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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 2:38 pm
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Rain Yupa The Number Three Ha, completed Character Sheet. Enjoy. Thanks to KytanaTheThief for all your help. Val the BarbarianYou... you have "Agility" as a miscellaneous bonus to Arcana? eek Speaking of which, you never gained your AC/Reflex bonus from Barbarian Agility. There's two ways to do this: Class bonus to AC and Ref of 1, or simply list it as a Shield Bonus (next to your Armor bonus, above your speed). Both will accomplish the same thing. It's technically NOT a shield bonus, but since you're using a two-handed weapon and are a barbarian, I don't see many shields in your future. This next one isn't wrong but a matter of preference: I wouldn't list your encounter powers as Quick Look-Up. They won't be hard to figure out later, but there's several reasons: One, you'll get more and there's not enough room for them, and two, I would list a "Melee Basic Attack". You have a leader (the pixie) who can grant you free melee basic attacks, and it'll be handy to look up too whenever you make an opportunity attack. YOU DO NOT NEED TO LIST IT. But I think it would be more useful than listing your encounter powers. Another suggestion, WHICH IS NOT MANDATORY: You have the Powerful Charge feat that makes your charges better. A Barbarian At-Will you did not take is Howling Strike, which make your charges better too. Just saying. A +1 Maul does not cost 30 gp, but 360 gp. But it is "free" for character creation. I have you spending 97 gp otherwise, giving you 203 gp left over. You need to update your XP. I've said it before, and I'll say it more in the future: You are a monster neutral "Friendly grin"? *looks at your included picture* Besides that, everything is dandy! Excellent work! DM Note to Self: Very few changes needed! And updated.
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 2:38 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 3:53 pm
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Rain Yupa I'm shocked you didn't keep your dice rolls... If you want to benefit from the +2 Athletics for your background, you kind of need to give me a background sweatdrop I... don't know if I should ask you to fill in the stats at the top of the sheet. confused Alignment and XP should be fixed though. Oh, and deity too. Kind of important. You need to update your language. I don't see "Rock Armor" as a utility power in any of the books (aside: TOO MANY BOOKS DUDE) Checking your currency, I think we solved your deity problem sweatdrop You still need to give me a character background as per my first post. Fix 'er up and let me see when you're done smile DM Note to Self: Mostly just fleshing out left.
Yeah sorry, I stopped working on her character sheet when it looked like I wasn't going to get in and haven't had a real chance to pick it back up on account of me working this weekend. Rock Armor is a second level utility presented in Hero's of Elemental Chaos. I don't have that book on hand otherwise I would tell you what page. It is in with the Elementalist/sorcerer section but is usable by all sorcerers. I know my sources are all over but I use the dnd character builder to build all my characters. Its actually quite hard for me to limit myself to just a few books when I have all their published materials at my fingertips. ><
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 8:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 8:11 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 9:06 pm
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Rain Yupa Dion Necurat Set 1. 2, 6, 5, 6, = 17 4, 3, 4, 4, = 12 2, 1, 6, 3, = 11 2, 4, 6, 5, = 15 5, 1, 3, 1 = 93, 6, 4, 2, = 13 5, 2, 2, 5 = 12 kualus457 I guess i'm not going to join this one then Whichever one of you gets me a character sheet that's at least mostly done gets the last spot!
I'll opt out. I've got too much on my plate anyway.
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Posted: Sun Jun 02, 2013 10:05 pm
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Rain Yupa Thank you for listing book sources for feats/powers! heart As a note about myself, any erratas that fix broken or poorly worded powers I enforce. Erratas that fix any unfounded player complaints I leave optional (for example, "Magic Missile"). Half-elves have an optional race power instead of Dilettante. If you want to swap out, let me know. (Personally I'd prefer Dilettante 10 times out of 9). You forgot your Warlock +1 Ref/Will defense bonuses. I'm curious why you have your quick look up for Con damage as "2d8+"... Personally, very pleased with your second chosen feat, because not enough people take feats like that! Yeah, the class defense bonuses is pretty much the only nagging thing! DM Note to Self: Practically pristine! Hey, I feel your pain, fellow internet DM. I don't have a Wizard's membership, and hunting all that stuff down is horrifyingly time consuming. (Especially since I do have access to the Dragon 'zines, too.)
If there are erratas that apply to my character, just let me know. I've never looked them up before.
Fixed the defenses, derp.
My only Con attack is one of my Encounters, so I just listed the full damage for it. I tweak all that stuff as needed as the campaign moves along.
Born of the Elements is a prereq feat for a few other feats/paragon paths/epic destinies that I hadn't decided if I wanted yet. But Heroic tier feats are so meh anyway, I figured why not grab it for the extra language. I was going to take Primordial for my bonus, but with the feat, it let me use my bonus for Dwarven, which helped flesh out my background.
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:43 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 7:38 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:15 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:40 pm
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Liquidor Rain Yupa There's still one spot open. At this point, even those I asked to volunteer out are eligable. Iris M.D. Nellis [Half-Elf Bard] is available for hire.
I'll probably look into the sheet tomorrow.
In the meantime, there's settlement decisions that need to be made! I think it's just you now who needs to pick one more from the list. Pretty sure it's just back a page.
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Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 9:06 pm
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