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 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:41 pm
Don't worry K0m0d0, I'm sure we can pick it up from here. You've done a lot already. I'm sure everyone else appreciates what you've done as much as I do 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:43 pm
Yes, we all apreciate what you'vedone K0m0d0. It's a lot.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:49 pm
Wow, I'm surpised. I thought there would be like ten pages more than when I left.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 10:17 pm
yeah...it's slowed down a bit now that we have all the characters and writers and everything...I think we (at least I am) are all now just waiting to see the first draft and stuffs confused
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 11:59 pm
I was bored and decied to see if anyone'd like this one. Supposedly in this one he was interupted by Muffin:
Inside classroom...
Viral C: *whispers to himself and mumbles with a sour face* Stupid squox...! You'll...get...what's comming to you...!
Outside of classroom 15 minutes ago...
Prinniesdood: *gets punched in the gut* Ugh! *falls and curls up*
Viral C: *looms over Prinniesdood like an evil shadow with red eyes* That's...what you get...for...mumbling...so...much. Next time...I'll...bust...your...knee...caps...!
Prinniesdood: *mutters out weakly while blood drips from his mouth* I-I'm sorry...
Viral C: *kicks Prinniesdood in the gut* What...was...that!?
Muffin: *comes to Prinniesdood's aid by coming in between Viral and Prinniesdood* That's enough!
Viral: Huh? *face changes into disgust* You again! Why are you...risking your...life for this...weakling? I told you...that...i'll beat you...up...tomorrow! I've...got...a schedule...on who I beat up...ya know! You're scheduled...tomorrow!
Muffin: *has completely ignored Viral and is kneeling next to Prinniesdood* Hey, you okay?
Prinniesdood: *looks up at muffin and winces in pain* M-Muffin...I'm sorry, that you're in this mess...
Muffin: Don't be. We're cousins after all. We gotta watch out for each other.
Viral: Hey...punk! I'm talking here!
Muffin: *helps Prinniesdood up* Just leave us alone.
Viral: What...did...you say!? *goes into a demonic state* Rrrrrrrraaaaarrgh! *charges and attempts to do a tackle on Muffin*
Prinniesdood: *eyes grow wide as he watches Viral charge* Muffin! Look out! *pushes muffin out of the way*
Muffin: Ack! *Trips over a rake on the grass which ends up hitting Viral in the face and knocking him out*
Prinniesdood: *tries to duck as the rake bounces off Viral's face but still hits prinniesdood* Ouchies! *rubs for head with both hands with small tears in his eyes* I'm sorry...I didn't mean for this to happen...
Muffin: *stands up and dusts himself off* Heh...Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! What a team we make, huh, Prinn?
Prinniesdood: *bows repeatedly and apologetically to the unconcious Viral* I'm so sorry! I'm so sorry! I'm so...
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:03 am
That's.....wow. Awesome. I think it'll be aproved.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:42 am
Firstly, Prinny that's amazing. 3nodding Sounds like a good thing you have.
Secondly, how in the world is this now 50 pages!? I've apparently missed a lot.
Thirdly, well, um... I'm ready to help out with whatever now that I know my tools are fully functional now.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:32 am
*reads over stuff* Great stuff, Prinn and Jimmy!
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:58 am
*does dorky thumbs up* I APPROVE PRINNY! =^_^=
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:19 am
I just thought of this as I was writing it...I'm sorry if it is not to your liking or does not match any of the plot:
Muffin's house...
Eien: *walks into the living room casually* Hey Muffin.
Muffin: *is sitting on the couch watching t.v.* What's up Eien?
Eien: Nothin' much. You? *plops down on the couch and a fart sound is heard. Eien is unphased by the sound* So that's where I put that whoopie cusion.
Muffin: Man, school was harsh today...all of the students during lunch made fun of me and to make matters worse even my teacher, Mr. Matrias, joined to make fun of me.
Eien: *takes the remote and changes the channel* Let's see what's new on the AnimeZ Channel.
Muffin: Just old stuff.
Eien: *stands on the couch and yells at muffin* Hey! What's wrong with old-style anime!?
Meanwhile outside...
{a camera is pointed at the window. The pictures being taken are being focused on Muffin...}
????: *has the camera covering her face* Hm-hm-hm-hm-hm...I see you, Muffikins! And you'll be Mut's pretty damn soon! *continues taking pictures*
Inside...
Jimmy: *is standing at the window and is watching The-Mut-Cat taking pictures. with a big grin, Jimmy opens the window* Excuse me, young lady? Would you like to come in for some tentacle, er, I mean tea?
Outside...
The-Mut-Cat: *falls back with her camera* Ack! *sweat* N-no thank you! But thank-you for the offer! *scratches the back of her head* Maybe next time! Okay!? Byeeeeee! *runs away in a frenzy with a cloud of smoke trails*
Inside...
Jimmy: *goes into a gloomy state* Damn...I was so close...If only I didn't mention "tentacle"...
Muffin: *stands up from the couch* Hey, dad, who was that?
Jimmy: My next victim, er, I mean some girl taking pictures of you. By the way...*gives an evil-eye look at Eien* Where's my rent?
Eien: *gulp* Um, Oh! Look at the time! I really must be going now! There's an Anime Convention I have to be at! Choa! *runs out of the house*
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:35 am
LOL I read it, I think its funny 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:48 am
Ooooh...very nice. I like the fact that Jimmy lost a victim oddly. I shal,l never be a Jimmy victim....I hope.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:43 am
Starlaa wanted in so:
Starlaa-Little girl who seems to follow Prinniesdood around.
I'll change the person she follows around if no one likes that idea. Well, here's the story i thought of on the spur of the moment:
Muffin: *is walking to school and notices a little girl following him, after looking at a window reflection* Huh? Who's that? *speeds up but girl starts matching his speed as she follows* Don't tell me she's another bully... *runs, but the girl runs after him*
School gates...
Celes: *has her arms crossed* Muffin's late.
Prinniesdood: I'm sorry...I should have called him a 50th time...
Dragorn: *with an Indian accent* Perhaps he has found a girlfriend and is walking her to school the long way! ^^
Celes: *vein pops-up on her head* What...was...that!?
Prinniesdood: *nervously* Ah! C-Celes, m-maybe he got wet again and had to change!
Dragorn: *with his accent* Are you sure about that, Prinn? ^^
Muffin: *huff* Hey! *waves at Celes, Dragorn, and Prinniesdood* Sorry, I'm late! *girl is following right behind him and doesn't seem to be out of breath*
Celes and Prinniesdood: *gonk* He's...with a girl!?
Dragorn: *with his accent* I told you so! ^^
Celes: *starts glowing with that weird anime aura stuff* Muuuuuffiiiin! Who's that girl that's with you!?
Dragorn: *with his accent* Look! She's going Super Saiyan! ^^
Prinniesdood: *in fear* C-Celes?
Celes: *punches Prinniesdood, sending him flying* This is your fault Dragorn! If you didn't say that he was with a girl!
Prinniesdood: *lands next to Muffin* >.< I'm sorry...How come I'm the one who gets hit...
Dragorn: *kneels next to prinniesdood* You were the closest one to hit! ^^
Muffin: *sweat* I'm not sure who this girl is either. She just started following me.
Girl: *bows to muffin and runs over to help Prinniesdood up*
Prinniesdood: I'm sorry...Thank-you...
Girl: *smiles and hands him a piece of paper which reads: "Starlaa"*
Celes: You know her, Prinn? She a friend of yours?
Prinniesdood: I'm sorry, I don't.
Muffin: Maybe her name is what's written on the paper. *takes the paper* Let me see. *reads* Hm...Starlaa.
Dragorn: That's a nice name! ^^
Celes: *scratches back of her head* Sorry for jumping to conclusions, Prinn.
Dragorn: We're exatly, 2 minutes and 5 seconds late! ^^
Celes: Ack! We're late!?
Lunch, under a tree outside...
Muffin: Hey, where's prinn?
Celes: Beats me.
Dragorn: He's usually-! *points at prinniesdood walking up to them* There he is! ^^
Prinniesdood: I'm sorry I'm late... *right behind him is Starlaa*
Celes: Why...is that girl still following him?
Prinniesdood: I had to bye three lunches...I droped my first one.
Muffin: Who's third lunch for?
Prinniesdood: Starlaa had no money so...
Celes: Aww, isn't that cute? Hey muffin! Buy be lunch some time! ^^
Dragorn: Me too! ^^
Muffin: *sweat* Uh, no thanks.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:52 am
Thank you, you're really nice! 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:53 am
That's awesome, and it definately fits with everything. Has anyone ever told you that you're an amazing writer? You are, but you might want a little less dialouge and a little more body language. 'Tis up to the writers and stryoboard people though.
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