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 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:52 pm
K0m0d0 Also something we DO NOT want to do with the script is too much dialogue. I'll try to keep this in mind when I'm writing, I have part one of chapter one coming real soon. When you read it, feel free to ursup the dialoge as much as you see fit, I have a big section where I wanted Jimmy to argue with himself for a few panels, but if you want to cut it and turn it into general mumbling or something. That might be a good job for the other writers when they don't have projects, editing and condenseing.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:53 pm
I'm sorry K0m0d0. I was only putting down rough drafts and small ideas of how I think some of the characters act...I didn't know I had to finalize them...I'm sorry...
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:54 pm
Sanzoskitsune Viral C my head hurts from reading too much crying crying crying crying crying ...Ok I'm serious could you please stop whining about it? The people working on this NEED all this info don't read it if you don't want to. i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:55 pm
Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C my head hurts from reading too much crying crying crying crying crying ...Ok I'm serious could you please stop whining about it? The people working on this NEED all this info don't read it if you don't want to. i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me You can't yell on the internet... EDIT: or can you? o.O
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:55 pm
Viral C AHHHHH!!!! Too much too read crying crying crying crying crying
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:56 pm
Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C my head hurts from reading too much crying crying crying crying crying ...Ok I'm serious could you please stop whining about it? The people working on this NEED all this info don't read it if you don't want to. i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me Actually you posted three different times that there was too much to read. I'm also not yelling at you I'm telling you to please stop, its kind of annoying and like I said, those working on this actually need all that info
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:00 pm
Sanzoskitsune Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C my head hurts from reading too much crying crying crying crying crying ...Ok I'm serious could you please stop whining about it? The people working on this NEED all this info don't read it if you don't want to. i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me Actually you posted three different times that there was too much to read. I'm also not yelling at you I'm telling you to please stop, its kind of annoying and like I said, those working on this actually need all that info i mean the one above
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:01 pm
Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C my head hurts from reading too much crying crying crying crying crying ...Ok I'm serious could you please stop whining about it? The people working on this NEED all this info don't read it if you don't want to. i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me Actually you posted three different times that there was too much to read. I'm also not yelling at you I'm telling you to please stop, its kind of annoying and like I said, those working on this actually need all that info i mean the one above I only responded to that one once, I responded to the second time you posted something like this and this time.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:02 pm
*grabs popcorn and watches*
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:02 pm
MrJimmy K0m0d0 Also something we DO NOT want to do with the script is too much dialogue. I'll try to keep this in mind when I'm writing, I have part one of chapter one coming real soon. When you read it, feel free to ursup the dialoge as much as you see fit, I have a big section where I wanted Jimmy to argue with himself for a few panels, but if you want to cut it and turn it into general mumbling or something. That might be a good job for the other writers when they don't have projects, editing and condenseing.
If it's one person talking to themself, (Sure, Jimmy could have a arguing-to-himself-rant, but not in the middle of a discussion that we'd have to come back two a page later and confuse the readers with) then I'd think we could do that, it's just that there should be the much-dialogue when we need it, but none when we don't need it. Muffin's thoughts to himself, for example, in Prinnies's except about the lake scene, was uneeded. We could have done just as well with a few wordless scenes, maybe close-ups to view muffin's apolagetic expression before he goes to the lake.
Lots of dialouge close toghether is better for funny scenes that aren' build to display a lot of emotion. Those are also the type of scenes that can make use of chibiness, thought bubbles, and magic.
I hope I'm not acting too psychotic here. I'm kind of scared of having Erius laugh at us....
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:04 pm
Sanzoskitsune Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C my head hurts from reading too much crying crying crying crying crying ...Ok I'm serious could you please stop whining about it? The people working on this NEED all this info don't read it if you don't want to. i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me Actually you posted three different times that there was too much to read. I'm also not yelling at you I'm telling you to please stop, its kind of annoying and like I said, those working on this actually need all that info i mean the one above I only responded to that one once, I responded to the second time you posted something like this and this time. i'm just trying to ask if you all can sum up the damn thing so all of us don't have to read so much and can keep up. not all of us can read fast you know
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:04 pm
K0m0d0, I find everything you're doing completely understandable. Would it be alright if I put some stuff in about the scene in the forest to make it more understandable and such?
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:06 pm
Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C Sanzoskitsune Viral C i only put this down once and you commented on it twice so don't yell at me Actually you posted three different times that there was too much to read. I'm also not yelling at you I'm telling you to please stop, its kind of annoying and like I said, those working on this actually need all that info i mean the one above I only responded to that one once, I responded to the second time you posted something like this and this time. i'm just trying to ask if you all can sum up the damn thing so all of us don't have to read so much and can keep up. not all of us can read fast you know I realize not everyone can read fast but where else are they supposed to put all this stuff? This thread is to work on the story so they have to put every detail.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:06 pm
Celestial Burden Wow....we think a lot alike. Um...Clestial and Muffin met recently at school and quickly became friends? Muffin thinks rationally on the situation and realizes that he needs help?
Since he's fifteen, I think that would put him in either eighth or ninth grade, but his age could be flexible dependent on what the writers feel is best.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 7:07 pm
Celestial Burden K0m0d0, I find everything you're doing completely understandable. Would it be alright if I put some stuff in about the scene in the forest to make it more understandable and such?
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