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Minerva the Bookwyrm Captain
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 Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:05 pm
In a fan fic that I wrote, James convinced Remus to write a love poem about Lily for him to give to her. So, the style of this poem isn't supposed to be Minerva-ish Style. It's supposed to be Remus-trying-to-be-a-romantic-James Style. If you don't read the Harry Potter books then you won't understand how exactly the tone of the poem is meant to come across, but you can still appreciate the poem for itself.Life's Light Your crimson hair is like the sun, Beautiful and bright. Your green eyes are jewels, Mysterious as the night. Your smile, though, is the best of all, And if you smiled at me it would give my life light.
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Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2008 3:49 pm
I like it. It's really cute, but...you've got to get over your Remus-thing.
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Elf on a Bookshelf Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:21 pm
Elf, do not suggest that to Minerva. She will go absolutely insane, well in a bad way. She can be very frightening when it comes to people saying things like 'your Remus-thing' She can be touchy. I must inform you, she will never get over the Remus-thing anyway. So you're trying to stop something that is a lost cause. To ensure my own health, no offense to Minerva. I think that loving a fantasy character is just fine.
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:54 am
Yes, Elf, Animal is right; I will never get over Remus. He is my true love! biggrin heart
Anyway, don't forget that the thread is supposed to be about the poem, not Moony. I just wanted you all to know where the concept for it came from.
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Minerva the Bookwyrm Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 8:38 pm
Sadly, I must admit that i haven't read the series and don't know the characters. sad In my opinion, the poem itself is very good. smile Even though I don't know the characters, i still like it. nice job! smile
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 2:15 pm
Thanks, Bruki! smile heart Like I said, the books aren't necessary to like/dislike the poem. It's simply that for people that HAVE read them, they'll understand the tone I was trying to get across.
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Minerva the Bookwyrm Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:50 pm
James and Lily.. and Remus kinda inserted there ! Hehe.
It was quite sweet. smile
Very James-ish. biggrin
(Gahh, I love James wink )
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 9:47 am
Thank ya, Suze! smile We never would've guessed that you loved James. wink
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Minerva the Bookwyrm Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 1:47 pm
Hey, That poem was super great. I love the whole Remus trying to be ramantic thig it is soo, for me orignal! biggrin So the whole remus and being your love and all thats rockin! xp
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 9:35 pm
hmmmmmm *Remus forever lives in her heart* !! We know..... we know.... we know !!!!!!!
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