perspective without making the person seem crazy* nods* as well its been a while if ya remember me, how ya been?
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Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:34 pm
Not too bad, but really busy with work and home. During the first week of July, some kids went and burned down our garage with firecrackers. Thankfully it wasn't attached to our house or we might be homeless right now. As it is, we lost a lot of my dad's things that were in storage in the garage, my graduation memorabilia, and tons more. We're still waiting for the insurance to send us money for the cleanup and for the contents lost. Yet they keep stalling.
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:55 pm
ouch >.< that really sucks.
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