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Mongooseh

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2018 9:15 pm


Royal Taorito
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A few things I need to go over, so sorry in advance if it's long.

1. Picture: Your appearance description says 'as depicted' but your picture appears to be missing! Just thought you should know. =)

2. Frame: So your options are Very Light, Light, Medium, Heavy, and Very Heavy. It's more of a general term for your build based a bit on muscle but, for our civilian classes especially, more how heavy you are. So being 6'2" and about 170 pounds, your character is probably a Medium frame. These terms are important for Buki- and Taijutsu users especially, because many styles require certain frames.

3. Classes: A note for the future, since you don't have a class yet, you cannot be a Shinobi (Taijutsu and Sensor), and a non-Shinobi (Soldier) class, except under certain circumstances that require an S-rank Prestige class.

4. Personal Attribute: My Clothes are a Second Skin - So if you take a look a the list of stuff you get for not having a bloodline, next to Minor PA it has listed (religious, craft, skill, and learning). As a Minor PA, it can only be used for things that affect one of those categories, such as a circumstantial bonus to a skill in a particular situation (like... +2 to Fishing when it's raining, or something). It could also be used to get a reduction to learning, such as learning Bukijutsu techniques [1] post faster. Things like that. What you have there would more likely be a Greater PA, but it could also be expanded upon because of that.

Likewise, you have until D-rank to determine your PAs, so take some time to get to know your character, and then when you're ready, resubmit the character to get them approved.

5. Chakra and Stamina: So uh... I think it was an error on out part that Chakra is on there first. You can take out the second one if you want. That aside, you should only have 100 Chakra, and 100 Stamina. The +100 listed in the Archetype is the same for all Archetypes, just to show that that's what everyone starts with.

6. Stages of Learning: Where are you getting 6 stages of learning from? Athlete Archetype gives you [2], and then having a [4] Strength, and [4] Stamina gives you an additional [1] per stat, totaling [4].

7. Ryo: You don't start with any ryo. This starting ryo is only used on the character starter shop, after which any leftovers disappear.


1. Thought I fixed that will sort it later when back on the pc with the picture saved.
2. Fixed frame to medium.
3.Struck off other future classes and just kept taijutsu there stricken.
4.Advice take minor PA is now suitable to task... I think.
5.Thought it was 100/100 base + Archetype. Fixed to just 100/100.
6.Must've misread the bonuses from stats then. Lowered taijustu into compliance.
7.Forgot to delete that from the profile. I do this with dnd characters as well where I not my starting gold somewhere while I calculate my purchases. This is now deleted.

Addressed all issues part from picture
PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2018 5:54 am


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Mongooseh

Wolfy4226
 

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Jenni Deer

Dangerous Lunatic

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2018 5:24 pm


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Who Am I…| Nozomi
How Old Am I…| 16
What Gender Am I...| Female
When Was I Born...| October 13th
What Are My People...| Irish
What Frame Am I...| Medium
How Tall Am I...| 5'6"
And How Heavy...| 154lbs
What Do I Look Like As Human...| Exactly in picture.
What Was My True Birth Form...| [x]
Where Am I From...| Kirigakure
Did I Belong...| Aburame Teaghlach... they had no idea.. except maybe Jack...

What Am I Like...: Uh. People always said that I needed to take better care of myself than worry about others… but it’s just so hard. I can’t simply turn them away! I guess I’m a bit too softhearted…
What Did I Believe In...: "All good things are wild and free"

What Am I Good At...: Swimming! That’s my passion! I also can usually figure out nature such as what can be useful and what cannot. I guess in other words I would be good at gathering and forging. In addition, I can make a mean trap or difficult knots.
What Am I Terrible At...: Oh? Um. Well a lot of people have commented that I’m very easily corrupted. I disagree! I never been corrupted... I think. I do know for sure that I don’t do good in crowded locations. Too many people and not enough nature… it’s just.. It can overwhelm me. Hm. Oh, Alcohol! I can't say why.. let's just call me a light weight.
What Do I Fear...: Being locked up .. I just can’t imagine that. I don’t want to. Chains… Cages.. It’s just.. Terrifying. Another one would be unable to control my own body. Heights! I... I'm okay if I have ground or a stable.. something to hold and support me but if..flying or over 14,000 ft on a mountain with a loose rock... I'm just shaking and paralyzed with the idea.
What Era Am I From...: Era of Madness
What Have I Experienced...: Kirigakure was certainly an interesting place. I learned so much from it, one of them being to think for myself and gain courage. Yet, it’s such a habit to please others that I forget to think for myself and Mother Nature. The.. last thing I remember was to be wedded… I went swimming because I was so upset. I don’t remember why I was upset. Weddings should be a joyous occasion? Maybe it was because of my true bloodline... Breeding outside was forbidden. But yes, I was swimming and then I changed into my human phase, I got my clothes and the knapsack and was heading home... and that was all I remembered...

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What Was I to My Home...} A.. fiancee? I think…
How Experienced Was I...| B-Rank
How Do I Experience Life...|
• {First Class}
• {Second Class}
• {Third Class // First Prestige}
• {Third Class // Second Prestige}
How Do I View It...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|



What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→• Aqua Blue
→→• Soft gentle ripples that reminds you of one raindrop touching a lake
→→→Suiton
→→→Katon
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Mystic
→→→• +5 Slots [ Ninjutsu or Eiseijutsu ]
→→→• +2 Skill Point
Statistics
→→→Power → ☆☆ (2)
→→→Agility → ☆☆ (2)
→→→Intelligence → ☆☆☆☆ (4)
→→→Chakra → ☆☆☆☆ (4)


_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ__đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Skills Have I Learned...|
• Gathering ► 2
• Foraging ► 4
• Cooking Skills
→→• Roastery ► 2
•Herbology
→→• Identification ► 4
What Am I Proficient In...|
• Whip ► 2


What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 01 // 02
Genjutsu → 00 // 00
Eisejutsu → 00 // 03
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 12 // 12
Proficiency Points → 02 // 02



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __đ Φ__Ӌ Φ ʋ__ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
What Do I Carry...|

        Gear
        • Shinobi Clothing
        • Whetstone x4
        • Backpack
        • Twine [ 100 metres ]
        • Mess Kit
        • Flint and Steel x2
        • Sewing needle
        • Blanket
        • One person tent
        • Oiled Waterskin x2
        • Fishhook x2
        • Skinning Knife x2
        • Rope [ 20 Meters ]
        • Soap x2
        • Camp Hammer
        • Shovel
        • Pot, cooking


What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton:


Suiton


Katon
• Tanebi no Jutsu [Cinder Technique]



Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


What Secrets Have I Discovered...|






PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2018 11:06 pm


Royal Taorito
BOOM here's my replacement for Chloe! I was also going to give my new guy Chloe's holiday/event stuff if that's okay?


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tab Who Am I…| Sundance
tab How Old Am I…| 16
tab What Sex Am I...| Male
tab What Do I Look Like...| Completely naked but covered in an orange and white fur. Carries a teddy bear at his waist and is never seen without his sunglasses. EVER.
tab What Are My People...| Monkey
tab Was I Part of a Lineage...| Raigyo Clan
tab Where Am I From...| Sunagakure
tab How Tall Am I...| 6'0ft
tab And How Heavy...| 165lbs
tab What Frame Am I...| Medium, Muscular.
tab What Was I to My Home...} Shinobi and the greatest signer ever known!
tab How Experienced Was I...| Konin (previously) E-Rank (now)
tab What Am I Like...:

ENFP-A

The ENFP is quirky, curious, creative, and idealistic. As one of the most open-minded personality types, ENFPs bring an experimental and explorative attitude to their life and work. Enticed by new ideas, cultures, and possibilities, ENFPs enjoy traveling and are reluctant to stay in one place too long. The ENFP mind is constantly noticing patterns, making associations, and generating new ideas. Thus, individuals of this type tend to make excellent brainstormers, innovators, and artists of all sorts.

Because ENFPs’ interests and curiosities are manifold, many find it difficult to pin down who they are and what they should do with their lives. Many are terrified by the thought of committing to a single career path or relationship, as this threatens their ability to operate in a free and open-ended fashion. Indeed, if ENFPs had it their way, they would get paid to learn and explore rather than disingenuously commit to a single career.

Individuals who test as the ENFP-A type are apt to be more assertive and perhaps less sensitive than those of the ENFP-T persuasion. With that said, the fact that ENFPs are extraverts makes them likely to be assertive than their introverted counterparts (e.g., only 20% of INFPs score as assertive while 80% test as the INFP-T type). According to the Big Five taxonomy, assertiveness is one of the signature features of extraversion. Generally speaking, extraverts are quicker to act, less self-conscious, and display greater confidence navigating social territories than introverts.


tab What Did I Believe In...:

"The life that burns twice as bright may only burn half as long, but it is also the only life worth living."

"It doesn’t interest me what you do for a living. I want to know what you ache for – and if you dare to dream of meeting your heart’s longing. It doesn’t interest me how old you are. I want to know if you will risk looking like a fool – for love – for your dreams – for the adventure of being alive."


tab What Do I Fear...:
    tab Commitment
    tab Loss of freedom
    tab Closed spaces
tab What Are My Strengths...:
    tab Brustin rhymes
    tab Blastin sweet tunes
    tab Puppeting others emotions
tab What Are My Weaknesses...:
    tab Soundproof zones
    tab Close quarters combat
    tab Fire



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tab ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә tab Ӌ Φ ʋ tab đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
tab What Era Am I From...: Era of Attention
tab When Was I Born...| June 7th
tab What Have I Experienced...:

Well you're probably wondering how what kinda of weird monkey-human hybrid I am huh? Well that's the easiest to answer, my mother was a monkey and my father smelled of whiskey. Ha! No, I'm just messing around with you. I was actually born as a regular old human in the cozy little lump of sand known as Sunagakure. This is where I spent my childhood with my younger brother though I'll be honest I don't really remember much of it. Probably on a count of all the times I landed on my head! Me and my brother were pretty rough with each other. Though I might not be able to remember much I do recall that this was around the time Suna was experiencing a influx of new people pretty much every single day as they came to live in the village. That I remember vividly cause of all those B-E-A-U-TI-FUL girls pouring in like water from places I had never even heard of. OH MAN were those the times to a young man let me tell you. Eventually as the years passed on me and my brother were pressed into the ranks the Sunagakure shinobi, not so much as physically forced by financially forced ya know? Being a ninja paid pretty well at the time. We got far into the ranks too, made it all the way to Jounin and life was good riding around on that high.

Then s**t hit the fan. Not even normal s**t either, more like that nasty diarrhea kind that you get when you eat that one restaurant on the corner that you decided to trust last night because your friend told you it was the best. I was assigned by the Kage as part of a specially picked group of forces who's mission was to invade the land of Konohagakure. The only problem was on the last day I was supposed to head out with the rest of the forces, I was reassigned. I have no clue clue why to this day, maybe it was my brothers idea considering he always did like stealing all the goods away from me. Sibling rivalry am I right? Well he ended up taking my place and it turned out to be the worst mistake of my life, I should have fought the decision more but.. Anyway we lost contact with the assault force for twelve days. Twelve of the most agonizing days on my life, all only to find out that our forces along with the others villages groups were completely decimated. Not a single survivor. Needless to say I fell into a depression after that. Did everything from A to Z to fill the void, every vice you could possibly think of I did it. Anyways to cut the sob story short I ended up on the doorstep the Monkey King, Enma. Figured if there was anyway for me pull my sorry a** together it would be to become a sage. Their supposed to see the world how it really is right? See all the lines. Be at peace.

Ever wonder what the failed product of a sage is? You're looking at one. Only reason I'm not some stone statue that's decorated somebody's yard right now is because my teachers were able to beat it out of me in time. Even still absorbing that much uncontrolled sage chakra has pretty rough lasting effects, thus I am the monkey man! Still spent a lot of time with the sages afterwards and ended finding my peace even if I didn't become a sage. After that I ended up getting an urgent summons from my old village, the plague started getting wayy worse and they needed my help with some stuff. So I made my way all the way back home a new man and helped them out serving as a Konin until the plague hit me. Which was pretty ******** up now that I really think of that. I thought being older than 16 made me immune but I got got just the same. Now I'm here, a young hot blooded bull again ready to tear right through this world!


tab Themes...: [ 1 ] [ 2 ] [ 3 ] [ 4 ] [ 5 ] [ 6 ]

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tab How Do I Experience Life...|
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tab How Do I View It...|
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tab What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
    tab Move your dead bones - Sundance can use his singing (i.e. performance) as a medium for Raigyo Emotives techniques.
    tab We are going to puuuump you up - Hitting the gym so often has increased Sundance's power is increased by [ 1 ]
    tab Despite all my rage I am still just an onion in a cage - Sundance starts with [ 1 ] additional jutsu that is a custom.
tab What Are My Limitations...|
    tab Chakra Pool → 100
      tab Chakra Color ► Sunset
      tab Chakra Materialization ► Music notes and stars around him
        tab Fuuton
        tab Katon
    tab Stamina Pool → 100
    tab Archetype → Mystic
    tab Statistics
      tab Power| [ 2 ]
      tab Agility| [ 3 ]
      tab Intelligence| [ 4 ]
      tab Chakra| [ 4 ]
tab What Skills Have I Learned...|
    tab • Foraging ► [ 4 ]
    tab • Field Triage ► [ 4 ]
    tab • Herbology (Identification) ► [ 4 ]
tab What Am I Proficient In...|
    tab • Medium Ranged Weapon ► Light Crossbow
tab What Can I Do...|
    tab Ninjutsu → 00 // 05
    tab Genjutsu → 00 // 02
    tab Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
    tab Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
    tab Skill Points → 12 // 12
    tab Proficiency Points → 02 // 02



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tab đ Φ tab Ӌ Φ ʋ tab ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
tab How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
tab How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp
tab What Do I Carry...|
    Teddy Bear (prized possession)
    Microphone x1 (broken, prized possession)
    Black shades (prized possession)
    Light Crossbow
    Backpack
    Rope, 20 Meters
    Oiled Waterskin
    Blanket
    Sketchbook
    Bedroll
    Pencil
    Soap x2
    One Person Tent
    Pot, Cooking
    Twine, 50 Meters
    Fishing Hook
    Whetstone x3
    Sewing Needle
    Satchel, Medium
    Flint and Steel

tab What Techniques Do I Possess...|

      [ Ninjutsu ]

        Fuuton
        Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu [Wind Torpedo Technique]




        Katon





      [ Genjutsu ]






tab What Secrets Have I Discovered...|
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    tab
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tab What Have I Laid Claim To...|
    tab
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Evanescently Magnificent

Anxious Bloodsucker


BlackJack1995

PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2018 6:21 pm


Resubmitting this character because I finally decided what to do for his Personal Attributes

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Who Am I…| I finally remembered my name! It's Hitoshi. Hitoshi Hojo.
How Old Am I…| 16
What Gender Am I...| Male... right? Checks. Yeah, male.
When Was I Born...| March 18
What Are My People...| I... don't quite understand this question. What do you mean by my people? I guess I'm Caucasian. I also had two great parents but... thinking about them hurts. Just know they were amazing people.
What Frame Am I...| Medium
How Tall Am I...| 5'9
And How Heavy...| 175 lbs
What Do I Look Like...| My hair is bright orange and unkempt (I have perpetual bedhead to my great chagrin), spiking up in places and just barely touching my shoulders. I have tan skin, grey eyes, and a lanky build. I wear a black and silver zip-up jacket with short sleeves, a hood, and yellow buckles near my shoulder over a black and red shirt. I also wear plain black pants with yellow buckles wrapping around my waist that stops short of my calves, leaving them exposed, as well as black and yellow boots. Other than that I wear a crown necklace as well as a Kumogakure headband around my neck.
Where Am I From...| Kumogakure
Did I Belong...| I was a part of the Hojo clan, although my parents never told me for some reason. I never learned about it until after I became a shinobi and suddenly started sprouting tentacles.

What Am I Like...: I'm rather... lacking when it comes to self-confidence, to be totally honest. This causes me to be rather shy and, I admit, desperate for the approval of my friends. I like to believe I'm not a complete pushover though, because if I don't like someone then I couldn't care less what they think. The egotistical. The bullies. The loudmouths who believe the world owes them something. I hate people like that. I guess that makes me kind of weird, to simultaneously lack self-esteem yet be somewhat prideful, but that's just the way I am. I won't stand for anyone looking down on me... aside from myself, apparently.

Strength... in my past life I was obsessed with gaining it. I lost a friend because I was too weak to protect him, and now I lost everyone else who mattered to me. For some reason they're dead, but someone like me is alive. For their sake, I must get even stronger, so that something like this never happens again... I'm angry, you know. At the world... at whoever is responsible for this mess... at myself, for being utterly powerless to stop it. I never had the opportunity to even try to fight. One second I'm just going about my business, getting ready to take the Chunin exams and the next, poof. I wake up here. That's... honestly kind of scary.

I have a stutter for some reason. It crops up when I get nervous (so mostly when talking to a pretty girl) or have the spotlight on myself. My mouth also has a weird habit of just saying whatever I'm thinking against my will. That, combined with the stutter, really ******** sucks. Oh, sorry. Language. I don't normally like to curse, although sometimes I mess up.

I'm a bit of a romantic. In my past life, I had dreams of getting married, having kids... a family of my own. Considering how much of an introvert I was though, it probably never would have happened. Now I've given up on that. I mean, if it happens then that's great but... it probably won't.
What Did I Believe In...: "Don't let your own weaknesses stop you from achieving greatness."

What Am I Good At...: Not much, but I try my best. My "specialty" if you can call it that, would definitely be Genjutsu. That, combined with my tentacles makes me pretty good at close to medium range combat, since at a long range my tentacles wouldn't be able to reach. I'm pretty decent with thrown weapons, however, so that and my limited Ninjutsu can at times make up for my failings in long range combat, but my goal will always be to get in close.
What Am I Terrible At...: I mean... I have a lot, but I'll try to be optimistic and just point out my biggest weaknesses. I have a lower chakra pool than I could, thanks to my focus on Genjutsu and physical combat. I also have knowledge of a rather limited number of Ninjutsu, again because of my focus on Genjutsu.
What Do I Fear...: For some reason I have an unnatural fear of lambs... other than that, I hate fire. Freaks me out. That and kalamari. Ugh. Just the sight of the stuff makes me want to vomit, or run away to the other side of the planet. Or maybe another planet entirely. Or maybe even the moon...
What Era Am I From...: Era of Madness
What Have I Experienced...: He grew up outside of Kumogakure, in a small village away from the protection of the ninja village. The village came under frequent raids by bandits, who preyed on the weak. Kumo would occasionally send a ninja to help deter raids, but with the bandits stealing all of their belongings it made it difficult for the village to acquire the funds for this very often. As such, the residents were left to protect themselves.

At the age of 14 he decided to help fight the bandits with his friend, Hideyoshi... but he too weak. His friend died, and ever since, he has been obsessed with getting stronger so that he'll never lose anyone he cares for again.

The next time a Kumogakure jounin passed through his small village, he went with her to become a ninja, taking only the ocarina his father gifted him along. On the way, he met a water monitor lizard who would become his pet. He called her Scylla.

Two years later, he was a genin, with Scylla faithfully fighting at his side. He'd only been a genin for but a day, however, before the world apparently went to hell.

Now he's woken up in this crazy world full of questions, and royally pissed of.
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What Was I to My Home...} Genin
How Experienced Was I...| D-Rank
How Do I Experience Life...|




How Do I View It...|



What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
• Illusionist: Can add a secondary sense to all Genjutsu techniques. [Chakra]
• Learning how to fight too: Obtains 5 stages of learning.
• Disciplined: Obtains an additional discipline point.
What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→Burnt Orange
→→• A simple hazy aura that erupts into a writhing mass of countless tentacles when using a large amount of chakra.
→→→• Suiton
→→→• Doton
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Scholar
Statistics
→→→Power → ☆☆☆(3)
→→→Agility → ☆☆☆(3)
→→→Intelligence → ☆☆☆☆☆(5) (Genjutsu [0.5] ranks stronger and [5] chakra cheaper)
→→→Chakra → ☆(1)


_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ__đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 250 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|



What Skills Have I Learned...|
• Potionmaking ► 6
• Concoctions ► 6
What Am I Proficient In...|
• Handheld Ranged Weapon: Kunai ► ☆☆(2)


What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 00 // 01
Genjutsu → 00 // 06
Eisejutsu → 00 // 00
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 12 // 12
Proficiency Points → 02 // 02



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __đ Φ__Ӌ Φ ʋ__ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
What Do I Carry...|

      • Kunai x15
      • Ocarina
      • Normal clothing
      • Cloud headband
      • Backpack
        ► Flint and steel x1
        ► One person tent x1
        ► Camp hammer
        ► Oiled waterskin
        ► Blanket

What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton:


Suiton


Doton


Hojo


Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
Enchantment
• Mokugeki [ Pantomime ] C-Rank

{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


What Secrets Have I Discovered...|
• {No one starts out with these. These are an in-game mechanic that will be utilized throughout the world, and will encompass items or secret locations discovered.}





PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:17 am


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Lily Platypus
The only thing I'm seeing that needs to be fixed is the History. We do require I believe two paragraphs in order for it to be approved. That aside I'm going to try to get Lan to put up the bloodline, and we'll make an announcement when it's up. You won't be able to use any of the bloodline abilities or passives until it's put up and you're approved.


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Evanescently Magnificent
The only complaint I have is that we would prefer you have your personality in your own words rather than copied from a personality test. I can't ding you for it though because it does meet the requirement.

BlackJack1995
Two things. You have it shown as having two points in Handheld Ranged Weapon: Kunai. I just wanted to clarify that the first point unlocks the Handheld Ranged Weapon category to be used at E-rank (in other words, you can use all handheld ranged weapons at E-rank). The second point allows you to train up Kunai, but it still starts at E-rank, so you'll have to train it to D-rank. Second, your PA gives you [5] stages of learning but they haven't been allotted to your Buki/Tai under the limitations.
 

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Jenni Deer

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:51 am


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_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Φ__Ⱥ я Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ...]
Who Am I…| Nozomi
How Old Am I…| 16
What Gender Am I...| Female
When Was I Born...| October 13th
What Are My People...| Irish
What Frame Am I...| Medium
How Tall Am I...| 5'6"
And How Heavy...| 154lbs
What Do I Look Like As Human...| Exactly in picture.
What Was My True Birth Form...| [x]
Where Am I From...| Kirigakure
Did I Belong...| Aburame Teaghlach... they had no idea.. except maybe Jack...

What Am I Like...: Uh. People always said that I needed to take better care of myself than worry about others… but it’s just so hard. I can’t simply turn them away! I guess I’m a bit too softhearted…
What Did I Believe In...: "All good things are wild and free"

What Am I Good At...: Swimming! That’s my passion! I also can usually figure out nature such as what can be useful and what cannot. I guess in other words I would be good at gathering and forging. In addition, I can make a mean trap or difficult knots.
What Am I Terrible At...: Oh? Um. Well a lot of people have commented that I’m very easily corrupted. I disagree! I never been corrupted... I think. I do know for sure that I don’t do good in crowded locations. Too many people and not enough nature… it’s just.. It can overwhelm me. Hm. Oh, Alcohol! I can't say why.. let's just call me a light weight.
What Do I Fear...: Being locked up .. I just can’t imagine that. I don’t want to. Chains… Cages.. It’s just.. Terrifying. Another one would be unable to control my own body. Heights! I... I'm okay if I have ground or a stable.. something to hold and support me but if..flying or over 14,000 ft on a mountain with a loose rock... I'm just shaking and paralyzed with the idea.
What Era Am I From...: Era of Madness
What Have I Experienced...:
Nozomi's mother almost lost her husband. She wasn't able to conceive a child and being in a high branch, they have strict rules. They loved each other but reproduction was needed. For the sake of the Teaghlach... Her husband had threaten that both him and his wife would leave the Clan if they were to divorce and he had to marry another woman. The tensions were running high until one day, they were blessed! Now their only fear was if the child would be strong enough for the bugs to live within the child. Because they weren't real Aburame.... yet the agreement of the bugs was perfect for them. They can hide.

On October 13th, the day she was born, immediately she was placed onto specific hive to see if she will survive the technique. No one was to be in the room for few hours. The parents had heard their child screaming and wailing on top of her lungs but then, silence. They feared she didn't make it. Already braced themselves, they entered into the room and saw she was alive and well, cooing happily as bugs crawled over her and many already settled inside of her. Pleased, they had decided to name the child, Nozomi, meaning beautiful hope.

Growing up for her wasn't easy. Moved from one home to another; loaded with responsibilities and duties, she just wanted to explore and go on different adventures. The young red haired child was so tired of school and how much clothes she had to wear. On her 10th birthday, she was noticably wearing less clothes and some people got to see her face! [stirke]She managed to learn how to change into human phasing, but every time she went home, the child was exhausted and reverted back to her birth form when it was safe. Sometimes she even had to go home early... She is still very shy and quiet like many Aburame but she can be very expressive at times. The fact about Aburame not liking the light isn't 100% true, after all, bugs like warmth though they do have low vision. Once she was fully trained and succeeded different members in her branch family in different tactics, she went off to the academy and graduated as a Genin and moved back to live with her parents. Of course there was few things that didn't add up, what kind of Aburame likes to swim? A full blooded Teaghlach that was!

The moment she graduated, so much had happened. The Sero reacted in such a way there was monsters. Nozomi fought alongside with few people. Even then, Nozomi had felt like a failure. Shadow confirmed it and it decreased the young Genin's confidence. No longer trusting her abilities or even her own bugs, slowly but surely, Nozomi had been working hard around the farm that the Aburame Clan was responsible for. It was easier for her, she got to be close to nature and away from people. The fact that they just got granted the islands, Nozomi and her family had to work hard and fast to keep up with the demands. Thankfully, there was help with a Senju user to help the productivity of the plants to be quicker. Even then, the work was not done. They must be tended to and care for each day by the bugs and the members of the Aburame. The farm started to thrive but Nozomi was still lost. She was more quiet and less outspoken to stand up for others. She was still haunted and believe that what happened and all those lives lost was her fault.

Kirigakure was certainly an interesting place. She had learned so much from it, especially started to think for herself and slowly gain the courage the young female needed. Despite her courage and self-esteem growing, she still had the habit of pleasing others that she forgot about herself and Mother Nature. The last thing that she remembered that she was to be wedded! It was not a joyous occasion. Confused and angry, the hidden Teaghlach went swimming. No one really knows she was devastated. Maybe it was because of her true bloodline... Breeding outside was forbidden. Once she was done swimming for hours, she changed back into her human form when it was safe, got on her clothes and headed back home......

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What Was I to My Home...} A.. fiancee? I think…
How Experienced Was I...| B-Rank
How Do I Experience Life...|
• {First Class}
• {Second Class}
• {Third Class // First Prestige}
• {Third Class // Second Prestige}
How Do I View It...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|



What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→• Aqua Blue
→→• Soft gentle ripples that reminds you of one raindrop touching a lake
→→→Suiton
→→→Katon
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Mystic
→→→• +5 Slots [ Ninjutsu or Eiseijutsu ]
→→→• +2 Skill Point
Statistics
→→→Power → ☆☆ (2)
→→→Agility → ☆☆ (2)
→→→Intelligence → ☆☆☆☆ (4)
→→→Chakra → ☆☆☆☆ (4)


_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ__đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Skills Have I Learned...|
• Gathering ► 2
• Foraging ► 4
• Cooking Skills
→→• Roastery ► 2
•Herbology
→→• Identification ► 4
What Am I Proficient In...|
• Whip ► 2


What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 01 // 02
Genjutsu → 00 // 00
Eisejutsu → 00 // 03
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 12 // 12
Proficiency Points → 02 // 02



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __đ Φ__Ӌ Φ ʋ__ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
What Do I Carry...|

        Gear
        • Shinobi Clothing
        • Whetstone x4
        • Backpack
        • Twine [ 100 metres ]
        • Mess Kit
        • Flint and Steel x2
        • Sewing needle
        • Blanket
        • One person tent
        • Oiled Waterskin x2
        • Fishhook x2
        • Skinning Knife x2
        • Rope [ 20 Meters ]
        • Soap x2
        • Camp Hammer
        • Shovel
        • Pot, cooking


What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton:


Suiton


Katon
• Tanebi no Jutsu [Cinder Technique]



Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


What Secrets Have I Discovered...|






PostPosted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 5:47 am


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Lily Platypus
You also get [1] Nin- or Genjutsu from having a [4] Intelligence, and [1] Nin- or Genjutsu slot from having a [4] in Chakra, if you want to add those in. =)[/size[
 

Royal Taorito
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Im the Girl one
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 10:54 pm


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_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Φ tab Ⱥ я Ә tab Ӌ Φ ʋ...]
tab Who Am I…| Hello, My name is Mon Mi-jin. I'll be in your care.
tab How Old Am I…| I'm 20...no wait... I'm am 15 years old.
tab What Sex Am I...| This is awkward, but I am in fact a girl in both sex and in gender.
tab What Do I Look Like...| Not much have changed, I'm tall and slender, but I lack a lot of feminine beauty in my opinion. My skin is pale but has a slight grey tint from being malnourish the majority of my life. Luckily I can tan pretty easily and not look like a burnt orange. My hair is a little past my shoulder blade, but I often kept tie up and out of my face? I really hate talking about my looks because my face is a bit scar up. So, yeah... just look at my picture over there.
tab What Are My People...| Korean
tab Was I Part of a Lineage...| shikotsumyaku .
tab Where Am I From...| Sunakagure
tab How Tall Am I...| Five foot seven inches, I read that pretty tall for girls my age.
tab And How Heavy...| 135 pounds
tab What Frame Am I...| light build
tab What Was I to My Home...} I went from a protector who help keep bandits from attacking my village to a criminal. Rotting away in a cell for a crime I know I did not commit.
tab How Experienced Was I...| I was talented and recognize for my strengths. I can't say I am much to look at now.
tab What Am I Like...: Mi-jin personality worked well in a group setting. She seeks the leadership in other before herself. A supporting role suits her best, but in a disorganized group, Mi-jin is not afraid to take up the mantle of leadership herself. If you don’t mind a leadership from a person who not capable to go one day without forcing her belief on you and those around her.

Mi-jin lack certain social cues and higher thinking and tend to comes off the ignorance of other people and the world she finds herself in. Luckily she is very creative and is able to fill in the missing pieces that often tie into her moral belief. Being adaptable is her specialty, but you can’t force a circle into a square piece when it comes to her. You’ll have to either chip away at her smooth surfaces or expand the square piece for her to fit in.

Understanding how Mi-jin feels is very obvious if she is happy she is probably praising to the moon for her happiness. If she is upset or angry, she is cursing the sun for her problems. Finding this young lady in the middle of her own emotional turmoil is not unusable, but luckily the problems are typically small in scale or very fleeting. She is unable to hold ‘most’ grudges.

While many upon meeting Mi-jin at first can see her bad traits and they are well documented in many incidents of her bad traits. Mi-jin is charismatic and charming in her simplicity. When talking about the topics she loves, i.e the moon, Mi-jin become uncomfortably excitable and talkative. Not that she was ever the shy type. Mi-jin is an open book with some sticky pages stuck together. It's not that she has secrets, it's just that rather recalls them when it's needed. It could be days after a conversation that she remembers some information given.

Those who come in contact with her often leave confused or amused. The best way to handle this specimen is to come half full and leave half empty.

tab What Did I Believe In...: "True preserverence is the moon rising every night."
tab What Do I Fear...:
    tab • Swimming in dark waters
    tab • Curses, hexes and witchcrafts
    tab • inabitiy to decipher fiction from reality
tab What Are My Strengths...:
    tab • Taijustu
    tab • Evasive manuver
    tab • Dexerious
tab What Are My Weaknesses...:
    tab • Tactical situation
    tab • Gengetsu Users
    tab • Clumsy footing



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tab ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә tab Ӌ Φ ʋ tab đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
tab What Era Am I From...: Era of Attention
tab When Was I Born...| June 5th
tab What Have I Experienced...:
The person who Mi-jin has become is due to her close ties with her family and the type of community she grew up in. Mi-jin education tended to be more focus on practical everyday survival lessons. She knew how to grew crops in poor desert conditions and hunt and gather food. Her parents were extremely poor and taught how to scavenge and save their waste to keep food on the table. Mi-jin neighbor was in the low-income part of the village and while everyone has a role in the bigger scheme of things, there was still the handful who could not take care of themselves. It was not unheard of for a family to take in elders and children who lost their families or homeless till they get on their feet. Mi-jin even as a child whose spent night hungry, knew that her community will never let a family die of hunger if it could be prevented. The bad apples tend to root themselves out and eventually leave as the village is small and words spread of the family who turn a hungry motherless child away.

Mi-jin loves festival times as it the night where the community is the closet and sharing their faith. Mi-jin family praised the moon primary and the earth second. It has been a long tradition in her family to give their blessing to the moon and festival times is the night where every family in the community comes together and gives their offerings or prayers to their deity in hope of good fortune. Thanks to this joint religious community, that Mi-jin faith has never wavered even when she is hungry or when she lost relatives to droughts and famine.

The oasis community has another thing they lack and that was ninja schools. Very few families in the village could perform basic ninjutsu and those who could be not open to sharing what they passed on to outside their families. Mi-jin had no training when she decided to apply for the night watch. At the most the recruit was given a simple, short sword, any other weapons or armor comes out of the recruit pockets. Mi-jin coming from a poor family had no chance of better protection.

The night watch is those who have taken a vow to protect the village. The village lack numbers and formal training it due to generations of passing down training and technique that the village had been able to push back against bandits. Mi-jin vowed before the town to protect them from all internal and external harm. The return was that Mi-jin family would not go without food.

The night of the full moon, Mi-jin was out on patrol with the Captain. Nothing seems out of the ordinary, but when they stop to check the walls, everything began to change. She felt so angry and out of control of her emotions. Before she could cry, scream or do anything, Mi-jin attacked her captain. The fight was vague and she can’t remember what happened, but the feeling of anger was pulsing through her body. Her mind was screaming thoughts that felt hazy. The hot streak of pain against her face stops her, but her captain was badly wounded and her sword was dripping with his blood. Mi-jin remembers the words he spoke to her as he touches the wounds on her face.

The trial for the murder was quick as Mi-jin did not defend herself. There was no way she would kill her Captain, but they let her sit in jail regardless. Mi-jin thought about that night over and over again. The captain was her best friend, she would be the last person to kill him. When the night of her execution, Mi-jin notice how quiet the Jailhouse was. She tested the door and found it unlocked, without a second thought she escaped. Mi-jin didn’t want to die for a crime she didn’t commit so she ran out of the village.

Mi-jin believes the moon set her free that night and that it was fate that encourages her to keep on moving. The next town a three-day journey if she wasn’t stopped by country many sandstorms. Mi-jin prays that she’ll see the next day when she exhaustion overcame her. Falling asleep prop against a rock, Mi-jin believes in fate and destiny and if the moon wanted her to die in jail, her prayer would not have been answered. Instead, it seems fate had a different path for her and she was destined not to walk it alone. As that night, a string was tied around her soul and is bounded by an individual she would have met if the world's turmoil hasn't interrupted her journey.

_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tab Ⱥ я Ә tab Ӌ Φ ʋ tab Ҫ ɐ ϸ ɐ ϐ ζ έ tab Ѻ Ӻ...] ►►► Change to "What Am I Capable Of..." ◄◄◄
tab How Do I Experience Life...|
    tab • {First Class}
    tab • {Second Class}
    tab • {Third Class // First Prestige}
    tab • {Third Class // Second Prestige}
tab How Do I View It...|
    tab
    tab
    tab
tab What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
    tab • Moon Faith - A devoted follower of her faith, while under the Moon watchful eye, Mi-jin feel her bond grows stronger. (all religious techniques are 1 rank stronger)
    tab • s**t Talker- Mi-jin likes to talk s**t and can take a hit. When she s**t talk, you know she going to put up what she shittin'. (+2 custom oaths)
    tab • Hungry Scavenger- No one knows how to make good possum pie anymore, luckily Mi-jin knows a few home reciepes that she is willing to share. (add +2 to cooking skill)
tab What Are My Limitations...|
    tab Chakra Pool → 100
      tab Chakra Color ► Grey
      tab Chakra Materialization ► gritty and fluid like sands in the wind
        tab • Earth
        tab • Fire
    tab Stamina Pool → 100
    tab Archetype → Magician
    tab Statistics
      tab Power| ☆☆☆
      tab Agility| ☆☆☆☆
      tab Intelligence|
      tab Chakra| ☆☆☆☆
tab What Skills Have I Learned...|
    tab • Foragring ► 3
    tab • Roastry ► 4
    tab • Brewing ► 3
tab What Am I Proficient In...|
    tab • two weapon combat (light&light)► E rank
    tab • single handed weapons ►E rank
    tab • Handheld Ranged Weapon ► E rank
tab What Can I Do...|
    tab Ninjutsu → 02 // 0
    tab Genjutsu → 00 // 00
    tab Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
    tab Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 01 // 00
    tab Skill Points → 00 // 01
    tab Proficiency Points → 00 // 01



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tab đ Φ tab Ӌ Φ ʋ tab ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
tab How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 0 Ryo
tab How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp
tab What Do I Carry...|
    tab •Normal Clothing ►25 Ryo
    tab •Super Light Armor [D - Ranked, Scale 5] ►15 Ryo

    tab •satchel, medium ►2 ryo
    tab •Trench knife(x2)(durabiity 30) ►20 ryo
    tab •10 Senbon(x2)(duarability 30) ►4 ryo
    tab •Skinning knife ►5 ryo

    tab •backpack ►2 ryo
    tab •One Person Tent ►20 Ryo
    tab •Blanket ►2 ryo
    tab •bedroll ►6 ryo
    tab •Mess kit ►10 ryo
    tab •Sliver glitter 'mystic' ball ►5 ryo
    tab •Soap ►1ryo
    tab •Twine(50meter) ►6 ryo
    tab •Fishing hook (1x) ►0.5 ryo
    tab •Whetstone(durabaility 0.3) ►0.5 ryo
    tab •flint and steel ►0.5 ryo
    tab •clay gourd ►1 ryo

tab What Techniques Do I Possess...|
      [{Taijutsu}]
        • iyūgata Senpū



      [{Bukijutsu}]





tab What Secrets Have I Discovered...|
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tab What Have I Laid Claim To...|
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2018 6:41 am


Sheariv Fal'nevan

I tried to piece his profile back together but couldn't xD Just updated PAs that need to be approved, alongside the change in bloodline.


Lanfaer

Royal Taorito
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Lanfaer
Captain

Aged Genius

8,075 Points
  • Befriended 100
  • Survivor 150
  • Hygienic 200
PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2018 4:05 pm


Changes Zurusu's Personal Attributes.


Don't Let the Bow Fool Ya ► Few people understand this, but, you see...I'm not really that good with a bow. There's a reason I have sights on it. No, my specialty is with the blade, a b*****d blade if I can help it. Whenever I am utilizing just one blade in my hand the speed and strength of my techniques are increased by one half a point [1/2]...whatever that means. All I know is that as my experience rank classification increases so too does that number. At C - rank, and A -rank, it goes up by another half point [1/2].
Irish Echoes ► My voice is a powerful thing, even among my kind. It carries in situations that would stifle it, making silencing effects grant me even a single post [1] of opportunity for the effects to take place. This has the double effect of increasing the duration of my sung techniques by one [1] post, which echoes on after I stop.
Natural Born Talent ► The worst part about being a godsbedamned Skald is choosing which of the three types to use. Oh, of course, it makes sense for a warrior like me to become a Warden, but sometimes...sometimes healing must take place to fight the darkness within ourselves. I've always had a talent for that, honestly, and its because of this that I am able to utilize Harmonics along with the other two I can use.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2018 4:06 pm


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Im the Girl one

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magcookie


Sarcastic Heckler

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  • Punk Patrol 250
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2018 8:07 pm


Im putting this here so it can be looked over for any mechanical problems while I finish writing her background. So all thats left is basically fluff.



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          ►►► P E R S O N A L - I N F O R M A T I O N

            What is my name...? :: Liliya Yuliovna Volkov
            Do I have nicknames...? :: My name was often pronounced as Lila by some of the elders and it ended up sticking.
            What do I believe...? :: The monasteries teachings hold true to this day, an unbound love for the living and the spirits of the descended. I don't believe anyone is truly evil, everyone has a redemption arc waiting to happen they just need a little push.

            How old am I...? :: I used to be in my mid twenties, but as it is I appear to be fifteen again.
            Birthday...? :: That would be 1st of January.
            Gender...? :: Jeez, have a little tact will you? Female.
            Race...? :: Now that is a tricky subject... I am not from this land, my parents both foreigners from a north eastern country. But beyond that I'm not exactly even human anymore, my body was... altered so I suppose my race is just Liiliya.
            Sexual orientation...? :: A lady doesn't kiss and tell.

            How tall am I...? :: Now is that from toes to the tips of my ears? Or is it just to the top of my head itself? I'm five foot even if you don't take my ears into consideration.
            How much to I weigh...? :: AHEM! I am a healthy weight!
            What color are my eyes...? :: Amber like the material old buggies got trapped in!
            My hair color...? :: Its a natural silver! Don't you look at me like that!

            What is my build...? :: I'm have a pretty light frame, my focuses were never centered around the physical arts.
            Do I have any Scars/Tattoos/Ect...? :: I suffer from a sort of bloodline defect brought on by the doctor messing with my bodies cells. My body has natural crystals forming around different chakra centers in me, as well as the occasional speckle of gem from where I have been wounded.. For example the gem you keep looking at above my sternum. More exist elsewhere but to list them off would be a pain, it's not like I hide them after all.
            What am I wearing...? :: It was tradition for the head priestesses to wear this outfit ok?! Its now like I chose the design because I liked how it looked!**

            **She totally did. Liliya's outfit is a more extreme edition of the monasteries traditional robes worn by the previous head priestesses, showing slightly more skin that one would assume she could be comfortable with. It was designed by Liiliya after she received her title, working all night amongst the previous designs and her notebook. It was designed to show her off the mutations made to her body, letting those who made the pilgrimage to the monastery that the one in charge was not some infallible figure just handing out forgiveness and spiritual guidance. They needed to know that she truly believed in the teachings she let flow from her mouth. If she could be 'fixed' so might they. The color scheme of the outfit is rather simple: white to show the purity, red to show the love she spreads and holds dear, and gold to show how valuable the spirit truly is to being a functioning person. Speckling the design are small azure gemstones made from Liiliya's Shōton as just another way to embrace who she is now.

            The base of the outfit is formed around a black leotard, woven in strips for a sleek design.Resting over the top of the leotard is a loose white gown kimono top held closed with a red obi with bells hanging from the front, the white fabric trimmed with strips of gold. The bottom of the top flowers out backwards showing the interwoven blacks and reds of the inner design of the fabric. The sleeves of the outfit are separate from the top itself, not as practical as wearing real sleeves but design she enjoyed nonetheless. The sleeves follow the same basic pattern as the the top, only the flowering at the bottom of the sleeves is more extreme letting it flow loosely. The sleeves are held in place on her arms with red obi's much like the top. She wears thigh high black silk socks with the same strip design as her leotard. The socks hidden under slightly shorter thigh high boots. The bottom of her boots are red heels with a spike on each boot sticking out of the top of the shoes toe. As for accessories the above mentioned azure gems speckle her sleeves, but beyond that she wears little guards around the base of her feline ears. Her hair is held together in twin tails with you guessed it red obi's acting as scrunchies.


            My relationship status...? :: I could get someone if I wanted to! Just... not right now.
            What am I like...? :: OH! W-well I'm not all that unique there isn't a lot to say on this matter..!**

            **Liliya is a survivor, a battered and heavily scarred survivor but still a survivor nonetheless. This has left the girl fairly timid and very soft spoken. This causes her to do her best to slink into the background of a conversation if their are multiple people around, the attention of many eyes can cause her to panic. One on one she is a lot braver in conversations even able to voice her own opinions! She has a tendency to talk to herself in her head rather than try to extend an olive branch out to others. This makes the process of opening up to people even longer than it should be, but when she finally does allow someone in she lets them see just how large her heart is despite its damaged state. She is a gentle soul very loving and caring to those close to her. Some people often compared her to being the mother figure at her monastery. She would make sure everyone was always taking care of themselves, helping them with gentle nudges to keep them healthy. Scolding them if they did something without thinking of the possible consequences, she might have grounded a couple elders after a infamous incident.. While she is often quiet when she gets talking about her passions and what she believes in her voice will elevate to volumes people would never expect form her. When someone manages to maker her mad, really mad, she tends to fall into the camp of getting defensive and rather pouty. Getting rather stubborn and unwilling to budge on the topic at hand. She however is always willing to forgive the person if they take the simple step to apologize for doing/saying whatever they might have done. When she gets upset is when things get tricky with Liliya. Due to her rather fragile and splintered ego whenever she gets sad her mind has a tendency to worsen the mood by opening old scars. The spiral of depression for her is much like a vortex sucking her deeper and deeper into despair. It takes her either crying herself out or getting a helping hand from her loved ones. Despite the damage the world had forced onto her she still manages to absolutely love humanity, for all its many MANY glaring flaws she loves them and each of their imperfections that make them humans to begin with.

            My former home...? :: I lived on a snow capped mountain most of my life in a monastery. It was in the Land of Snow.
            What era did I hail from...? :: The very last few years of the Era of Attention is when I was born.
            The era I vanished from...? :: The Era of Regret is conversely when my memory just seems to scramble into nothing.


          ►►► C O M B A T - D A T A

            Bloodline: Shōton ll Crystal Release [approved]
            ◇ Users have Doton [Earth] and Suiton [Water] as chakra elements.
            ◇ Can learn Doton [Earth], Suiton [Water], and Shouton [Crystal] ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
            ◇ Doton [Earth] and Suiton [Water] techniques are a half rank [.5] weaker against Shouton techniques.
            ◇ Katon [Fire], Raiton [Lightning], and Fuuton [Wind] techniques are a half rank [.5] stronger against Shouton techniques.
            ◇ Creatures directly touched by Shouton crystals are destroyed when the crystal is. The Shouton user can decide that this doesn't happen by simply not crystallizing the person thoroughly.
            ◇ Chakra-based barriers can prevent crystal growth, regardless of rank. An example of this can be seen canonly when Hinata covered her body with chakra about an inch from her body, thus allowing her to not be crystallized completely through.
            ◇ Users can move freely in their own crystal, though doing so costs five [5] Chakra per post of doing so. The cost covers all movement through crystal for the duration of that post.


            Archetype: Mystic
            ◇ +1 Intelligence
            ◇ +1 Chakra
            ◇ +100 Chakra
            ◇ +100 Stamina
            ◇ +100 Starter Ryo
            ◇ +5 Slots [Genjutsu]
            ◇ +2 Skill Points


            Primary Class:
            Secondary Class:
            Chakra Pool: 100
            Stamina Pool: 100
            Chakra Elements: Doton, Suiton, and Shōton.
            Chakra Color: My chakra blazes a bright azure blue.
            Chakra Materialization: It rises off of my skin like water burning off a hot surface, steam if you would.
            Former Position: Ah.. I was never anyone that important.
            Current Grade: E Rank

            Strengths:
              ◇ Instinctual reactions, sometimes it seems that her instincts are able to take control of a situation before her brain can register that a situation is indeed happening.
              ◇ Minds eye, spirits exist ever on the cusp of a regular humans understanding. To her the boundary between the spiritual world and earth is thin. The winds carry whispers of nearby spirits and the shadows form their being. Her increased link allows her to come to an understanding with even the most stubborn spirit.
              ◇ High durability, her mutated skin gives her a little more staying power when being hit by physical moves.
              ◇ Low level night vision, to a certain extent she is able to see in darkness as if it was day. A deep cave or enclosed box is beyond her ability to see as not enough light particles even reach her eyes. But at night in the open she can see just as naturally as she could in the sunlight.
            Weaknesses:
              ◇ Physical combat, her body was never trained up enough to be able to scuffle around in the mud like a shinobi.
              ◇ Ears, her big glaring weakness that she can only protect so well. A simple squeeze is enough to send jolts of pain down her spine. While her ears are being squeezed her attacks will do considerably less damage. [Strength lowers by one when being held]
              ◇ Forgiving, she gives everyone a second chance when everything is done and over with. This has lead her to being repeatedly betrayed unsurprisingly by those with ill intents.
              ◇ Receiving medical aid, she flat out refuses to let someone else treat her wounds if she can physically stop it from happening. She can only trust herself in this aspect, extending from a paper cut to a severed limb.
            Fears:
              ◇ Medical Professionals, from a high ranking doctor to unpaid interns. Liliya cannot stand the thought of being experimented on again, her hair standing on end whenever she sees someone preforming a medical task. Or wearing anything remotely linking them to doctors.
              ◇ Chimeric creations, a selfish fear brought on by memories long buried. Because of her history and how she came to be what she is this day she gets nauseous with fear when ever she shes a combined creature... after all the creator might be just around the corner waiting to get their hands on her.
              ◇ Trypanophobia, fear of needles. IN her case medical needles in specific. A rather understandable fear she developed from being prodded with constant injections.

            Class Disciplines:
              ◇ [n/a]


            Learning Reductions:
              ◇ [n/a]


            Event Bonuses:
              ◇ [n/a]


            Major Attributes:
              Boundry Breaker: Liliya is able to draw the full strength out of any spirit in her command. Letting them break their limits set on them by the rank they were conjured at. This allows them to behave at one rank higher in terms of combat potential and skill access.
              Call From Beyond: The land of shadows exists beyond the ever closed eyes of humanity, only showing itself to those that had transcended the chains of the logical brain. The voices of the dead offering their aid to those unlucky few that require it. Every [3] narrator posts they must flip a coin: If tails a whisper will fail to completely reach Liliya's brain and she will gain no insight beyond scrambled words. If heads the spirits around Liliya will bestow knowledge of some advantageous degree, from simple directions to pointing out a weak point. The degree of help received is up to the Narrators discretion whenever heads is flipped.
              Chimeric Abomination: Due to the unique chemical make up of Liliya's body she is bestowed an advanced healing factor. Rather than wounds clotting with blood her body forms a blue crystal like substance around open wounds to close or set wounds before her body begins its repairs. Lesser wounds from scrapes to small cuts will heal within [3] posts. Medium wounds like gashes and stab wounds will heal within [8] posts. While the process might be sped up it cannot out heals death, if proper first aid isn't prepared and preformed this quick healing will mean nothing for her. This process however tires her out if done enough in succession. This acts as an automatic triage for her body, while it isn't advanced enough to prevent internal bleeding due to ruptured organs or broken bones it is enough to stave off most common injuries. This effect will gain a minor disease resistance bonus if her triage skill reaches [30] points, but only if the poison enters through outer wounds, preventing any low tier infections from entering her body.


            Minor Attributes:
              XXX: [n/a]
              XXX: [n/a]


          ►►► S T A T S

            Skill Points: 12 //12
            Proficiency Points: 02 //02
            Discipline Points: 00 //00

            Attributes:
            Power: ★★☆☆☆
            Agility: ★★★☆☆
            Intelligence: ★★★☆☆
            Chakra: ★★★★☆

            Proficiency
            Single Handed Light Weapons ► E Rank
            →→ Short Swords ► E Rank

            Skills
            Cooking
            →→→ Bakery ► 2
            →→→ Stewery ► 2
            Herbology
            →→→ Identification ► 1
            Survival
            →→→ Field Triage ► 5
            Artistry
            →→→ Cartography ► 2


          ►►► W E A P O N S - D A T A

            Weapon Class: Shortsword
            Weapon Name: Ol Faithful
            Weapon Description: XXX
            Weapon Length: A total of two feet long.
            Weapon Weight: 4½ lbs
            Weapon Location: Hanging from her right hip.


          ►►► I N V E N T O R Y

            Clothing:
            ◇ Normal Clothing :: See "What do I look like" for more information.
            ◇ Jewelers Monacle :: Simple black with a magnification lens for intricate work, generally hidden away in her top.

            Small Satchel: Resting on center of the small of back.
            xxx◇ Flint and Steel [2]
            xxx◇ Whetstone [4]
            xxx◇ Skinning Knife [1]
            xxx◇ Oiled Waterskin [1]
            xxx◇ Notebook [1]
            xxx◇ Pen [2]
            xxx◇ Pencil [4]
            xxx◇ Soap [2]
            xxx◇ Twine [50m]
            xxx◇ Sewing Needle [2]
            xxx◇ Scissors


          ►►► M I S S I O N S - D A T A

            AC: 00,000
            Ryo: 両 00,000

            Missions Complete:
            D-ranked: 0
            C-ranked: 0
            B-ranked: 0
            A-ranked: 0
            S-ranked: 0
            S+-ranked: 0
            Event Missions: 0

            Crafting Jobs Complete:
            D-ranked: 0
            C-ranked: 0
            B-ranked: 0
            A-ranked: 0
            S-ranked: 0
            S+-ranked: 0
            Customs Crafted: 0


          ►►► F A M I L Y - A N D - H I S T O R Y

            What has been laid claim to:
            ◇ [n/a]


            Secrets that have been discovered:
            ◇ [n/a]


            Father: Viktor Volkov
            Mother: Yuliya Volkov
            Siblings: None.

            History:

              xxxxxLiliya was born on the first day of a new year to the Volkov family, across the vast seas far from the shinobi nations. The land they she was born in was torn apart by war, due to a widespread disease that layed claim to half of the populations youth already. This included the previous leaders heir. Her early childhood was pretty rough, her parents not having been that well off before the harsh ration regulations had been placed on families. All she knew was hungry while she was a little one but because it was all she knew it never really bothered her too much. It wasn't until her fifth birthday that her parents decided that there was no way the country was going to get any less war torn, that they needed to leave for their child's good. Not wanting their child to continue growing in such a toxic and disparaged country, fled across the seas with a batch of refugees being shuffled away to the Land of Water. This passage was only offered to those with young children, a warning sign her parents unfortunately hadn't picked up on. The ship ride was not the safest, the refugees forced to huddle in the cargo hold while rats freely spread illness amongst them. A third of the refugees had succumbed to what the rats had spread before they ever reached the soil of Water. Her father was part of the third that had perished, the crew didn't even let her mother say her final goodbyes to her father before he was thrown overboard. She can still hear the panicked sobbing of her mother whenever she thinks of her parents. When they had finally reached the shore of the new lands they refugees were immediately carted off by various doctor figures.

              While she was initially scared of the masked man that led her and her mother to his abode just on the outside of the Village of Mist, her mother was confidant that the man would be able to help them find a place within the village. After all that was what the flyer her parents got had said. The first three weeks in the abode was rather pleasant. She was finally able to see what it felt not to be constantly starving. She did think it was strange the man could privately ask her about the magic tricks she was able to do. Being young and stupid she finally showed him the trick, blossoming a crystal flower in her hands. It was something her mother told her to never show but she figured the doctor was super nice she just had to be nice back. It wasn't long after that her mother was murdered whilst walking to the village in hopes of finding a job at the pier. Not even six years old and bother of her parents had already left her for good. She didn't know how to react at first, her stomach felt like it was being pinched over and over, so she just mimicked what her mother had done when her father died. She clocked herself away in her small room until she cried herself out. When she next awoke she wasn't in her room anymore, instead she was in the basement. It was a place she only saw once when looking for something to play with. The doctor made it very clear she wasn't allowed there. Scared she would get yelled at she attempted to get up from the table only to find she was tied down. The doctor only a few feet away with his back turned to her, hunched over a large book and set of scrolls.

              From then on she was nothing but a guinea pig used to try to find a cure for the Plague. His colleagues had stationed a front in her homeland to find cheap and easy test subjects. Focusing on low income and rumored carriers of rare bloodlines, this doctor in particular was on the hunt for a carrier of Shōton. The deaths on the ship rider over were not accidental, it wasn't rats that went around getting people sick it was a third party they hired to cull those without bloodline talents. That left only her and her mother as potential test subjects for him, unfortunately for her mother she was above the age limit for the mad doctors thesis. Youth being the key in his mind. The pain she suffered through was worse than the hunger pangs she was used to, the needles being prodded into her skin removing and injecting fluids. The doctor even conducted magic of his very own, using his hands to cast it like some kind of villain in her fathers tales of the war. Hinds hands able to cleave into her skin without even cutting her open. The painful energy he forced into what she hand't known was her chakra points. During one particular instance the pain got to be too intense, her chakra going wild and forming a large crystal structure around her and the table she was strapped to. The doctor was visibly elated by the results of his tinkering with her chakra system. A child just barely six able to form such a large volume of a kekkei genkai just proved to him that hew was on the right track. He was obsessed with the idea of a insect trapped in a hunk of amber, his raving mind convinced the crystallization processes was key to curing a plague that killed at a specific age. His tampering with her genetics however did not just include her chakra structure... he had a large white cat trapped in a kennel across the room from her, she had always talked to it when the doctor would quit his experimentation for the night.

              She had nicknamed it snowflake in her lonelyness. She had always wondered why it was locked up too. Until the day the doctor strapped it down on a second table next to her. She blocked out just what the doctor did to the poor animal and then immediately did to her. He used a forbidden Eiseijutsu that involved combining two living beings into one body. All she can remember from the next couple days was the unbearable vomit inducing pain, the burning sensation over taking her body as a fever grew and grew. The doctor was about to label her as a failed experiment when one day he came into his lab to find the girl he was testing had undergone a metamorphosis of sorts. A secondary pair of ears had formed from the top of her scalp, her iris' having changed from blue to a solid amber, teeth taking on a more carnivore like layout, and her nails appearing to be claw like in nature. He would have asked her about all the changes she could notice but whatever happened to her had locked her mind away into a deep coma. The doctor wasn't going to let the fruits of his labor go to waste, opting to siphon her blood daily so he could run miniature experiments. On the eve of her seventh birthday he mind returned from its vacation away from the cruel world. She awoke unstrapped inside a moving carriage, while she had no idea why all her body could do was scream for her to act. It was like a whole new being was driving her body as her pupils dilated into thin slits sending her into flight or fight. being that she could barely even move on her own she decided flight was the best option, slowly crawling her heavy body to the end of the trailer and letting her body drop down to the road. The sight of his carriage vanishing over the horizon was the last she ever saw the doctor.

              Clouds loomed over head while the child stared at the dirty unsure of what she could possibly do next. Her muscles couldn't even support her, thanks to years of not being used. As rain sprinkled down onto her back she couldn't help but break into a small sad smile. As she resigned herself to drowning in the puddle forming around her small head a caravan of travelers began approaching from down the road, one of the riders sprinting her way as she closed her eyes. She awoke to the sound of an elderly ladies marveling at how she could have even made it to where she was in the state she was suffering. The sound of hushing quickly following when they noticed her eyes staring up at them. The made sure she knew she was in a safe place, that whoever had done the damage to her body was no where near by. It was the first time she had ever even gotten to see the complete changes to her body. At some point in her coma gemstone like structures had formed around various points on her body, places she remember the doctor injecting her. With a hoarse voice she asked to use a mirror to move the hair out of her face more easily. The changes were instantly noticed when she was looking at her face in the mirror, beyond how worn and ragged she looked she could finally see her new feline features. Her heart strings tugging as she thought about Snowflake and that day. throwing the compact mirror she weakly covered her face with thin arms.

              The women left her alone for the remainder of that day, letting the child acclimate to the new environment and take in the damage the mad doctor had done to her. Being left alone was both a gift and a curse, she didn't feel the many eyes staring at her anymore but she also couldn't help but notice just how different her hearing worked now. The ears she was born with seemed completely useless now, unable to take in sound from what she could tell. Instead the pair of cat ears on her scalp served as the point where her body took in sound. These new ears presenting a problem to her, beyond being sensitive to the pillow being pressed against them she could now ear a much longer range than her brain was used to processing. She could hear the family in the wagon in front of her as well as the one behind her. This constant noise input made it hell for the child to sleep. Her eyes had the advantage of having low light vision now, to her it felt like someone was keeping a lit lantern in her room while she tried to sleep. It was a rough first night away from her captor. The following couple days weren't awful though. Her visitors were kept to a minimum after the lady taking care of her noticed how panicked she would get with more than a couple people near her. They explained that they were on a pilgrimage to the northern lands of Snow, to a small monastery that practice the healing of ones soul. meekly she expressed interest and that was that. There was no shutting up this devout woman from passionately expressing just what the monastery meant to her family. Passion was tricky for her, she hadn't really had enough time to even live let alone develop and attachment to something that could make her be so expressive. It made her jealous, an emotion she hadn't felt since being back in the old country. This jealousy made her ask the woman to take her with them to this monastery so she could see how great it was with her own eyes.

              It was a long trip, all the while she let the woman take care of her. Letting the woman help her work on her alarmingly weak muscles. She was by no means a doctor, and unknowingly that was a good thing, but she knew tricks on how the body worked due to her own age. It wasn't perfect but by the time they arrived in the frigid country of snow she could manage to lift her own eating utensils without spilling stew all over her. The healing process wasn't destined to continue for a little while after all. While the caravan had made it all the way from Water to Snow, they were forced to walk the steps up the mountain into the monastery itself. There were a lot of steps. She was adamant about attempting to climb the stairs on her own but she wasn't able to pass a single step before she collapsed onto the snow covered stone. The old woman enlisted the aid of the wagon driver to carry the child up the stairs. It was the only man she could stand the presence of, due to being forced to get accustomed to the various sounds he made and the tone of his voice since all that separated them was a thin fabric. The entire trip up the long stair path was incredibly uncomfortable for her. The sound of crunched snow invading her ears constantly as wind bit her skin through her clothes was enough in itself but the physical contact of someone other than the old lady was making her animal instincts flair. No one but the woman was truly aware of how animal she was, the entire trip the woman held the childs hand to attempt to keep her from attempting to fight her way out. She had gotten Liliya to give bits of what happened to her away, and what was told was enough to stop her from following the subject further.

              They were greeted by a lone priest at the top of the stairs, his arm extended towards the doorway. His eyes locking with the child's was enough for her claws to grip into the arms of the man holding her. He nearly dropped her when his body attempted to flee from the damage, but was able to prevent it by taking the pain like a champ. As more and more people filed into the waiting area of the monastery her anxiety grew more and more. Her cat ears threatening to burst free of the hood she was wearing as her hairs began standing on end. Luckily the same priest from before began letting people further into the building, letting his fellows lead other people towards the main worship area. Waiting until people were nearly gone to specifically get the man, woman, and child to follow him. He led them to a solitary room containing a brazier, set of benches, and a single statue. She was set down on the furthest bench, using all her strength to remain sitting as the man began praying in front of the statue and the priest talked quietly with the woman. Of course he was unaware that she could hear ever word they were saying. He was inquiring about what exactly was wrong with her, mentioning the gemstone sticking out of her chest and the pair of lumps bulging under her hood. The woman simply mentioned how she was caring for the child since they found her on the road. Not long after the silence following he carefully walked in front of her with purpose as the woman joined the man in prayer. The only question he asked is if she would like to let her ears out of the stuffy hood. She only glared as he lifted the fabric off letting her ears spring upwards. She cannot forget the look of overwhelming sadness he gave her when he put together some of the pieces of her puzzle. "I am sorry your journey has been so long, child." Is all he said before taking a seat next to her as they waited for the other pair to finish praying.

              The following couple days she remained by the womans side at all times, on edge the entire time no matter who was nearby. She learned about prayer and what it meant to the woman during these days, how the woman was at peace with the fact that she only had a couple months at max to walk the earth. And she was content spending them with the frail child who so needed to be saved. It was hard for her to bear, the looks of pity was one thing but knowing she was taking someones valuable time just because she was afraid to live was another. It was the push she need to truly begin her healing process. During the night when the woman was sleeping she crawled her way out of the room into the hall in search of the man who had greeted them, that had given her that empathetic look. If these guys could heal spirits she owed it to the granny to lighten the womans load. It wasn't long before her struggling caught the attention of a near by priest who immediately went to get the head priest. Unknowingly being the person the girl was after in the first place. Asking for her permission first he asked if he could carry her to the room they spoke in. Soon it was just her and the head priest sitting in the dimmly lit room stating down at the stone figure at the end. Her pained words begged the man to help her get better so she wouldn't waste any more of the kind ladies time. He told her in no uncertain terms that he couldn't heal her body at all, he was no doctor. Instead he could help the girl take the first step in healing her soul so it could bear the pain of letting her body begin its own healing process. The scars of her mind were a powerful force holding her back. She knew becoming better in an instant was beyond anyone's powers but it still hurt her to know she was likely to lose the granny before she could even stand. He listed in silence as she sobbed at her failures.

              When her sobbing had ended he offered to help guide her soul back to its rightful state of peace, and she accepted any help he was willing to give a failure like her. The following weeks she was carried back to that same room every day to listen to the man guide her on the journey into her blackened heart. It was in these sessions that she was forced to give more and more of her weathered past to the man, baring her mental wounds for him to bear so he could help her come to terms with each of them. It was during one of these sessions that news of the caravan beginning its trip back to water was sent to the head priest. Leaving her alone to sort through her emotions while he saw them off. The only two from the caravan that remained were the old woman who wished to die close to the monastery and the girl who had nowhere to go. It wasn't too long after that the woman's days began to be numbered, she hadn't long before she passed. Her state being reduced to match the girl she was looking after, unable to leave the bed on her own. Liliya devoted her self completely to the old ladies faith in the monastery, letting her mental guards of trusting loosen letting the head priest in completely. It was the day she managed to come to terms with the fact that she was no longer the little refugee from across the seas, she was now just Liliya. She understood why the doctor did such cruel things to her, she forgave him because she knew no one else would. It was like someone removed a vice grip from her spinal column as she was being carried back to the granny's room, her heart sinking when she saw the priest gathered around the doorway. Pity was all she could see in their faces. She struggled her way out of the head priest arms, dropping to the ground. She forced herself to crawl into the room her instincts to protect in full gear. If she couldn't get a grip she would just dig her claws into the cracks of the stone and force her body forward. The priest for their part let her react to the situation in her own way, holding the door open for her as she struggled to move further into the room. Even in the dark she could see how slowly granny was breathing, mustering up all her strength and courage she forced her burning muscles upwards stumbling forward to the side of the bed. As she took the woman's hand they locked eyes, both struggling to stay as they were. She not a single ounce of pity but only loving pride in the small girl as she closed her eyes one final time. The girls strength fading with the woman. She fell to a crumpled mess as she stared blankly at her bloodied finger nails. She was powerless, unable to even muster the power to say goodbye to her beacon of hope. She faded into sleep on the floor like a defeated animal. The following couple days were spent staring blankly at that oh so familiar statue while the priests readied the monastery for a funeral. She said her goodbyes as the pyre was cast and her granny entered into the next life.

              It took her a few weeks to muster up the strength to continue working under the head priest but she finally managed it. She was alive, and she needed to keep living for all those she saw off. Their belief in her life enough to power her through the darkness she carried with her. Wasn't long before the other members of the monastery would sit in on her lessons, offering to help her if she ever seemed to be struggling. She wasn't able to reply to any of them at that point but she appreciated the concern despite the agitation her body would feel. The coming months she would begin attempting to work on her muscles slowly, lifting her own books and (with help) standing for a few minutes a day. The pain would slowly but surely lessen the more she preformed these simple tasks. By the time her 10th year rolled over she was able to walk on her own, she was slow but she could manage to stay up without killing all of her stamina. She was also able to talk to the priests and priestesses without wanting to flee the moment they looked in her direction. These were all fruits of her hard labor to live up to grannys pride. It wasn't until she was thirteen that she was asked to greet the coming pilgrims scheduled to arrive that week. She was a wreck of nerves and panic but she accepted the duty, it was a necessary step of her recovery. When they new caravan arrived she was like a statue, stiff as a board just standing at the gate with her hand extended. When the first guest greeted her it took all her courage not to break out into shivers of fear. With a single nod and forced smile they passed her on into the monastery. The last person she had to greet was a familiar face, it was the carriage driver that had carried her up those stone stairs so long ago. Rather than her forced introductions she bowed to the man and thanked him in a shaky voice.



          ►►► T E C H N I Q U E S

            Limitations:
              Ninjutsu: 00 //02
              Genjutsu: 00 //05
              Misc: 00 //00
              Bloodline: 01 //∞
              Taijutsu Styles: 00 //00
              Bukijutsu Styles: 00 //00


            N i n j u t s u :
              ------- Maruton
                [ E-rank ]

                [ D-rank ]

                [ C-rank ]

                [ B-rank ]

                [ A-rank ]

                [ S-rank ]

                [ SS-rank ]


              ------- Suiton
                [ E-rank ]

                [ D-rank ]

                [ C-rank ]

                [ B-rank ]

                [ A-rank ]

                [ S-rank ]

                [ SS-rank ]


              ------- Doton
                [ E-rank ]

                [ D-rank ]

                [ C-rank ]

                [ B-rank ]

                [ A-rank ]

                [ S-rank ]

                [ SS-rank ]


              ------- Shōton
                [ E-rank ]
                ◇ Shou Soujuu [Crystal Manipulation]
                Description: This control allows the Crystal user to create and bend existing crystals as though it were their own. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate their crystalline objects they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any crystal that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
                ___ Rank E: Very small crystals [a pebble].
                ___ Rank D: Small crystals [a rock].
                ___ Rank C: Medium crystals [a growth].
                ___ Rank B: Large crystals [a stalagmite, stalactite].
                ___ Rank A: Enormous crystals [several columns].
                ___ Rank S: Massive crystals [a small cavern].
                [ D-rank ]

                [ C-rank ]

                [ B-rank ]

                [ A-rank ]

                [ S-rank ]

                [ SS-rank ]


            G e n j u t s u :
              ------- Type
                [ E-rank ]

                [ D-rank ]

                [ C-rank ]

                [ B-rank ]

                [ A-rank ]

                [ S-rank ]

                [ SS-rank ]


            T a i j u t s u :
              ------- Style Name
                Stage One:
                ◇ n/a
                ◇ n/a

            B u k i j u t s u :
              ------- Style Name
                Stage One:
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2018 6:04 am


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After close review, the following profile is [Denied]. Please see your name below for any notes.

magcookie
Just a couple of things to fix!

1. Fears: We do require three [3] fears on a profile. So you could always just put something weird and random in there.

2. Chimeric Abomination: This is a great PA but just a bit overwhelming. This can work for external injuries to any extent, but, per Lan, we can't let it affect internal injuries, as it completely cancels out the healing classes. This is the only part that needs to be fixed to approve it.

That aside, it would essentially work like an 'auto-field triage' skill. He suggested connecting it to the Field Triage skill, giving a [+4] to the skill, and having the ability get stronger as that skill does. What that entails exactly, I'm not sure. So I'd suggest talking to Lan to hash out the details if you wanted to go this route.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2018 8:16 pm


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Alright, added fear, changed around skill points, and adjusted third PA.
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