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 Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:59 am
Clutter: Much better, I like the edits. Submitted.
Gold Shop: I like the colours on this avi, it just seems a bit bulky to me - care to trim it down a bit a resubmit?
Clutter: This avi is adorable - only thing at all I'd like to see is a bit more cream at the bottom. <3Clutter: Submitted ^_^
Clutter 2: Submitted
Clutter 3: Also submitted
Clutter 4: At first I thought the wings and scarf seemed a bit off to me, but the more I look it over the more I think they suit the avi. Submitted.
Clutter 5: I think this is a super cute avi for a start. I think it could use a bit more in the way of purple for blending if possible.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:16 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:44 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:39 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:37 pm
Gold Shop: It's a little scattered for my tastes and the colours need a bit more in the way of balancing. If you check out the first page there is a list of entries that made it for each category - maybe take a look at those for some inspiration? ^_^Gold Shop: That looks loads better - the only thing left is the gold attached to the upper arm items. It's out of place - is there anything that could substitute for it?
Clutter: Very cute. Submitted.
Clutter 2: I really dig the blue and orange. The jacket can be really difficult to work with as well. Submitted.
Clutter 3: I am super behind this avi - the only thing that stands out to me is the orange in the bow - maybe try to find either a minty/gold item for the top of a couple different items of those colours? Great start.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:54 pm
Final Edits:I couldn't find a substitute for the arms. I could however, keep it the way it was and add more gold to the avi. 
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:20 pm
Heres some more clutter...I mean, entries, xd Clutter Clutter EDIT: A few new ones Clutter/Maybe Summer? Clutter/Maybe Summer?
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:10 am
Gold Shop: Yes, maybe adding more gold to help balance it out will be just what we need ^_^
Clutter: If you don't mind, I've added a crown to bring a bit more gold to the top?
Ah clutter, the way to my heart lol
Clutter: It's defiintely a very striking avi I'm just not a big fan of the colour balance here. I like the colours chosen it just seems a bit too busy.
Clutter 2: I adore the colours here - I thought a couple items made it a bit too bulky so I trimmed it down. If there's anyway to partially cover some of hte white in the skirt I think it will be ready for submission ^_^
Clutter 3: Again I like this as a start - it's just a bit bulky. Maybe remove the hair and focus just on the body?
Clutter 4: Super cute expression - I think it could use a bit in the way of colour balance thought. ^_^Hi there ^_^
Gold Shop: I like the look of her - very clockwork orangesque. I'd like too see a bit more in the way of matching colours and balance though.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:17 am
This edit any better? (: And here's a clutter entry:
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:08 pm
Fixed one, New One Clutter(Fixed) Clutter/Summer?
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:32 am
Gold Shop: I like this version much better. It still could use a bit of work in colour balance - maybe more white at the bottom?
Clutter: Super cute start - I really like it. It's a bit too bulky with the wings, maybe remove those and just focus on spreading the reds and blacks out a bit more in the bottom area. One thing that stands out for me is how much brighter the shoes are than the other reds.Clutter: Yea changing the hair definitely helped trim it a bit - I'm happy with the bulk of it now. Just a bit in the way of colour matching - some of the yellows and oranges are mismatched. I don't mind having multiples of close colours as long as they balance out <3
Clutter / Summer: I like this one just the way it is but I need to know which category you are submitting it for.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 9:56 am
Gold shop edit: Clutter edit: Summer:
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 3:50 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:08 am
Gold Shop: Oh I really like these revisions as well - the black socks seem a bit too dark over the other greys though.
Clutter: Cute ^_^ At first glance I didn't care for the stockings but the more I look it over the more I think they suit. Submitted.
Summer: Normally I don't care for the lusty look but it makes for the perfect 'just applied sun oil' look. Nice use of the colours - submitted.
I don't mind stretching it out <3
Summer: Submitted - very cute.
Clutter: Submitted as well.
Clutter 2: I think this is a great colour blending on this avi - normally I don't go for slippers but they work really well here. Submitted.
Gold Shop: Oh nicely done - it can be really tricky to match up greens and blues - especially when limited to cash shop. Different sets as well which is always nice to see - submitted.
Summer 2: In it's own way this definitely does make me think of summer but I'm not a huge fan of the overall colour matching. Just seems a bit all over the place.
Clutter 3: I don't think I have ever seen a mint+black avi before - I like it. I think it could use a little bit more in the way of cream up at the head but other than that very nice.
Clutter 4: Lovely - really a big fan of this one. Submitted ^_^
Clutter 5: It still seems just a bit too busy for my tastes with all the different colours on there. Love the brightness though.
Clutter 6: Super cute colours but not quite cluttered enough for this category <3
Summer 3: Love the brightness of some of the items. I think it could also use a bit more in the way of colour balance though. (ie: spacing out the pink, etc)
Clutter 7: If we could add a bit more cream spaced out I think it would be perfect.
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