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 Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:48 pm
(Me: -looks over at Zathier- He's not dead yet?
Zathier: Hey! Were you wanting me to die!?!?)
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:51 pm
(Me: I don't mind, it's okay if he doesn't get it. Just don't do it again okay Zathier and I'll let you off the hook this time)
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:53 pm
((Acutally, I say Whipped Cream. Jos! Which province?
And you have a slight addiction to the word 'as'...
Hm, is Opal coming back or do we send someone there?))
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:57 pm
Dioji ((Acutally, I say Whipped Cream. Jos! Which province?
And you have a slight addiction to the word 'as'...
Hm, is Opal coming back or do we send someone there?)) (My mom says it's whipping cream! >.< I asked! and I'm Albertan... yay... I hate it here...and sorry... old habits die hard... trust me... and I'm not sure... I was wondering if she could run into someone while she's out there by herself.)
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:04 pm
((I'm in Southern Ontario, so I pick on some American things... e.e But I still have bagged milk.
I wish I could send Vaati out there. Well, I can, just won't be practical. And I'm not creative enough for another character...
And jsut read it out loud. You'll probably hear it. :3))
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:07 pm
(I have a problem with 'as she' or 'as he' when my character's are doing something. I'll try to read it before I post it next time. That's usually what I do with the long posts I do with Lisaya heh, anyways...)
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:15 pm
(Canadians pwn when it comes to bags of milk! ^_^)
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:19 pm
((I would say only 'as' per sentence. There other connective words you can use such as 'and', 'but', the good ol' comma and you just end the sentence entirely.
Since we're on the subject, you tend to have fragmented sentences (sentences that lack a subject or verb or any other parts of a sentence that makes it a sentence). In your case, you tend to miss the subject. Something like, "Jumping to the floor and picked up an apple" is missing a subject. We have no idea who is jumping to the floor and picking up an apple.))
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:32 pm
((Sorry, it bothered me a little. sweatdrop
While I'm still on the subject, there are other fragmented sentence that are commonly used, accepted even, but still not exactly standard English. Stuff like "Ow", "Okay." These are okay here.))
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:34 pm
Dioji ((Sorry, it bothered me a little. sweatdrop
While I'm still on the subject, there are other fragmented sentence that are commonly used, accepted even, but still not exactly standard English. Stuff like "Ow", "Okay." These are okay here.))
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:44 pm
((Do you kind of get it?))
"Opal? Where did you go?" Alyssa asked as she walked lazily around the village. She was growing tired of Dark and Zathier; she just wanted to get away from them.
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 7:56 pm
(We're still going to have Opal be with Vaati and Zathier be with Alyssa right? When should I bring Kinado in the scare the living daylights out of Alyssa?)
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 8:02 pm
((Well, she's alone. Now would a good time. Just take her somewhere else and not in the middle of a village.))
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 8:03 pm
(Yes... I believe I do.
Hey, Dioji, are we still going to have Vaati crush on Opal?
Or you just choosing a good time to do so?)
Opal was sitting in the meadow, playing her ocarina. The faeries surrounded around her, landing in on her shoulder and head, listening to her music.
(Wait, Sheikah asked my question, nevermind then.)
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