Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[PendragonX9]

well to start I'd like to say that i love the gold and white, unfortunately the hilt of the swords breaks that wonderful theme, and though it dose go with your cute little flaming friend there that's about all it goes with  

[xDarkPisces]

Simple and dark. I like it, though I think it needs some other fire bit to the right to balance it out.  

[Roland Karloseth]

A nice color combo Pisces has going on there, I approve 3nodding  

[Taeryyn]

I like the general look you have going on, kind of looks like an avenging angel/demon from hell x3, but it's a bit unbalanced. I think some darker shoes would actually make a world of difference, and perhaps a different belt. Normally I'd say you need some other source of red, what with the eyes, but the way you have it now, they stand out better and are the real focal point of the avatar. ^^  

[Kire Kaysan]

It is a good black and orange avi Taeryyn. I don't like the goddess gift neckless, because the gold stands out too much.  

[Kusaragi]

Nice. I love how you used the Lotus and turned around, it's like you're facing your opponent, the only way I could see this any better is if there was a shirt that had Japanese characters on the back of the shirt like Sagara Sanosuke.

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[Elcia]

Sano!!! I liked him immensely biggrin

Kusa you look like you've just walked back from the dead and that walking coal sprite looks scared out of its flaming little mind by you! I wouldn't change a thing.  

[Kusaragi]

Back to Elcia classic I see, I like the dress you choose to base this one off of. (I get so many of the silky dresses I think the servers think I'm female xd ) I wouldn't change anything if I were you.  

[Erverain]

Very colorful, and I can't really see any thematic problems. Maybe a background would help, but then there would be quite a lot of green... I don't think I can fault this one.  

[Kaz Likes Cookies]

needs a little pop. seems a bit bland to me. You need some kind of focal point.  

[124-C]

The ribbons on the stockings really detract from the overall look. I like that you have some red down there, but it's too much and is too frilly.  

[Kusaragi]

The rose blossom adds a nice contrast to your black and gold theme.

I like the glasses you used as well. I just am not sure about your penguin companion.

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[Hadaka Kyoujin]

I like everything BUT the spear and the thing beside you, other than that, everything's A-OK  

[Kusaragi]

I do like the look you have, it has potential, however that means it also isn't "Done" in my eyes, it seems like you need a little more. It seems to me like you need something else on your chest/stomach area, something to draw or add to the tattoos you already have.[/myTwoCents]  

[invisible-weirdo]

Very nice. I'm really liking all the colors 3nodding Though I do wish your little buddy had some more green or blue so he could match. But that's something beyond your control so oh well.