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was going for a holli would kinda body- hence the huge ribcage, dunno if I got the shape right for this position

[size=24]CRITS APPRECIATED[/size][/quote]

YEY!!! Art : D !!! Thank you so much !!!!
Because you made me some awesome art, and you asked for cretics + I have time!!! I shall cretic you >: 3 muhahahaha.

Overall very nice drawing : ) the posing is very dynamic and sentual, just how I wanted it, and you got it with out me saying it as well XD Extra brownie points for you!!!. I really like the modified horns you gave her, and making her hair fall down instead of flying upwards makes it super sexy ; D.

The primairy problem with your drawing however are your preportions and some body placement with the pose. : 3

The torso for one, in a pose like that woudn't turn so much, I understand what you were trying to do, make the twist in the body so it makes for a more interesting posing. However if the body were to pose like that it would be very uncomfortable XD hehe. So I made a sketch seen below to show you how I think the torso would be placed.


Now this pose, however amazing as it is, is not easy to draw. specially for the leg placement. (I had to redraw it about 3-4 times before I got it, and I still don't think my leg placement is 100% correct neither :facepalm: . What makes it hard is you have several elements you need to keep into consideration. The leg ontop of the other legs muscles will *mold* [size=9]sorry coun't think of the right word here[/size] to place itself comfortably ontop of the other leg. All while having different angles of persective at the same time. Its not an easy one. But you did a really good job with the hip placement. that looked well done. And accentuating the curves on a womans body is what makes them so interesting and beautifull to look at. So again really nice job : )

For preportions, I'm mainly gonna point out the head which looks a little squashed in (probably because we don't feel her neck) But also because it looks like there needs to be a bit more hair/head in the back of her head to be more preportioned.

Her feet could be a little better as well, but again, its a tuff position to draw so its not as obvious.

And last thing would be the bottom leg placement. If you look at were her hips connect to her legs it looks a little disconected. A nice curved line to merge the two together would help, and if you broght her front leg more towards us, like in my example we would feel like its more part of the body.


But again, love how you explored the character and tried new things with her, I think it was really creative and turned out very nice. Just a few little things, but given the complexity of the pose its understandable : )

Very nice work, and thank you once again for doing my avi request!!! ^o^[/quote]thank-you so much! and the redline with the explanations really explains a lot. also, I get the feeling you really like the pictures, despite the mistakes, which makes me super happy:oops: I'm glad you enjoyed it, even with the changes I made.