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PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:29 pm


I could probably write 67 pages in 5 days! blaugh 3nodding In fact some times I know I can write up to 10 pages in one day! But I haven't been that lucky as of late. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:37 pm


Mid-chapter 2.
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Entering the wilderness that is the mountain scape Augusta easily feel the winds. They flow, carrying the snow to the earth, to fall upon large mounds of already resting snow. It is heavenly and a bliss of other worldly passion, that she adores to embrace. It is the gentle caress of her birth right that is taking to loving her form, as though it has missed her. Spreading out he arms in full array Augusta allows the wind to encompass her and swirl, causing her to be closing her eyes to the passion. With open palms at ease, head holding proudly, her face looking to the celestial outer limits, and her form perfection, in stately vision, Augusta welcome her winds to her. As a lover welcomes her other. Full, open, compassionate, and wanton, breathing in deeply and exhaling with sensual release.” Memmm.”as it trails off into the winds
 

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 10:41 pm


Keep it up WildWind. I'm enjoying the snippets you're posting. That most recent one had a nice, poetic feel to it.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:26 pm


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Keep it up WildWind. I'm enjoying the snippets you're posting. That most recent one had a nice, poetic feel to it.


Thank you for your kind words.

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Then she stirs a bit more needing to shake out the sleep from within her being but needs to rise from the bed of resting. The sleepiness within will be solved with a few moments of Karma Yoga. This shall stretch the limbs and clear the mind. Augusta arises to her full amazonian height and begins walking toward the fire that is encircled with stones. While walking toward this, she gently renders her outer heavy robes off her body, slipping them from her shoulders, allowing them to simply and softly fall to lay upon the cave floor. Next she unties her heavy customary public robes, leaving only the finery of her daily robes. These lovely lines shimmer of virtuous silken elegance, with beautiful decoration adorning every inch of the blue finery. These secondary robes release from her form and she place upon the cave floor, immediately she stands upon them.
Closing her eyes, she calms all of her presence. Then in a blink she stretches out, bending her head in a silent prayer. Augusta then open her eyes beginning the ever so poetic flow of movements. Each comes as natural and a flawless scene of play, art, and purpose. Her stare is of a peace that can only come when a being is experiencing true solitude. Her hands and limbs dance to the air, with swiftness, kindness and direction. Then within this Augusta suddenly begin the Prasarita Padottanasana, bending over allowing her buttock to ascend and her head to rest upon the robe that lay upon the floor. Looking through her own legs, she view Blayne sitting in the distance. A smile quickly comes to her lips and the twinkle inside of them radiate brightly
PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:40 am


After much delay, here's the next part of my Star Wars story. There are some terms in here that I realize one wouldn't know unless they were a Star Wars fan. Feel free to ask what something is if you don't know.

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“I am really beginning to hate her…”

“I was under the impression that your hatred for Nevara was already quite unparalleled, mistress.”

Visona Ketra glanced at the petite human in the blue officer’s uniform standing at her side before turning her attention back to the sight in front of her. “When I think that disliking that one eyed witch anymore than I already do isn’t at all possible, she proves me wrong time and again Sonia.”

Captain Sonia Wen-Karri looked up at the statuesque, gray skinned Twi’lek with a smile on her round face. “She can’t keep running, mistress. We’ve cornered her out here and it’s only a matter of time before she has to face us.”

“I’m willing to bet that’s all part of some outlandish scheme she’s conceived, possibly while having more Corellian rum in her than any human should. I’ve fought enough battles alongside her to know when she’s toying with her adversary.” Visona explained.

“Huh,” Sonia shrugged, figuring Visona’s observations made sense enough. “I suppose its good fortune that we have adequate cannon fodder, then.” The senior officer motioned a gloved hand to the large bacta tank roughly ten feet away.

“Why didn’t you tell me what I was really up against?” An unclothed and heavily scarred Ronis Kraal spoke through his breath mask as he floated idly inside the tank.

“I didn’t have a chance to.” Visona started. “When I told you the size of the bounty my master was offering you promptly took off. Your failure was your own fault and no one else’s.”

“I could have prepared better if I had known how strong she actually was.” The bounty hunter responded. “Once I’m out of here-”

“The meddroids say you’re going to be in there for at least three more days.”

“All the more time to think about what I’m going to do to her.” Kraal assured Visona.

“You’ve proven what you can do, Mandalorian. Your chance has passed. I will handle this like I should have from the beginning.”

“You get between me and my bounty and I swear I’ll-” Kraal started until Sonia’s smiling face quickly called his attention away from Visona’s challenging glare.

“Mistress Ketra is a bit...lacking…” Sonia spent several moments fishing for the right word. “…in dealing with others socially. It isn’t her fault, really. She spends most of her time cooped up on this ship instead of seeing the galaxy like I constantly ask her to.”

“Maybe it’d do her some good to go planet side and take in the fresh air.” Kraal added, glancing at Visona.

The gray skinned Twi’lek remained stoic near the medical lab’s entrance, eyeing the two closely but showing no emotion as they continued to banter.

“Heh, it seems like the only sort of contact with another sentient the mistress is ever interested in is combat. I never did understand why Jedi can be so damned anti-social sometimes. Sometimes she’s an absolute drain to be around.” The captain said with her own self-congratulatory chuckle.

Ronis Kraal laughed with her until he was cut short by a mild coughing fit that echoed through his breath mask. He looked down to Sonia and pressed his hand against the inside of his bacta tank. “You seem like a pretty interesting lady. Certainly the kind of person who’d make good company at a cantina. What do you say you and I lose Ms. Congeniality over there for a few hours once I’m out of here and go hit one?”

Sonia’s smiled widened. She put her own hand against the bacta tank where Kraal’s was and looked over the Mandalorian’s bare form and warrior’s physique before biting her lower lip and looking him in the eye. “Well now Mr. bounty hunter, it almost sounds like you -GYAH!!” She yelped in surprise when an unseen hand suddenly lifted her, pulled her away from the bacta tank and back through the air before placing her gently on her feet near the entrance.

Visona lowered her hand once Sonia was right next to her.

The captain took a moment to stare at her mistress in disbelief before straightening invisible wrinkles in her officer’s uniform and fixing her dark brown hair.

“Gather whatever information you can about this rock we’re orbiting. I want to know why Nevara’s here.” Visona ordered, never taking her cold glare off of the recovering bounty hunter.

“Of course,” Sonia complied. She spun on her heel and promptly exited the medical lab. The automated door hissed shut behind her and, save for the periodic beeping of medical instruments, a dead silence hang in the air as dark Jedi and Mandalorian stared each other down.

“Want the little firecracker for yourself, huh?” Kraal finally disrupted the peace.

Visona simply turned her back to him and took a step forward causing the door to reopen. “The bounty still stands, in case you’d like to try again.”

“I’m stuck in here for the next three days, remember?” Kraal reminded her.

“2-1B.” Visona paused and called to the humanoid shaped droid that had been quietly droning away at the monitoring equipment connected to Kraal’s bacta tank.

“Yes, mistress Ketra?” The charcoal colored droid spoke with a deep, hollow voice while turning its glowing yellow optics away from its duties and onto the Twi’lek woman.

“He can leave whenever he feels he is ready.” She motioned a hand to Kraal.

The 2-1B meddroid turned its head to Kraal for a moment before going back to its monitoring duties. “Understood.”

“Fine, what about my stuff?” The Mandalorian asked.

“The engineering bay has your armor. They should be finished with the repairs by now.” She half turned her head and looked back over her shoulder, the three heavily tattooed lekku on her head snaking and shifting accordingly. “Though I’m expecting the same results, it should be interesting to see what happens, nonetheless.”

“I’d love to see her wipe that smug look off your face, alien!”

Without so much as another look, Visona continued on her way.

“Tch…she’s a sensitive o-” Kraal began to mutter to himself when a powerful gripped suddenly grabbed his throat and cut off his breathing.

Monitoring instruments connected to his tank began wailing and their signals pulsed rapidly. The bounty hunter thrashed wildly but 2-1B went about his programming as though nothing were out of the ordinary.
Hollow thumps echoed through the lab when Kraal pounded a fist against the inside of his tank once the onsets of panic began to take hold. He felt his lungs burning and his heart threatening to burst inside his chest. The hold on his airway tightened as the invisible hand cruelly and slowly constricted. Kraal’s fist stung and ached, but he persisted in trying to shatter the impenetrable glass containing him. He tried to yell for 2-1B to help him, but the droid focused only on the monitors in front of him and kept his back to his charge.

Just when it seemed like all it was lost, the ghostly grasp that had the bounty hunter at its mercy let go. The cacophony of high pitched whines from the medical equipment halted and Ronis Kraal’s signs began to stabilize. He hungrily choked down the sweet air being fed to him through his mask once again and relaxed when he realized the danger had passed.

“Looks like I’ve got two Jedi witches to take care of…” He muttered to himself while rubbing his neck and glaring at the doorway to the medical lab.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 5:29 pm


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After much delay, here's the next part of my Star Wars story. There are some terms in here that I realize one wouldn't know unless they were a Star Wars fan. Feel free to ask what something is if you don't know.

---------------


“I am really beginning to hate her…”

“I was under the impression that your hatred for Nevara was already quite unparalleled, mistress.”

Visona Ketra glanced at the petite human in the blue officer’s uniform standing at her side before turning her attention back to the sight in front of her. “When I think that disliking that one eyed witch anymore than I already do isn’t at all possible, she proves me wrong time and again Sonia.”

Captain Sonia Wen-Karri looked up at the statuesque, gray skinned Twi’lek with a smile on her round face. “She can’t keep running, mistress. We’ve cornered her out here and it’s only a matter of time before she has to face us.”

“I’m willing to bet that’s all part of some outlandish scheme she’s conceived, possibly while having more Corellian rum in her than any human should. I’ve fought enough battles alongside her to know when she’s toying with her adversary.” Visona explained.

“Huh,” Sonia shrugged, figuring Visona’s observations made sense enough. “I suppose its good fortune that we have adequate cannon fodder, then.” The senior officer motioned a gloved hand to the large bacta tank roughly ten feet away.

“Why didn’t you tell me what I was really up against?” An unclothed and heavily scarred Ronis Kraal spoke through his breath mask as he floated idly inside the tank.

“I didn’t have a chance to.” Visona started. “When I told you the size of the bounty my master was offering you promptly took off. Your failure was your own fault and no one else’s.”

“I could have prepared better if I had known how strong she actually was.” The bounty hunter responded. “Once I’m out of here-”

“The meddroids say you’re going to be in there for at least three more days.”

“All the more time to think about what I’m going to do to her.” Kraal assured Visona.

“You’ve proven what you can do, Mandalorian. Your chance has passed. I will handle this like I should have from the beginning.”

“You get between me and my bounty and I swear I’ll-” Kraal started until Sonia’s smiling face quickly called his attention away from Visona’s challenging glare.

“Mistress Ketra is a bit...lacking…” Sonia spent several moments fishing for the right word. “…in dealing with others socially. It isn’t her fault, really. She spends most of her time cooped up on this ship instead of seeing the galaxy like I constantly ask her to.”

“Maybe it’d do her some good to go planet side and take in the fresh air.” Kraal added, glancing at Visona.

The gray skinned Twi’lek remained stoic near the medical lab’s entrance, eyeing the two closely but showing no emotion as they continued to banter.

“Heh, it seems like the only sort of contact with another sentient the mistress is ever interested in is combat. I never did understand why Jedi can be so damned anti-social sometimes. Sometimes she’s an absolute drain to be around.” The captain said with her own self-congratulatory chuckle.

Ronis Kraal laughed with her until he was cut short by a mild coughing fit that echoed through his breath mask. He looked down to Sonia and pressed his hand against the inside of his bacta tank. “You seem like a pretty interesting lady. Certainly the kind of person who’d make good company at a cantina. What do you say you and I lose Ms. Congeniality over there for a few hours once I’m out of here and go hit one?”

Sonia’s smiled widened. She put her own hand against the bacta tank where Kraal’s was and looked over the Mandalorian’s bare form and warrior’s physique before biting her lower lip and looking him in the eye. “Well now Mr. bounty hunter, it almost sounds like you -GYAH!!” She yelped in surprise when an unseen hand suddenly lifted her, pulled her away from the bacta tank and back through the air before placing her gently on her feet near the entrance.

Visona lowered her hand once Sonia was right next to her.

The captain took a moment to stare at her mistress in disbelief before straightening invisible wrinkles in her officer’s uniform and fixing her dark brown hair.

“Gather whatever information you can about this rock we’re orbiting. I want to know why Nevara’s here.” Visona ordered, never taking her cold glare off of the recovering bounty hunter.

“Of course,” Sonia complied. She spun on her heel and promptly exited the medical lab. The automated door hissed shut behind her and, save for the periodic beeping of medical instruments, a dead silence hang in the air as dark Jedi and Mandalorian stared each other down.

“Want the little firecracker for yourself, huh?” Kraal finally disrupted the peace.

Visona simply turned her back to him and took a step forward causing the door to reopen. “The bounty still stands, in case you’d like to try again.”

“I’m stuck in here for the next three days, remember?” Kraal reminded her.

“2-1B.” Visona paused and called to the humanoid shaped droid that had been quietly droning away at the monitoring equipment connected to Kraal’s bacta tank.

“Yes, mistress Ketra?” The charcoal colored droid spoke with a deep, hollow voice while turning its glowing yellow optics away from its duties and onto the Twi’lek woman.

“He can leave whenever he feels he is ready.” She motioned a hand to Kraal.

The 2-1B meddroid turned its head to Kraal for a moment before going back to its monitoring duties. “Understood.”

“Fine, what about my stuff?” The Mandalorian asked.

“The engineering bay has your armor. They should be finished with the repairs by now.” She half turned her head and looked back over her shoulder, the three heavily tattooed lekku on her head snaking and shifting accordingly. “Though I’m expecting the same results, it should be interesting to see what happens, nonetheless.”

“I’d love to see her wipe that smug look off your face, alien!”

Without so much as another look, Visona continued on her way.

“Tch…she’s a sensitive o-” Kraal began to mutter to himself when a powerful gripped suddenly grabbed his throat and cut off his breathing.

Monitoring instruments connected to his tank began wailing and their signals pulsed rapidly. The bounty hunter thrashed wildly but 2-1B went about his programming as though nothing were out of the ordinary.
Hollow thumps echoed through the lab when Kraal pounded a fist against the inside of his tank once the onsets of panic began to take hold. He felt his lungs burning and his heart threatening to burst inside his chest. The hold on his airway tightened as the invisible hand cruelly and slowly constricted. Kraal’s fist stung and ached, but he persisted in trying to shatter the impenetrable glass containing him. He tried to yell for 2-1B to help him, but the droid focused only on the monitors in front of him and kept his back to his charge.

Just when it seemed like all it was lost, the ghostly grasp that had the bounty hunter at its mercy let go. The cacophony of high pitched whines from the medical equipment halted and Ronis Kraal’s signs began to stabilize. He hungrily choked down the sweet air being fed to him through his mask once again and relaxed when he realized the danger had passed.

“Looks like I’ve got two Jedi witches to take care of…” He muttered to himself while rubbing his neck and glaring at the doorway to the medical lab.



I adore the intensity of it`s beginning, and then the ushering forth of the leap into high drama.
Very sweet to read.
Thank you for the kindness.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:28 pm


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I adore the intensity of it`s beginning, and then the ushering forth of the leap into high drama.
Very sweet to read.
Thank you for the kindness.


Much appreciated. biggrin

Hopefully the third part will be up soon. I wrote it just last night, but I'm going to give it a look over tommorow, barring unforseen distractions, of course.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:22 pm


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I adore the intensity of it`s beginning, and then the ushering forth of the leap into high drama.
Very sweet to read.
Thank you for the kindness.


Much appreciated. biggrin

Hopefully the third part will be up soon. I wrote it just last night, but I'm going to give it a look over tommorow, barring unforseen distractions, of course.


Looking forward to reading it.......
PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:25 pm


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Augusta sighs, for she knows that the interrogation is coming. That her person is going to be summed up within a long glance, if it already has not been. That a few days of togetherness would under no circumstances be something that anyone shall be considering as a logical amount of time to fall in love. That most anyone shall not believe in love at first sight, or that love is so deep, so fast.
Augusta runs these ideas over her thoughts and feels the need to roam the higher peak of the mountain. To soar, to feel the winds encompass her entire body, After all something has to exists so that she shall be feeling some happiness. Augusta feels the flow of the glorious winds, spreading out her arms to fully enjoy them, flying within their passionate embrace. As the wind reaches it`s height, she states “ Time to return to the human realm. Time to let myself to be simply myself. “
Turning bout she sails high speed to the inn. Coming to a slower speed and zooming to levitate mere inches from the frozen tundra. In doing so Augusta can see two beings outside the inn, as she arrives in at a speed that is graceful and thrilling. She smiles her best enchanting smile and hover mere feet away from the two beings that she has spied from the skies.



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:16 pm


Another question for you all:

When you start a new piece of work, do you tend to outline first so you know how things wind up, or do you just start working on the story and let things end up however they may?
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:07 am


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Another question for you all:

When you start a new piece of work, do you tend to outline first so you know how things wind up, or do you just start working on the story and let things end up however they may?



I tend to write several pages .
This is to form up the feeling of what I wish for, as the base of the work.
After which comes intense thought of whether it`s worth my time. Next arrives the general plot outline.
With that said I have written something of many chapters without any plot outline. Generally speaking these have never been finished. I consider these creative and emotional releases of ideas. This is done so that I may move forward and clear my mind.
Am not sure if that is what you wished to hear but...well....... wink

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 5:00 pm


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I tend to write several pages .
This is to form up the feeling of what I wish for, as the base of the work.
After which comes intense thought of whether it`s worth my time. Next arrives the general plot outline.
With that said I have written something of many chapters without any plot outline. Generally speaking these have never been finished. I consider these creative and emotional releases of ideas. This is done so that I may move forward and clear my mind.
Am not sure if that is what you wished to hear but...well....... wink


Hmm, those are some pretty good methods. I tend to come up with so many ideas that a lot of them eventually fall by the wayside while only a few are actually developed. I should probably give your way a try.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 5:54 pm


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I tend to write several pages .
This is to form up the feeling of what I wish for, as the base of the work.
After which comes intense thought of whether it`s worth my time. Next arrives the general plot outline.
With that said I have written something of many chapters without any plot outline. Generally speaking these have never been finished. I consider these creative and emotional releases of ideas. This is done so that I may move forward and clear my mind.
Am not sure if that is what you wished to hear but...well....... wink


Hmm, those are some pretty good methods. I tend to come up with so many ideas that a lot of them eventually fall by the wayside while only a few are actually developed. I should probably give your way a try.


You have me blush.
I am but a humble person who does scribblings.
I wish you wellnes with your efforts.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:12 pm


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Hearing him reply, allows Augusta the deep breath over receiving something for her thirst. Still she cannot shake this sensation of his nervousness, Looking up toward him she catches his gaze In her mind she knows she wants to say something, she knows it`s coming out. She always tells truth, and can be quite bold when the moment requires it. “ Are you nervous around me?” She peer into his eyes searching for what is within them.
She watches his beautiful deep pools that lead into his soul. Smiling she states “ You know, I, am but a woman. One that breaths, eats, sleeps, dreams and enjoys life. I very rarely bite. That is unless you want me too.” She voices, with a wink.



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Hearing his words brings her out of the daze of thought. She swallows, the growing dryness in her throat.“ I now understand why you are so nervous. “ She pauses looking into those intoxicating eyes. “ I do not help with that now do I. Especially since I, am so direct, honest, and look like I do. “
She sighs a small breath “ You know, men seem to enjoy my company. They are drawn to me, and most of the time it`s a lovely thing, but I do forget the edge that it provides. Forgive me for my unkindness.I have been thoughtless to you.”
Taking the glass of water within her left-hand Augusta brings the glass to her lips, to gingerly bring some within her mouth, swallowing it, then replacing the glass to the counter. “ I shall try to be more kind. Try to be a better sample of women. They are not all as scary as lil ole me..”
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