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 Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 10:20 am
Behold, I have many fixes! blaugh  Summer(Fixed) Clutter(Fixed) Clutter(Fixed) Clutter(Fixed) Clutter(Fixed)
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 10:50 am
LOL You sure do ^_^
Summer: Oh yes I like this one - nice blending ^_^
Clutter: I like how the gold is more evenly spaced <3 Maybe drop the sword and just add some more near the top?
Clutter 2: I see why you chose the singular wing to balance the sword but I think it actually tips it a bit too far to the right. Maybe lose it and hyst see if there is a different white item? Or you might not even need it ^_^
Clutter 3: Nice, smooth balance. Submitted ^_^
Clutter 4: I still just feel like her shape is weird to me. I'm sorry, I wish I could explain it better to give you some clearer direction.
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 12:38 pm
New clutter. Or maybe summer. IDK. You tell me xD
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 1:32 pm
Edited my Cluttered entries: Also got some new ones here! Gold Shop Cluttered
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 3:22 pm
Edits!
Clutter(Fixed)
Clutter(Fixed)
I'm going to go back and see if I can edit any more... xp
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 5:55 pm
There's really nothing else I can do with this avatar. Clutter:
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:17 am
Clutter: Normally I don't choose for the contestant but I would definitely say this falls under clutter. I like it a lot but think it could use more colour balance with the red and especially the yellow ^_^Clutter: I like the revisions but think it is still a bit too bulky and could use some more colour balance. A good idea might be to check out the first page to see which clutter submissions made it to the favourites so you can see the type of clutter I'm looking for ^_^
Clutter 2: Same feedback as the previous one.
Gold Shop: I really like this one - b&w avis are always a fav of mine. I think it could use a bit more white in the torso if possible.
Clutter 3: This avi isn't very cluttered - maybe focus more on item balance and adding more things?
Clutter 4: Again this isn't really cluttered and the colours don't match. Please feel free to revise and resubmit though.Clutter: I like! Submitted.
Clutter 2: Nice work balancing the three colours out ^_^ Submitted.Gold Shop: I think you might be right with this avi - it's a really good base but maybe there just aren't enough gold shop items to finish it off.
Clutter: Ohhhh I love the use of the new shoes. The level of clutter is fine just need to work on the colour matching - there are a few different shades of pink in there ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 9:04 am
Here's the clutter entry edited: And here's a new summer entry:
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 12:06 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:21 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 1:56 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 5:43 pm
Clutter: I like the revisions but the falling petals are a bit distracting. I think it could use a but more red as well - it's pretty heavy in the torso area.
Summer: It doesn't really make me (personally) think of summer and it could use some colour balance.
Clutter: Other than adding the bottoms it doesn't look like much has been changed on the first one. The white gloves, brown book and hair all stand out to me. Also the wings make it a bit too bulky.
Clutter 2; I like the edits here but it's still not a very cluttered avi. Maybe add more items and keep focusing on colour balance? The shoes and hand items don't blend quite as well.
Clutter 3: Same feedback as above one. The golds don't quite match up though it is an interesting avi.
Clutter 4: It's a cute avi but doesn't really qualify as clutter. I'd like to see less background/companion items and focus the items more on the avi itself.
Gold Shop: This is coming along nicely ^_^ Maybe a bit more focus on the head (a white item?) Also just looking it over I'm distracted by the checkered scar coupled with the striped leggings. Maybe one or the other? ^_^Clutter: I still like the colour combination but there are still three different shades of pink - keep working on the colour balance?Summer: Cute avi and it definitely makes me think of summer but it's very busy and could use some work on ensuring the colours match.
Summer 2: Oh I love this idea of a picnic on the beach - if you worked on the colour balance I think this would be great.
Summer 3: Pretty, but same as above on needing to balance out the different colours.
Summer 4: Same as above feedback.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:52 pm
Just One entry today... sweatdrop Clutter(....Uh... This one'e a bit creepy... gonk )
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:08 pm
My clutter edit: Deciding to dump the summer one.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:10 pm
Fixed again Clutter Gold shop Decided to go with stripes; check wouldn't work
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