Can I get an opinion on this.. I drew Ala's head shot. I want real feedback on this. You're all welcome to make a joke about it aslong as there is some kind of serious feedback involved too.
Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:22 pm
You need fine tuning. Try have a plastic ruler bent at the side to help draw long curves.
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:24 pm
Looks good but I'd say make the white of the eyes a little bigger. On the avi there seems to be more white in the area than black. Or at least that's what I noticed. Otherwise it looks really good to me.
Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:29 pm
I like it. I think it could use a little extra time put into it if you're planning on selling it though...or rather making other pictures like it to sell. Maybe some coloring or something?
Try some practice with symmetry. Draw one half of a vase, then try your best to immitate the same half on the other side, use a ruler to make sure that the bumps are coming out at the same level on each side.
It's the symmetry of the picture that's the most off, otherwise it's really not so bad, but it IS kind of lopsided. Like if you took a ruler from the horn on the left and laid it flat it would show you that the horn on the right is way higher. It's a problem lots of people have, as we only draw with one hand and that one hand tends to want to curve to one side or the other.
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