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Bishop186
MrJimmy
Yeah I figured it was around that much.
I'm wondering what you mean by "edit" does that mean that you just fixed the spacing to your likeing, or did you do any othter editing?
I'm shooting for alot more pages too actually, after finishing the next few sections, I plan actually go back over what I have and give it a second draft. There are a whole bunch of things that I want to fix, add, and get rid of, expand on, describe, and make sound better. and I know for a fact that there are alot of places where I need to do "a lot"/"allot" conversions, and there are only about five places where "Siani" is spelt correctly.
After I get done, I'll post up Part 1: Draft 2. I'm shooting for doubling every section in size as well as doubling my page count. In the very least I'm going to go for a X1.5.
70 pages here we come!
I'm wondering what you mean by "edit" does that mean that you just fixed the spacing to your likeing, or did you do any othter editing?
I'm shooting for alot more pages too actually, after finishing the next few sections, I plan actually go back over what I have and give it a second draft. There are a whole bunch of things that I want to fix, add, and get rid of, expand on, describe, and make sound better. and I know for a fact that there are alot of places where I need to do "a lot"/"allot" conversions, and there are only about five places where "Siani" is spelt correctly.
After I get done, I'll post up Part 1: Draft 2. I'm shooting for doubling every section in size as well as doubling my page count. In the very least I'm going to go for a X1.5.
70 pages here we come!
By "Edit" I mean that I added a few obligatory "and"s, changes all your "it's" to "its," changed some commas to semicolons, spelled things correctly, changed up spacing a little bit to read a little better, and put double-spaces in the conversations/paragraphs to make it easier to read, because I'm nitpicky like that before I read things. xd
Except for spelling in a few places and the semicolons-in-place-of-commas, I made sure and left speech completely intact without any of those "ands" because that's how the person speaks, and not the actual writing.
If you want a copy to look over and perhaps work on your draft from I can send it to you. I saved it on my computer as "Jimmy's Story So Far" so I could go back and read it. sweatdrop There's probably a few problems still in there, I weeded most of them out with MSWord's spell/grammar check. I found a couple more when reading and changed them mid-read, but I'm sure I probably missed *some* (not saying your writing's all that terrible, just saying that I'm inobservant, even when being nit-picky lol ).
In totally unrelated news: WHY AM I STILL AWAKE?!! gonk
Egads. You're as bad as I used to be. I used to copy and paste fanfics into Word because I just couldn't stand all of the bad grammar. I'm not quite so obsessive compulsive these days, I suppose.
I Am A Ninja.
