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Dork_Iruka_Ninja

PostPosted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:50 pm


Tell me when to hold you,
I'll keep you safe and warm.

Tell me when to kiss you,
And I won't let you die alone.

Tell me when you're mad,
You can vent on me.

When there is love,
It's ment to be a simple thing.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:22 pm


It's short. And rather cute!

You might want to check your spelling on 'meant' in the last line. I like the first two couplets. They rhyme in that one way with meter. (Sorry - I forgot what it was called... sweatdrop ).

Good job!

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