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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:40 pm
You know what I think (besides I'm a pest to make you go back and change it) is that I don't have enough yellow items to really help even it out. But I think maybe dropping the green and yellow would make it easier to make the avi come together?. You are tottaly right...It really looks so much better without the yellow...thank you. heart 
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 11:50 pm
Ohh I like the first one <3 Submitted!
The second one still isn't doing it for me - I think for this particular one we might call it a lost cause (not that it ISN"T cute mind you...just not for me) Of course you can - always happy to have new people join up!
For this contest the two things I'm really looking for are colour balance as well as clutter. The colour certainly isn't BAD on this one though some spots need a little work (very light up top but more dark at the bottom) Also several of my items were used more than once, please give the rules a read through and feel free to re-enter <3
I really think the changes look good! I made a few more, if you don't mind them happy to submit?
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 12:20 am
Here's my entry. Hope you'll like it. heart
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 8:11 am
Oh I think that's super cute - I've seen some of those items used a couple times in the contest now (which is totally fine and neat because I often have issues incorporating them into my avis) Submitted! Please feel fee to try again <3
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 3:09 pm
I really think the changes look good! I made a few more, if you don't mind them happy to submit?Wow, it looks very unique heart Of couse, very happy 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 5:25 pm
The Changes are just fine ~
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:10 pm
RabidKitten Oh I think that's super cute - I've seen some of those items used a couple times in the contest now (which is totally fine and neat because I often have issues incorporating them into my avis) Submitted! Please feel fee to try again <3 Well, thank you. I really had fun making it and I might submit again. smile EDIT:Here. I hope you'll like it also.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 3:29 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 3:59 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 4:37 pm
RabidKitten Oh hello again ^_^
For the first one I am in LOVE with the face and think the colours have been done marvelously. It's not quite as clutteres as I;d like to see it (the dress is probably hard to work with as many things wouldn't layer well with it and it takes up so much space) Maybe try adding more items?
Basically the same feedback here, one of the most important things for me is colour balance and you've nailed it - just doesn't quite have the organized clutter effect I;'m looking for. I really do suck at clutter. It's just really not my thing. =/. Well, I don't have a single freaking clue as to what to do the first one given the colour scheme SO... Please feel free to store it in a deep dark part of your subconscious to use at a later date. Or now. Whatevs. Better? Worse? Too much? Not enough? I don't have an answer to any of these questions. X3.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:40 pm
Hey again ^_^
Actually my feedback is the same for all three - I think they could all use a bit more in the way of clutter (although the last is probably the best, just needs more on the head) and actually I don't love any of the colour schemes. I'm REALLY pick about having the colours all match up and blend well. Please feel free to do any edits and resubmit though <3Ohhh love these colours. Especially the black - The skirt (though it matches the colours great) is too hard to layer with other items. I'd like to see more clutter itself and less big items <3Oh this one is a fantastic base! I think it could use a tad more white (to match the stockings and anklets) but other than that it looks pretty great ^_^No worries if you're not aces at clutter, you always make pretty fab avis <3 I like the addition of the sword but not as much the swirlies or skulls. Really looking to keep all the clutter focus on the avi itself and not really much in the way of background items. I took a couple items off - maybe just focus on adding some black and white at the bottom and see how that goes? ^_^
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:58 pm
RabidKitten Hey again ^_^
Actually my feedback is the same for all three - I think they could all use a bit more in the way of clutter (although the last is probably the best, just needs more on the head) and actually I don't love any of the colour schemes. I'm REALLY pick about having the colours all match up and blend well. Please feel free to do any edits and resubmit though <3 How bout this one? I changed the color scheme. smile
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:01 pm
Oh well actually Noel's Gift was used several times (in the rules there shouldn't be any double items) and the colours don't really match up here either
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:07 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:20 pm
RabidKitten Oh well actually Noel's Gift was used several times (in the rules there shouldn't be any double items) and the colours don't really match up here either Oh, sorry about that. I didn't actually noticed that I used Noel's Gift many times. Anyway, here and I added a new tektek.
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