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Jennalaia

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 8:54 pm


(Wait... Dark Zelda took real Zelda already... she's gone... in the Shadow Realm... on her way to Skytall Tower...)
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 8:56 pm


Sapphire_Link
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While Dark was swinging his sword, he got distracted by Princess Zelda and stopped.
"Zelda!" He called out to Dark Zelda, his fellow shadow, notifying her of their new arrival.
....Better aware Shadow Zelda of Sapphire Links Ice Arrows...


(Well, he was sort of in the middle of fighting Red at the time, so all he really paid much mind to was Princess Zelda. After all, they were sent to kidnap her, so it's only logical that his top priority would be Zelda and not whatever the other Links were doing at the time. I mean, he even stopped in the middle of combat and lowered his defenses just because he saw Zelda, so not much else really mattered to him. That's the way I want Dark Link to think; seek the goal of the mission first and foremost, being cheeky and fun coming second, if that makes sense)

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:00 pm


While Dark Link's defenses were down, Red's blade tore through his torso. The wound wasn't too deep, and being a shadow it wasn't too severe.
A strange, black liquid oozed out of the wound. Dark Link touched it with his pointer and middle finger and brought some of the liquid to his mouth to taste.
"Heh...hehehe... So this is what pain feels like..." he said, his grin widening.

(Oh, but I did not forget about that. ^^ Oh, Dark... I'm having so much fun developing your character. ^^)
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:06 pm


((Sapphire, you're not making very much sense, and please, start shaping your posts up grammar wise. I don't see why you're capitalizing verbs, or why you're ending all of your sentences with ellipses (...) Not only is it grammatically incorrect, but it doesn't flow right when people are reading it. End your post with a period, because it's less you have to do. As for capitalizing, only proper nous (names, and places namely) and the first word at the beginning of a sentence need a capital . You don't need to capitalize verbs or "ocarina". "Ocarina of Time" is a proper noun, however, but "ocarina' alone isn't and doesn't need a capital. Grammar is serious matter in the RP section and actions will be taken if you don't try to improve, because quite frankly, I will not put up with it.

On another note, try to give more to your character because right now, Sapphire Link is rather bland. We don't get to know what he's thinking, or the motivation behind his actions. You're only doing actions, and outside a fight, that doesn't give the rest of much to go off it.

L, as a hint, press preview to see if anyone posted before you did and make corrections before you post.))

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:11 pm


Red smiled as he landed a hit on Dark. It wasn't a solid hit but it was a hit. He took Dark's time of feeling pain and jumped forward, using his last foot that touched the ground to twist off of as he performed another spin attack.



(yup I edited my last post and sorry about that sweatdrop )
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:19 pm


Dark Link fell into the shadows. Red's blade nicked his cheek, causing a scar.
His voice emanated from around, "I don't intend on dying today. We have what needed, so for now you win. But you'd better improve. I'll be looking forward to our rematch."
Dark Link laughed as he went to the tower to meet with Dark Zelda and their new prisoner.

(Daawww, Dark Link made a friend! ^^)

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Jennalaia

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:24 pm


(WHERE THE HELL DID MALON COME FROM?!? YOU AREN'T MAKING ANY SENSE WHATSOEVER!!)

Dark Zelda reappeared at the top floor of Skytall Tower. "Welcome to your new home," she grinned.

(Sorry for the short post, but I have to go to bed! See you later!)
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:27 pm


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Sapphire Link says to himself as he is drinking the milk Malon gives him, "how will the us four Links have victory if we do not start working together more..."??

((Oh and I will Type my posts however I feel like, as long as the story goes on...you just have to go with it and not be pissy))


(Sapphire, she's honestly not trying to belittle you in any way. Dioji is in charge of the RPG section, so it wouldn't kill you to show a little respect. It's pretty rude to brush off someone else's advice like that saying you'll do whatever you want when clearly that isn't the way the RPGs are run.
I'd highly recommend taking her advice, especially if you want to continue in the roleplay. It's not that we don't want you here, it's just that you could honestly use improvement in your posts. And not all of them move the story along. The post you made about bringing Skull Kid in for example: Nobody made him a profile, he's not a part of the Four Swords game (Neither is Midna, but she has a profile filled out and we've decided to give that character a chance here), he didn't contribute to the fight and honestly it was confusing. I'm not just saying this so I can be mean and yell and rant; I'm doing it because I'd like to see you work with us. Please take this into consideration.)

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:33 pm


Red couldn't help but give a chuckle. "Yeah I'll win the next time we fight each other." He sung his sword and the back ooze dissipated as it touched the ground. Sheathing his sword he looked at Green Link and walked over to him with a frown. "Don't worry we'll save her. All we have to do is get the that tower thing." Putting a hand on Green's shoulder he looked at him with a smile.

With the enemies and Zelda gone Link let out a pained sigh and sheathed his sword. "This is why I work alone." he muttered and looked at Red over his shoulder.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:48 pm


Dark Link made his way through the dark realm. (So original with names am I...)
His wound was still pouring, so he stopped by a river. Despite how murky it was, he could still see his reflection quite well. He poured some water over his wound and the shadow managed to fix itself.
Dark looked at his face in the water and touched his scar.
"Hehe..." he chuckled as he remembered the rush of battle.
Remembering his duty, he went towards Skytall Tower where he would meet with the Princesses.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 11:40 pm


((Sapphire, don't even start. The captain is the one who wanted decent grammar in the RPG section, hence why she gave me and a few others the power to take care of just that. If you want to type how you want, then I suggest you take it up with her. If you want to type how you please, you're welcome to go elsewhere, because honestly, you're either barely make sense or you make no sense.))

Vio panted, then turned his gaze to the exit. The only way to find Zelda was to start moving, not sitting around and feeling sorry. But he needed more clues. He approached the Link in green slowly, not wanting to upset him by getting too close. Vio glanced up at Red. "We need clues first. And even if we do find the Tower, I highly doubt we are ready to fight those shadows in our current state. We just can't rush into battle without thinking."
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 12:16 am


Red looked at Vio and nodded with a sigh. "Yeah...that's true...but where would we start?" he asked.

Green looked at Vio also and thought for a minute. "Well we can start by asking people if they know where the Skytall Tower is."

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:13 am


{{~Ty L for rping Green for me. Since he's part of the last post, I'm just making an ooc right now. I'm amazed that an argument, 3 more pages, the kidnapping of Zelda was in less than 12 hours... I have to be online more. XD Anyway, L, can you rp for Green when ever I'm offline?~}}
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