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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:42 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:43 am
]I really like these colours and think they will go smashingly together - the black is a little over powering for me in this instance. Unless you wanted to change the skin to black as well and add more red+blue items? Otherwise still a bit more in the way of red and blue but a bit less black? ^_^ I have faith in you. And you're right yellow isn't my most prevalent colour so please feel free to choose others for avis as well ^_^Oh that's beautifulll. I've had orange+green avis before but the black really brings it together nicely. Submitted <3The particular style of hair on appears cut when couples with Sainte: Agape - but I have plenty of other white wigs so no biggie ^_^ I like the flow of this one much better. Submitted.]
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 11:29 am
I cut it down on the black a bit, better?  And here's another. I don't think the anklets match well though. Thoughts? 
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:22 pm
Oh I DO like this as a start - the green+blue+yellow looks fan. I think it needs a bit more in the way of yellow spread out throughout the avi and some more blue as well but other than that it seems great. The second one is bery cute and I like the blue+purple, it's just not my personal style. Almost TOO cute, you know?Thank you for the feedback, you are very kind . I am glad that you like the first one heart I will see if I can improve it to your taste. Is this better? 
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:58 pm
I'm not sure I get how this works, for instance how to check the layering... but I thought I'd still give it a try.  it looks way better with the hair under the hood and i'd definitely change the pose and put the handhelds one in each hand, but how do you do that if you don't have all the items in your inventory?
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:00 am
Hmm, any better?  This is how it actually layers. 
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:20 am
I do think it looks better with the thinning of the black but it still is a little uneven to me. I'd like to see a lot more of the colours spread out throughout the avi (also the anklets don't quite match up with the other reds, I didn't notice before)
For the second I'm not a big fan of the dress as it's a bit too bulky in the way it flows away from the avi and it can be hard to layer with. Also the anklets are cute but a bit too bright for the other oranges. <3You know what I think (besides I'm a pest to make you go back and change it) is that I don't have enough yellow items to really help even it out. But I think maybe dropping the green and yellow would make it easier to make the avi come together? Ok, when checking the layering all you have to do is go to the 'Customize Me' page where you would normally change your own avi's clothing and then put the items on your own avi. To see if it matches up with what you made on tektek.
Here's what it looks like below; I removed any items that I didn't care for (the face) and there were some items not in my inventory (Checkmate Void, etc) Please make sure to only use my inventory ^_^ It's a tad too bulky for me and I think the blue could be spaced out a bit more evenly throughout the avi but not a bad start at all I do like the edits ^_^ The wings while a very nice touch make it a bit too bulky for me personally - really looking to center all the items on the the avi's body <3 If you don't mind some changes I made, happy to submit?
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:36 am
Ok, when checking the layering all you have to do is go to the 'Customize Me' page where you would normally change your own avi's clothing and then put the items on your own avi. To see if it matches up with what you made on tektek.
Here's what it looks like below; I removed any items that I didn't care for (the face) and there were some items not in my inventory (Checkmate Void, etc) Please make sure to only use my inventory ^_^ It's a tad too bulky for me and I think the blue could be spaced out a bit more evenly throughout the avi but not a bad start at all thanks for the feedback! I'm looking for a link to your inventory items. i found the link to your previous avis and tediously wrote down every item on every avatar. i guess that was the wrong thing to do. sweatdrop definitely new at this but it was fun learning the different items i've never seen before. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 11:55 am
The only problem with this is the hair- but the hat should cover it.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 11:56 am
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 2:04 pm
Oh WOW, no that's wayyy to much work for you. On the first post there is an avi with just a bathing suit - click it and edit that avi. That is a link to my inventory <3Hey there,
Sorry this particular avi isn't my personal style. It's a bit too bulky for me and none of the colours really mesh well together. Please feel free to try again - there is a link to my previous avis on the first page to give you an idea of my taste.Oh I really like the changes on the first one! The orange at the bottom is still a bit brighter than the orange up top, a thicker - maybe either change the bottom or the top? I like both.
The second one is closer again (lol sorry!) but still not quite there. Maybe I still find the black a little too much in the torso area - maybe drop the wrap and go from there? <3
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 2:13 pm
Oh, alright, I might try again if I've got time.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:06 pm
I Tried . . . Feedback Please ? ^__^
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