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 Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:12 am
I checked the layering and unfortunately the laurels layer over top of the red wings. Kinda overpowers the head with white (remember to always check the layering! ^_^) I removed all the white and added a bit more red and gold - do you mind the changes? My feedback for the first one remains the same (minus the part about the double items) - "the colours don't really match up here either
For the second one, it's super important to check the layering because what tektek shows you is not always correct - I checked and below is how it will actually look. It's not a bad start either way but again, the colours don't match very well - the white in the face stands out quite a bit and the different blues are a little distracting. I wold probably focus on the browns and greens for this one.
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:41 am
I'm a bit confused. Did this one make it onto the favourites list or not? Also, here's something new. The Gimpi bag will layer below the Pico Urns sash and the belts. Other than that, layering should be as shown. I'm doubtful about the Bonewearer tail...
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 11:57 am
I don't mind the changes! Here's some more...
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:38 pm
Ah ha! Look at you all observant and whatnot...yes that was supposed to be submitted and I totally missed it. *added* ^_^
I like the base but you're right I'm not 100% on the bone tail. Which in turn makes me wanna switch up the death queen crown as well as the gloves. Other than that really liking the brightness - maybe just add a couple more items? <3Okie dokie - I like the combo of the colours, the sash/belt is just a little too space consuming for me - I made a couple changes, do you mind them?
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 2:14 pm
i think i'll try once more for your sake :3 and then i think i'm ready to start my own tektek contest at this guild >w<
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 3:18 pm
Oh please be sure to let me know when you do! Love to participate <3
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 3:19 pm
RabidKitten Oh please be sure to let me know when you do! Love to participate <3 oh sure -^__^- i will!
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 5:56 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 7:59 pm
I don 't mind the changes.
I'll make some more soon, I start school Monday so it's going to be a little crazy with all the new teachers and classes.
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 3:26 am
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:33 am
not really xD you just take 2 or 3 colors and just try to put on as many items as possible xD
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:34 am
i tried once more layering:
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:11 am
Definitely better ^_^ I'd like to see more of the orange+yellow at the bottom and I think that'll do it.Good luck with your school tomorrow <3Clutter CAN be difficult when you're just starting out. The avi itself is still pretty simple - the best way that I personally do clutter is to choose a few colours (2-3 like ucaldra said is a good place to start), then I go through all my inventory items of that colour (s) and unequip them to the side for easy access. Once I have all the items I like I pile them on until I have an effect I like.
For this one the colours don't match very well (mostly the purple sthe stands out on the belt) but the blues are different hues as well. Also the hat has a LOT of blue whereas it's only thinly placed elsewhere on the avi. Not trying to be overly critical by any means - just giving you all the feedback I can so you can focus on those points when making a cluttered avi <3Oh I like this avi A LOT. The only two things that really stand out for me at all is the brown in the feathers as well as the shorts. The clutter is perfect everywhere else on the avi but then there's a big space that's open where the shorts are. I know they are hard to layer with *grrr*
EDIT: I made a couple changes - do you mind them? The hair layers better *stupid tektek*
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:17 am
RabidKitten Oh I think that's super cute - I've seen some of those items used a couple times in the contest now (which is totally fine and neat because I often have issues incorporating them into my avis) Submitted! Please feel fee to try again <3 Hello, I just want to inform you that I changed my username. smile )
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:17 am
RabidKitten Oh I like this avi A LOT. The only two things that really stand out for me at all is the brown in the feathers as well as the shorts. The clutter is perfect everywhere else on the avi but then there's a big space that's open where the shorts are. I know they are hard to layer with *grrr*
EDIT: I made a couple changes - do you mind them? The hair layers better *stupid tektek* xD the changes are okay, I really fought with the carousel, but i really liked the hair and so i tried to maintain it with adding caroudel and gogh, but now it looks better :3
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