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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 10:36 am
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Both Approved Just need you to specify that The Best Defense's attack is Simple/Complex/whatever it is pls  
PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 11:56 am
Kondo Kaicho


Hitodama & Onibi are Denied

Soul Keeper -> You have removed the limit to the number of souls for this ability. In combination with Soul Piercing/Slashing this can get ridiculous. You could potentially one-shot drain creatures as strong Bijuu once you've gathered enough souls. You need an upper limit to the number of souls per blade.

On an aside, I'm not liking the drain. For one its not specifying how much it *is* draining, which is not good. Nor the fact that it is automatic/no activation cost.

Soul Binding -> I'm not okay with Soul Binding, because full paralysis is not an effect I want running around. Period. It's not balanced in any delivery. You may have written an "out" for it but the problem is, if for some reason they cannot pay it then they are in fact paralyzed. The basis of the tech is around paralysis and that's just not ok. Also the fact that it takes no activation is inherently problematic.

Soul Piercing/Slashing -> Their ranges are wonky at the moment. I would pair it down tbh. Make it lines instead of cones. It's plenty powerful just with its ignoring physical obstacles. Such wide-spread AoE is just problematic when combined with the ignorance.  

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PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2019 9:21 pm

Character: Sheva.
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Armour Name: Chestplate of the Goddess
Armour Type: Chestplate (( Spartan inspired ))
Armour Size: Fitted to Sheva.
Armour Weight: 30 pounds
Description: xx
- This armor is made of chakra steel and it tightly wrapped in a red leather with brass adornments. Her Village symbol is engraved on the shoulder.
Ability Summary:
β€’ ’ The Will of Ares’ : Sheva has the ability to β€˜donate’ chakra to this beautiful Chestplate. Able to store up to 100 chakra within the armor and can only be used within battle. 2 separate posts to store 10 chakra
β€’ ’ Chakra Stimulating Armor’ : When Shevas chakra reaches a critical level (100 or less). It can start returning the β€˜donated’ chakra back to her in increments of 10.
β€’ β€˜ Wall Breaker β€˜
- Rank: X (( Variable ))
Using the chakra contained in the Armor, Sheva is able to bust through walls of a C - Rank and lower depending on Rank and the chakra used.
β€’ β€˜ Explosion of The Goddess β€˜ : This is a near fatal discharge of stored chakra within the armor (max 40 chakra). The user is NOT immune to the effects of a blast from her armor, she suffers 2nd degree burns (hands and neck) and -1 in Reflex.
- Radius of explosion is equal to chakra expelled (10cha=10ft)



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PostPosted: Sun Jun 02, 2019 12:58 am
LavenderandVelvet


Needs Work

Is it very light, light, medium, or heavy? Per the guild mechanics?

If wall breaker is variable, wouldn't it be C - E variable? X implies it can go beyond C rank which its description does not allude to.

explosion of the goddess is missing information, what rank is it expelled at? Is it variable?  

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2019 6:14 am

Character: Kojiro Kanzaki
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Weapon Name: Versa-tool
Weapon Type: Metal Pole
Weapon Size: 36 Inches
Weapon Weight: 1.5 LBS
Description: The Versa-tool is a special made weapon crafted for Kojiro Kanzaki. This weapon, by request was shaped as a baton like pole for it's base setting. This weapon has several mechanics that allow it to shift it's shape to allow Kojiro to utilize a multitude of several weapon arts without having to switch weapons constantly. At the pommel of the rod is a button that is held for for a length of time to transition the weapons forms. This weapon is capable of changing it's shape by using small parts that shift and expand from within the pole. It's capable of extending into a pole measuring up to six feet, a straight sword measuring no more than four feet which creates a blade by compressing it's sides into an edge, a tonfa by extending a rod from it's side to function as a handle and a Kama ( Sickle part of a Kusarigama ) by folding it's form to create the scythe like hook and folding it's edges to create a blade. This weapon carries the lightning affinity and grants a mild increase in speed when in use.
Ability Summary:
β€’ Chakra Weapon Creation: By paying a C Rank amount of chakra, the user can create chakra based weapons from the Versa-tool. This is commonly used to create chains in conjunction with the Kama variant or a chakra whip in base form to allow the use of the Jaryu. This weapon cannot be destroyed by techniques of methods lower in rank or potency to itself.
β€’ Weapon Shadow Clone: The user forms a hand sign while wielding this weapon. A shadow clone quality copy is made. This is commonly used for Kojiro's dual wielding styles. This requires an S Ranked amount of chakra. This weapon cannot be destroyed by techniques of methods lower in rank or potency to itself.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 06, 2019 5:03 am
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Name: Shoku Shokushu: Sumimasen Meiwaku [ Eclipse Tentacle: I'm sorry for the trouble ] , {Literal: Meal Tentacle: Trouble Anti-Brush}
Crafting Status:To Be Made
Crafting Type:Legendary
Weapon Type:
Two: Sumi-ee Brushes one ornate and one plain in design they are both essentially held in a manner that could equate to holding two flails in one's hands. One is engraved with the kanji heaven the other plain looking one hell.

Weapon Height: 4ft each respectively from end to head
Weapon Weight: 8lbs each concentrated at the head

Description: Toso's style and aesthetic and approach to combat has always been creative with a desire to create. This is evidenced in his keystone technique and his other abilities which capitalize on creativity and the unconventional. Simultaneously as a creator there will often be times when those creations need to be erased due to mistakes. Harkening to its name the drawing the Eclipse Tentacles usually involves Toso apologizing to whomever it may be that he would resort to having to use them against. In short the Eclipse Tentacles were never designed to be used but made in the off chance they would become necessary. In the event of their use, however, they fulfill what's expected of them with frightening efficiency. While they are unable to use Toso's other inks they were designed to refine and for lack of a better term 'ferment' his chakra to create their own distinct ink blend that would prove difficult to do naturally without using them as the conduit.

Ability Summary:
[+2 Strength DR]
[Element: None]

Shoku Shokushu :Tengoku {Eclipse Tentacles: Heaven}
Rank / Cost: Mimic + Hard Concentrations
β€’ The ornate brush labeled Heaven carries a constant flow of white ink, this ink is exactly like that of the ink used when a brush is removed from Master Celestial Artists Armory. Heaven is not only in a constant celestial brush state said item provides but has the ability to 'mimic' ninjutsu. This is done similarly to how hard formless style mimics other formless styles. Per each post of accumulated concentration dedicated to hard mental Heaven is given the ability to copy a previously used jutsu that occurred in the fight or if the concentration was gathered before hand possibly on the fly up to a rank equal to posts of concentrations i.e 3 concentrations means up to C-rank ninjutsu can be mimic'd . All costs match the cost of the original, its strength also matches the original ultimately leading into a net zero outcome for both sides at all times in collisions however, it does not retain properties of said jutsu, example being flames created are not hot and do not burn, mimic'd ice does not inflict frostbite etc. Like Hard Mental this copying only lasts until the end of battle, in which case mimic'd abilities are no longer retained.

Shoku Shokushu :Jigoku {Eclipse Tentacles: Hell}
Rank: [X]
β€’ The looking plain brush labeled Jigoku carries a constant flow of extremely thick black ink. When the brush is swung or used an enhanced version of what seems to be Ink-blade edge lingers in the air for a single post equal to the rank of the technique that was used with the brush without the rank deficiency. However, unlike the normal Ink-blade edge the ink on the head of Jigoku is no simple ink. Where Tengoku creates Jigoku destroys. Anything this thick black ink comes into contact with, so long as it's the superior in collisions will quite literally be erased from existence. Example being should this thick black ink cover ones extremities, while the process is painless in that moment that extremity will no longer exist. Imagine if you covered you arm in paint and rather than the paint sticking to your arm it causes your arm to disappear. Needless to say you'd start bleeding out. Unlike simply cutting said arm off the ink equates to ridding of it entirely. If a line were drawn on say someone's torso. The entire front of that individuals torso would disappear and reveal and expose that individuals organs similar to being flayed or being on an operating table and rather than close you up the doctor decided to cut away the excess muscle and skin. Needless to say the experience is not pleasant thus living up to the technique and the brushes name. In short it rids the world of physical things as if one were to erase something with a pencil. Clothing impedes this, process but doesn't stop it, custom items are not erased as doing so is an affront to the spirit of the brushes respect towards individuals own pursuits to create. It erases in layers, clothing, skin, muscle, and bone. Only when something is fully immersed or a full rotation is made can it bypass layers.

Shoku Shokushu : Tosoukurui {呗装狂い} {Eclipse Tentacles: Painting Crazy}
β€’ When the heads of the two brushes combine or in the instance where the black and white inks combine the resulting ink becomes a swirling incomprehensible color that seems spacial and galactic in nature. Like several stars dancing in liquid cosmos. Entrancing but maddening all at the same time. This ink to any exposed to it including Toso to some degree begins to become subject to a sudden loss in conscious thought as though their thoughts, goals, and other inspirations start mixing and or become clouded with one another as though something else was telling them things in cryptic ways that don't make sense. Toso himself is used to this but most others are not used to having their head filled with things like 'three pickles drying the rain' The ink first and foremost when making contact produces amnestic effects. An individual will begin to forget what it is they are doing when it makes contact. Essentially it functions similarly to Hojo ink blends its effects increasing with each subsequent addition.
1: Forgets the last technique they used and saw
2: Forgets who their allies and enemies are
3: Begins to forget what it is they're doing
4: Begins to forget themselves and who they are


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Name: Makai Daihon {Abyssal Script}
Crafting Type: Legendary
Crafting Status:Not Made/ Unlocked
Weapon Type: Grimoire

Weapon Height: 1.25 ft
Weapon Weight: 1.8 lbs

Description: The Abyssal Script was an object kept personally by a Hojo that Toso had taken in. An object that he was formerly given as an heirloom from a legacy of his deep-dwelling ancestors. The Abyssal Script, however, was said to never be opened and to be kept far away from civilization as the powers it contains was deemed too dangerous for mortal man. It is unknown when the Abyssal Script first arrived or when and whom made it but it had since resided in the bottom of the Verdant Abyss in the care of Nohr until his eventual exchanging of it with the man that saved his life. Indeed once opened the Abyssal Script will impart its knowledge unto the one who reads its first few words before becoming blank and giving that person a dangerous tool, a dangerous tool which requires both ink..and blood. The original owner unbeknownst to both Nohr and Toso was an Ukyo, and Ukyo whom had quite the affiliation with what was otherwise known as the Cult of the Deep Ones said to have been long lost. For once the Abyssal Script is opened all are but actors in the world of life. It is immediately known when the script is opened for typically a large amount of energy seems to burst outward enveloping a thread. The Abyssal Script can only be opened when a Key for it is made using one's own blood. When closed and locked it cannot be opened aside from the one in possession of the key.

Ability Summary:
[+2 Reflex DR]
[Element: None]

Jaakuna GΕ«wa: {Wicked Fable}
Rank - [X]
Description: The [X] cost of the technique is paid with both stamina and chakra in equal amounts. Not unlike the Ukyo ability [Painted Sky] when the Abyss Script is opened it encases an entire thread in an invisible layer of manipulation where when the outer reaches of it are reached it will feel as though passing through water and appear to be clouded ink. From here, all entities in a thread will be exposed. Not their location but merely their names. A writing utensil emerges from the pages and barbed tentacle-like appendage appears at its end which immediately and to a degree painfully injects itself into one of the user's veins. Typically in the wrist or forearm. From here the user then knows that they may write. From here. What is written occurs with varying effect. Example:
The user writes
"Kagerou found herself in an unexpected predicament when as she crossed the street a stranger bumped into her dropping manure all over her nice clothes." Suddenly a man who was not there before suddenly as if naturally appears and does just this, however, the narrative changes depending on how the individual in the narrative interacts. i.e Kagerou dodges the manure the rest of the narrative fills itself in with. "Or that is what would have happened. But the woman's agileness was simply too on point." The Abyss Script essentially rather than pictures uses words to produce effects similar if not exactly like that of [Painted Sky] where all incidents created are at their root ink. The Abyss script, however, cannot directly affect its 'actors' i.e "Kagerou was walking one day and suddenly she died." or "Kagerou just happened into the office and burst into flames" would not work and would simply disappear from the pages. It can, however, create semi-illusory manifestations of which the 'actors' believe. I.e "Kagerou was wearing a nice well to do evening gown." To Kagerou and all the actors, she would appear to be wearing said evening gown but still be gaining the effects of any armor she was wearing etc. A weapon can be reskinned but still function the same as if it were still said weapon. The strength, speed, and what not of these manifests are equal to the [X]-rank paid. Manifests which would incur an element do not incur said elemental properties unless the user themselves has access to said elemental properties. Clearly, a person is in no position to properly fight when wielding the Abyssal Script via normal means and thus is also subject to the same limitations as [Painted Sky] when under pressure.

Kurai kōjutsu: {Dark Dictations}
Rank - [X]
Description: The user may create any manifestation of ink and or invoke a technique from the script itself to attack a target similar if not akin to Choujuu Giga. However, these manifestations can occur anywhere in the thread that the Abyss Script envelops. To do so they must refer to the technique with it in mind when composing a sentence. Names and descriptions can be used for particular targets. "The waves rose and crashed against the wayward traveler with hair of blonde!" This turns what would otherwise be techniques requiring handsigns etc into verbal proclamations. It is a more linear and simple version of Jaakuna GΕ«wa: {Wicked Fable} and does not impart the additional Stamina toll that it does because of this and also avoids the rank weakness foe being under duress...however, it may prove difficult to compose a full sentence when such is the case.

Otogibanashi keimusho: {Fairytale Prison}
Rank - S+
Description: Either using the technique itself or an alternative method to seal a target the Abyssal Script also functions as a scroll. The original owner would often use Tiger Staring Bullet. When the technique is used the pages of the book opens and pages begin to fly wildly in what may seem infinitely in a vortex. Individuals objects etc will then begin to start being sucked into the pages and sealed inside the book. If the sealing is successful. The owner of the Abyssal Script will then see all members or individuals sealed within as though looking at an animated picture book on the left page and on the right page there will be writing explaining what it is the individuals inside are doing. When the sealing begins the user can imagine the world it intends to trap the targets in and as such this is the world those sealed inside become trapped in. From here the user may write whatever to influence those sealed inside. Even things that would directly affect the 'actors' within, strengths of events inside determined by the Chakra Stamina sacrifice the user imparts. However, hard effects such as 'x was stabbed and died' are still prohibited. Escaping the world is the same requirement as it would be to escape a scroll that had sealed a person inside. Typically these worlds follow a 'genre'. Due to its nature time flows differently within the Abyssal Script. Years could be perceived as minutes or the vise versa. In a sense, if used for good, could prove an excellent way to exponentially train an individual in a short amount of time. The entrapment can be sustained of course by paying the equivalent amount to counter the escape attempt. However, with the user paying double the total resource in these cases, its more often than not they'll be exhausting themselves first.


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Name: Haru keshiki {Spring View}
Crafting Type: Special
Crafting Status:Not Made
Tech Type: Kiseru Pipe

Tech Height: 1.6 ft
Tech Weight: 0.6 lbs

Description: The name was decided upon via the famous line spoken by the legendary Goemon Ishikawa told in kabuki fables where he is seen smoking a large silver pipe. "The spring view is worth a thousand gold pieces, or so they say, but 'tis too little, too little. These eyes of Goemon rate it worth ten thousand!". Haru keshiki isn't designed to smoke hair tobacco like it's predecessors however, instead it functions as a bubble pipe for Soap Bubble Ninjutsu allowing more fine manipulations of the Bubble formations, it does this by using special mechanisms where when a button is pressed it determines the future functions. Not very useful when used as a weapon.

Ability Summary:

Harunoniji: {Spring Rainbow}
Rank - [Augment]
Description: When using any [Shabondama] technique when a soap bubble bursts with ten or twenty feet of an opponent the bubble will induce visual hallucinations and cause an individual's perceptions of colors to start becoming jumbled causing them to see things in a rainbow-like a gradient similar to soap bubbles. The intensity of the effect is reliant on the amount of chakra used to augment the bubbles. An appropriate Kai is required to snap out of the ongoing effect.
E- Rainbow Gradient Applied to Vision
D- Rainbow colored Figments Appear
C- Rainbow colored Figments of the target appear
B- Rainbow colored Figments of the user appear making discerning the true target difficult without sensory assistance. Anywhere from 3-10 figments may appear.
A- Rainbow colored Figments of the user taking actions appear making discerning the true target difficult without sensory assistance and increasing paranoia. Anywhere from 10-20 figments may appear.
S- Severe visual hallucinations occur. Several hundreds of Figments may start to appear. This essentially starts resulting in a psychedelic level of hallucinogenic drug intake. Fears may manifest, anxiety may increase, conversations with people who aren't real may occur. Entirely decided by the target.

Nijinagare: {Rainbow Flow}
Rank - [Augment]
Description: When using any [Shabondama] technique allows manipulation of the size and shape of the bubbles produced. Thus allowing for much more intricate designs. These sizes follow the same progression and uniqueness as [Ink-well Formation] and [Choujuu Giga] when it comes to Rank, Number, Size, and Power. However, like [Shabondama] techniques will last until popped or dismissed.


 

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2019 4:55 pm

Character: Naoki Uchiha
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Enchantment Rank: Legendary Custom Enchantment with 3 Abilities
Enchantment Name: Heavenly Defying Soul Enchantment Container
Enchantment Type: Fuuin
Description: A Enchantment Scroll that contains ten million inscriptions and took Naoki five years to write.. A fuuin inscription array container so powerful it can house a soul or part of a soul. Once at least half of a person's soul is housed in the soul fuuin container. It can then be placed in a vessel. A vessel that can be just a normal doll all the way to something as complex as a corps. Using this on living people often destroys the vessel. Once the container is housed in a vessel it turns the vessel into a perfect clone of the housed soul. This perfect clone stands above all others. The soul scroll inscriptions creating a full chakra network within the vessel. Fuuin inscription dictating all the actions like lines of code in a program. Depending on how much of a soul the container is housing. It takes that percent of chakra and stamina away from the user permanently to give to he vessel when a perfect soul clone is made. This portion of chakra and stamina can only be recovered if the person soul becomes one once more.
Ability Summary:
β€’ This clone shares all of abilities of the housed soul including DR's and has a metal link with them.
β€’ This clone has no limitations on where or how far apart it can be from the original.
β€’ This perfect clone can be maintained as long as the vessel holds together and the soul container remains in the vessel.


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 15, 2019 11:31 pm
Kondo Kaicho


Needs Work, the Versa Tool would take time to switch between weapon forms, an activation should work.

Aside, is it limited to the 4 forms listed?

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Hazaan

PostPosted: Sun Jun 16, 2019 1:30 am
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We gotta talk about these... Needs Discussion  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 17, 2019 9:45 am

Character: Naoki Uchiha
Link to profile: [x]
Weapon Rank: Legendary
Weapon Name: Heavenly Defying Soul Container
Weapon Type: Fuuin
Description: A Enchantment Scroll that contains ten million inscriptions and took Naoki five years to write.. A fuuin inscription array container so powerful it can house a soul or part of a soul. Once at least half of a person's soul is housed in the soul fuuin container. It can then be placed in a vessel. A vessel that can be just a normal doll all the way to something as complex as a corps. Using this on living people often destroys the vessel. Once the container is housed in a vessel it turns the vessel into a perfect clone of the housed soul. This perfect clone stands above all others. The soul scroll inscriptions creating a full chakra network within the vessel. Fuuin inscription dictating all the actions like lines of code in a program. Depending on how much of a soul the container is housing. It takes that percent of chakra and stamina away from the user permanently to give to he vessel when a perfect soul clone is made. This portion of chakra and stamina can only be recovered if the person soul becomes one once more.
Ability Summary:
β€’ This clone shares all of abilities of the housed soul including DR's and has a metal link with them.
β€’ This clone has no limitations on where or how far apart it can be from the original.
β€’ This perfect clone can be maintained as long as the vessel holds together and the soul container remains in the vessel.


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This really hurts my soul that a better solution couldn't be made..

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 17, 2019 2:22 pm
Daisuke Kaicho

KAY BOSS YOU READY TO GET THIS STARTED? We're gonna make this work.

1) So first off the clone is going to need a rank and just be generally more defined. Which is actually a good thing because if you give it a rank it means it can survive damage up to that rank. At this face value it would be a clone of you which means it would die to any B and a few C's.

2) It can't have a infinite duration but you can give it a long one due to its nature. Our longest lasting jutsu is I believe 30 posts so don't go past that unless you're giving something up.

3) The telepathy has brought concerns among the crew but I don't consider it a problem. Just give it like a limit to the same thread and it should be fine. The clone cannot help you auto learn you're in a gen either.

4) I suggest you take a page from Reg's book and make the clone have its usual activations while in battle with you but while not in the same thread allow it to get a normal three activations so that it fits the whole 'perfect clone' type of thing you have going on!

5) There's just too much possible DR gained from this. I get that it's split up between you two and all but especially since it's going to need a rank now you can only let it have the same amount of possible DR that rank can give. The numbers should be on the first page of the custom jutsu page.

6) Finally you just need to come up with something to handle what happens with chakra costs while it is away from you. I would suggest allowing you to either impart it with a amount of your chakra and stamina so that it can do stuff while you're away or you can let it siphon off your chakra while it is close to you. Just combine these abilities into one wording and have the desired method be chosen at its creation.

7) Is there a limit to these perfect clones? I know it is written like single but I want to make sure.

That's all I can think of for now but once these get worked on I feel like it will be perfect! Let me know if you need help with writing anything for it and I'll be more than happy help you make it frickin awesome C:
 
PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2019 7:00 pm

Character: Naoki Uchiha
Link to profile: [x]
Weapon Rank: Legendary
Weapon Name: Heavenly Defying Soul Container
Weapon Type: Fuuin
Description: A Enchantment Scroll that contains ten million inscriptions and took Naoki five years to write.. A fuuin inscription array container so powerful it can house a soul or part of a soul. Once at least half of a person's soul is housed in the soul fuuin container. It can then be placed in a vessel. A vessel that can be just a normal doll all the way to something as complex as a corps. Using this on living people often destroys the vessel. Once the container is housed in a vessel it turns the vessel into a perfect soul doll of the housed soul. This perfect doll of the housed soul stands above all others. The soul scroll inscriptions creating a full chakra network within the vessel. Fuuin inscription dictating all the actions like lines of code in a program. Depending on how much of a soul the container is housing. It takes that percent of chakra and stamina away from the user permanently to give to he vessel when a perfect soul clone is made. Along with splitting passive DR's between the two and both the parts are one body rank lower when split. This portion of chakra, stamina, DR's and body rank can only be recovered if the person soul becomes one once more. The soul doll also cant collect mission points but can still do missions and recive other rewards if stated.
Ability Summary:
β€’ This clone shares all of abilities of the housed soul including DR's and has a metal link with them.
β€’ This clone has no limitations on where or how far apart it can be from the original.
β€’ This perfect clone can be maintained as long as the vessel holds together and the soul container remains in the vessel.


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2019 7:07 pm
Daisuke Kaicho

Approved on a trial run

With the balancing stipulations that I required of splitting the soul halving DR, resources, and lowering the body rank by one, I would say that this is balanced. Since this soul splitting is a clone in all but name it should not have a duration or traveling restriction as is standard among all clone techniques in the guild currently so the custom rule on duration is rather moot in this specific case. However, we are monitoring this technique and will re-evaluate in case of abuse.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jul 02, 2019 12:02 am
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Okay, character is officially approved, now to try for the custom weapon for the Expert discipline.. Also, how would I go about creating the Keystone technique? I was looking through various rules and systems and didn't see anything covering that..



Character: Shinji Gyukimaru Ketsueki
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Weapon Name: Yuugure
Weapon Type: Variable Scythe
Weapon Size: Base length is 60 inches (5 feet, or 1.5 meters)
Weapon Weight: around 10 pounds
Description: Yuugure is a scythe made completely out of various metallic compounds, with the snaith of the weapon having the appearance comparable to a human spine. Meaning, it is segmented and bone-like in appearance, with slight protrusions from each of the segments opposite of the blade. The blade of the scythe is 24 inches long and is dark black in color, with what looks like a bird skull acting as the conduit to attach blade to snaith. The beak of the skull extends out past the snaith slightly, but is too dull to act as an extension of the weapons combat ability.
Ability Summary:
β€’ Expansion: By paying [5] Chakra, the segments of Yuugure's snaith detach and reveal a cord inside that changes the scythe into a bladed whip. The range of the weapon is up to 5 meters (16 feet). When the scythe extends, the blade shifts to where it is straight up and down rather than curving to the side. By paying another [5], the segments retract and the weapon returns to it's orignal shape.
β€’ Vampiric Slash: Each time Yuugure makes direct contact with an opponent, it drains [5] Chakra from them and transfers it to Shinji.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:02 pm
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Name: T-series: 5Q1-D
Crafting Type: Legendary Armor
Crafting Status:Not Made
Armor Type: Light

Description: A reinforced spandex and polymer suit, the lenses thermoplastic polyurethane and the rest of the suit interwoven nylon 6 with tungsten lined reinforcements. Suffice to say the suit is incredibly tight fitting because of this. A combination of armorsmithing and technology to result in an armor that would put the UHV to shame. Additionally, the suit's primary and most notable feature is its capability of functioning as additional protection for Toso's extra limbs where they can then inhabit these silver-based shell casings which appear as divots on the back of the suit until a limb enters it to provide the prosthesis locomotion. The decision to use Tungsten was to avoid magnetic tampering and for the limbs to be heat resistant as the alloy does not conduct heat as well as other metals, similarly the decision to make the armor polymer based and tungsten lined was to reduce the effectiveness of Toso's otherwise weakness. Reinforced, the limbs are given auxiliary prongs for finer manipulations while an opening and closing valve allow for the ink to be fired from the mouths of Toso's extra limbs with more precise and devastating efficiency by increasing pressure behind its release. Because the suit would typically restrict access to being capable of spitting from his own mouth for inking methods the fibrous nature of the suit has what is equitable to 'pores' so that said inking methods are still capable of being used and the valve releases for his limbs relied upon for more projectile inking methods.

Ability Summary:
[+2 Fort DR]
[Element: Fire {Fire Resistant}]

Ginkoki: {Silver Limb}
Rank - X
Description: Each independent prosthesis when inhabited equates to the defensive properties of a large shield. By imparting extra chakra above that of a technique that would otherwise damage the prosthesis it can then further endure techniques that would otherwise induce damage by charging themselves with a coat of protective chakra. The protective chakra can form into the projection of shield. Allowing their use with shield techniques and being treated as a shield capable of defending against the X-rank paid subject to degradation and being destroyed in cases of superior collisions requiring costs be paid again. If the limbs are used for anything else or any other technique all limbs simultaneously end this shield state and the cost must be repaid again in full.

Shimekiri atsuryoku: {Deadline Pressure}
Rank - [None]
Description:Unable to pressurize inking methods in his mouth unless it's one of his limbs mouths, the suit has been fitted so that it may emulate this feature by pressurizing ink produced from the pores of the palms and wrists to release pressurized ink this way allowing it to emulate [Stream Spit] and [Snipe Spit] in capability but in a more controlled manner allowing finer pressure manipulation without the risk of failure. Because of these finer pressurized controls, the user can use ejectors as a propellant. {Think FLUD from Super Mario Sunshine} For as long as a blend is sustained via this method per post by busying at minimum two limbs the Hojo can launch themselves or hover via ink. The user can in tandem evade and project ink simultaneously implied when firing an attack. ((May Evade whilst also launching said pressurized attack via [Stream], [Cluster] or [Snipe] spit due to recoil, for collisions this evasion is treated as the rank of the technique used for the propulsion. However, the propulsion is at minimum 10 meters per rank and careless use could easily cause self-injury))


Ikakoki Fuuin: {Squid Limb Seal}
Rank - [None]
Description: The extremities now capable of finer matriculations can allow the user extra mobility in attaching to walls with more finesse. The enhanced limbs come with several handy tools of which it can reproduce, essentially an omni tool for common household requirements. Hammers, lighters, screwdrivers, vacuums, dusters etc. However, its real feat is found in the fuuin which allows it to do so. Essentially a seal connected to the master scroll that is Toso's attire. The Squid Limb Seal allows 'channeling' and 'emitting' of existing ninjutsu through its faces once the appropriate chakra is molded through them. Rather than release a technique immediately, the limb can store the technique and the activation required to release for later use. However, if the limb currently storing a technique is struck with a force of equal rank to the stored technique, both that technique, the stored activation, and the chakra molded for its use is lost. Storing a technique, of course, requires an activation where in turn nothing occurs on that activation bus said techniques storage. Sensors can detect the molded amount of chakra in a said limb.
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Name: T-series: 0C-T09
Crafting Type: Advanced Tech {For Village}
Crafting Status:Not Made
Battery Capacity 160

Description: The 0C-T09 is an advanced prosthetic that attaches to ones back. Up to two can be worn comfortably on the lower and upper back assuming there is nothing inhibiting, and when worn allows for overall greater utility by conferring extra limbs or allowing those who have lost their limbs a second chance. They are by no means perfect but sturdy enough to get a job done

Kōyō: {Utility}
Rank - [None]
Description: The extra limbs allow extra limbs for the use of Bukijutsu and Taijutsu, However, using them to do so incurs an additional B-rank cost in Chakra that cannot be reduced for this function. The extra limbs do not confer extra activations simply greater range and utility. The limbs draw from the battery first, a battery can only be refilled when out of combat. For all future uses, it will draw from the main chakra pool until the battery is refilled. The durability of the limbs aside when being used with a technique by default is B and will resist and endure attacks of said rank or lower without incurring damages but is treated as though it were a shield in terms of Degradation starting at B. However, They are quite heavy for every [1] a wearer lacks in [12] [Strength] the difference is deducted from their [Speed]
 
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