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 Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:26 pm
I'm not sure if Sanzo and Jimmy are married or not in the story. So i'm just assuming they are in the story. This takes place at muffin's house/room:
K0m0d0: *barges in Muffin's room* Where's my little favowite wittle Muffin of mine! <3
Muffin: Auntie K0m0d0? What brings you here?
K0m0d0: I've got a special present for ya! *reaches in her guitar case* An exact replica of my favorite guitar! <3 *hands muffin the guitar*
Muffin: *sweat* Uh...tha-!
K0m0d0: No need ta thank me kiddo! *messes up his hair* Did I ever tell you about the story about me an my guitar?
Muffin: Actually, you have Antie K0m-!
K0m0d0: Here, let me tell ya! It all started 524...days ago! There I was at the the anime convention of...
3 hours later...
K0m0d0: ...and that is how I saved the world from total annailation from the invaders from planet Cora and lost a date with the hottest guy on Earth!
Muffin: *is asleep with eyes open* Zzz...
K0m0d0: Awww...like a baby... *kisses his forehead and walks out of his room*
Sanzo: *sneaks up behind K0m0d0* K0m0d0? When did you get here?
K0m0d0: Aaaah! Don't do that! Gotta admit that was kinda cool though.
Jimmy: *from downstairs* Darling, I just told you K0m0d0's here!
Sanzo: Oops, sorry! Kinda runs in the family. *yells from upstairs* Sorry, Honey! I wasn't paying attention! I thought you got possesed again and were just muttering gibberish.
Jimmy: What?! If I was would you have done something about it!?
Sanzo: Of course not!<3
K0m0d0: *scratches back of her head* Yeah, I was kinda reading 'im a bed time story. *turns around to see Jimmy* Oh, its just you.
Jimmy: She gets complimented on her stealth and all I get is "Oh, it's just you"!? T__T
K0m0d0: Yeah, I kinda heard you sneaking up on me.
Sanzo: She's just kidding, Honey.
Jimmy: Hey, you told me you were just dropping off a little present. You've been up there for years!?
K0m0d0: Actually, it was only three hours.
Jimmy: Well, It's my turn to smoother our boy!
Sanzo: Jim, dear. He's already asleep.
Jimmy: *gonk* Gah...!
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:26 pm
Prinniesdood I'm not sure if Celes's character is aware of Muffin's transformations or not. Well, here's a little comedy piece i've put together. This takes place probably near the beginning/middle of the story. It takes place in a forest, yet i don't know where i got the forest from...oh, well: Indigo: Just dump it somewhere. That lake water sample's usless. Matrias: As you wish, Ms. Indigo. *throws the glass of water deeper into the forest which happens to land on Muffin* Muffin: *Transfroms and rips pair of pants* Man, That was my birthday present from Celes! She's gonna kill me when she finds out! Where'd that water come from anyway!? Celestial Burden: *running down the dark forest* Hey, Muffin! I've got you something! Muffin: Yip!*hides behind a tree near the lake* I-I mean, Thanks! J-just leave it on the floor and leave! Celestial Burden: What!? After you called me to meet you here you're just gonna get rid of me, like that? *looks around* Where are you? Muffin: *peers from the back of the tree* N-no! It's nothing like that! It's just...I, um, have this condition. Yeah! That's it! I have a condition that flares up when I'm near, um, trees! Yeah, trees! Celestial Burden: *finds muffin peeking from the tree* There you are! I found you! Then why are you near a tree? *gasp* Don't tell me...*evil-eye* You ripped my birthday present to you didn't you! Muffin: Yip! *sweat* I, uh, I...Hey, what's that behind you! Cestial Burden: *turns around to look* Ack! Please don't be some spider-thingy! You better not be pulling my leg Muffin! Muffin: (sorry about that Celes...but I can't let anyone find out what i look like when I get water on me...) *jumps into the lake behind him* I'm sorry if this was a bad time to post one of my ideas or if it is not to your liking...
*points to front page*
It doesn't mean you couldn't use it, but.... it doesn't make sense with the understanding I had, and what he front page has, of what Muffin's situation was. Then again, you're the writers....
The dialouge also tastes a little of parmesean. It's better than chedder, but I'm sure we'd all rather have a dairy product we can atleast pour into a glass. Yogurt, atleast. Otherwise Erius will laugh at us. We dont' want that.
Well, then again, I'm not really a writer here, so it is entirely up to you... it's just that I was getting a lot of agreements with answer number six, and I figured it'd be best to be consistent with what the people said they wanted....
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:26 pm
Starlaa Sanzoskitsune Starlaa Sanzoskitsune OH! I get it! having you and Slim as daughters! Hmm... well I wouldn't mind but check with those in charge if they don't mind LOL No, no not me. You don't want me, too. It's okay. What makes you think I don't want you? OF COURSE I DO! *huggles* I just... didn't get it till now LOL I'm slow XP Oh! I'm sorry, I was putting words in your mouth. Also, I'm not sure if you were saying you wanted two daughters, but shouldn't you have only one? It kinda more believible (<--sp?). Hmm... well I don't know I honestly don't, talk to the people in charge and figure out what you guys can do 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:28 pm
Sanzoskitsune Starlaa Sanzoskitsune Starlaa Sanzoskitsune OH! I get it! having you and Slim as daughters! Hmm... well I wouldn't mind but check with those in charge if they don't mind LOL No, no not me. You don't want me, too. It's okay. What makes you think I don't want you? OF COURSE I DO! *huggles* I just... didn't get it till now LOL I'm slow XP Oh! I'm sorry, I was putting words in your mouth. Also, I'm not sure if you were saying you wanted two daughters, but shouldn't you have only one? It kinda more believible (<--sp?). Hmm... well I don't know I honestly don't, talk to the people in charge and figure out what you guys can do 3nodding You're so nice... you're like a mother mrgreen How old are you? I'm sorry if that's personal!
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:30 pm
Prinniesdood I'm not sure if Sanzo and Jimmy are married or not in the story. So i'm just assuming they are in the story. This takes place at muffin's house/room: K0m0d0: *barges in Muffin's room* Where's my little favowite wittle Muffin of mine! <3 Muffin: Auntie K0m0d0? What brings you here? K0m0d0: I've got a special present for ya! *reaches in her guitar case* An exact replica of my favorite guitar! <3 *hands muffin the guitar* Muffin: *sweat* Uh...tha-! K0m0d0: No need ta thank me kiddo! *messes up his hair* Did I ever tell you about the story about me an my guitar? Muffin: Actually, you have Antie K0m-! K0m0d0: Here, let me tell ya! It all started 524...days ago! There I was at the the anime convention of... 3 hours later... K0m0d0: ...and that is how I saved the world from total annailation from the invaders from planet Cora and lost a date with the hottest guy on Earth! Muffin: *is asleep with eyes open* Zzz... K0m0d0: Awww...like a baby... *kisses his forehead and walks out of his room* Sanzo: *sneaks up behind K0m0d0* K0m0d0? When did you get here? K0m0d0: Aaaah! Don't do that! Gotta admit that was kinda cool though. Jimmy: *from downstairs* Darling, I just told you K0m0d0's here! Sanzo: Oops, sorry! Kinda runs in the family. *yells from upstairs* Sorry, Honey! I wasn't paying attention! I thought you got possesed again and were just muttering gibberish. Jimmy: What?! If I was would you have done something about it!? Sanzo: Of course not!<3 K0m0d0: *scratches back of her head* Yeah, I was kinda reading 'im a bed time story. *turns around to see Jimmy* Oh, its just you. Jimmy: She gets complimented on her stealth and all I get is "Oh, it's just you"!? T__T K0m0d0: Yeah, I kinda heard you sneaking up on me. Sanzo: She's just kidding, Honey. Jimmy: Hey, you told me you were just dropping off a little present. You've been up there for years!? K0m0d0: Actually, it was only three hours. Jimmy: Well, It's my turn to smoother our boy! Sanzo: Jim, dear. He's already asleep. Jimmy: *gonk* Gah...!
Then again I'm not a writer, so it's up to you guys.
But I thnk this is pretty good. We could have some of Jimmy's comments be in small dialouge bublbes to kind of produce a 'muttering under breath' effect. that would be awesome. And this scene could also branch off into the three of them having a story arc-related discussion. I like it. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:30 pm
K0m0d0 Prinniesdood I'm not sure if Celes's character is aware of Muffin's transformations or not. Well, here's a little comedy piece i've put together. This takes place probably near the beginning/middle of the story. It takes place in a forest, yet i don't know where i got the forest from...oh, well: Indigo: Just dump it somewhere. That lake water sample's usless. Matrias: As you wish, Ms. Indigo. *throws the glass of water deeper into the forest which happens to land on Muffin* Muffin: *Transfroms and rips pair of pants* Man, That was my birthday present from Celes! She's gonna kill me when she finds out! Where'd that water come from anyway!? Celestial Burden: *running down the dark forest* Hey, Muffin! I've got you something! Muffin: Yip!*hides behind a tree near the lake* I-I mean, Thanks! J-just leave it on the floor and leave! Celestial Burden: What!? After you called me to meet you here you're just gonna get rid of me, like that? *looks around* Where are you? Muffin: *peers from the back of the tree* N-no! It's nothing like that! It's just...I, um, have this condition. Yeah! That's it! I have a condition that flares up when I'm near, um, trees! Yeah, trees! Celestial Burden: *finds muffin peeking from the tree* There you are! I found you! Then why are you near a tree? *gasp* Don't tell me...*evil-eye* You ripped my birthday present to you didn't you! Muffin: Yip! *sweat* I, uh, I...Hey, what's that behind you! Cestial Burden: *turns around to look* Ack! Please don't be some spider-thingy! You better not be pulling my leg Muffin! Muffin: (sorry about that Celes...but I can't let anyone find out what i look like when I get water on me...) *jumps into the lake behind him* I'm sorry if this was a bad time to post one of my ideas or if it is not to your liking...
*points to front page*
It doesn't mean you couldn't use it, but.... it doesn't make sense with the understanding I had, and what he front page has, of what Muffin's situation was. Then again, you're the writers....
The dialouge also tastes a little of parmesean. It's better than chedder, but I'm sure we'd all rather have a dairy product we can atleast pour into a glass. Yogurt, atleast. Otherwise Erius will laugh at us. We dont' want that.
Well, then again, I'm not really a writer here, so it is entirely up to you... it's just that I was getting a lot of agreements with answer number six, and I figured it'd be best to be consistent with what the people said they wanted.... Could this perhaps be how she learns of Muffin's tentacleyness?
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:32 pm
Starlaa You're so nice... you're like a mother mrgreen How old are you? I'm sorry if that's personal! LOL thanks redface I'm 20 actually but I love kids, well babies in particular, my dad thinks I should be in a career where I work with kids
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:32 pm
Celestial Burden K0m0d0 Prinniesdood I'm not sure if Celes's character is aware of Muffin's transformations or not. Well, here's a little comedy piece i've put together. This takes place probably near the beginning/middle of the story. It takes place in a forest, yet i don't know where i got the forest from...oh, well: Indigo: Just dump it somewhere. That lake water sample's usless. Matrias: As you wish, Ms. Indigo. *throws the glass of water deeper into the forest which happens to land on Muffin* Muffin: *Transfroms and rips pair of pants* Man, That was my birthday present from Celes! She's gonna kill me when she finds out! Where'd that water come from anyway!? Celestial Burden: *running down the dark forest* Hey, Muffin! I've got you something! Muffin: Yip!*hides behind a tree near the lake* I-I mean, Thanks! J-just leave it on the floor and leave! Celestial Burden: What!? After you called me to meet you here you're just gonna get rid of me, like that? *looks around* Where are you? Muffin: *peers from the back of the tree* N-no! It's nothing like that! It's just...I, um, have this condition. Yeah! That's it! I have a condition that flares up when I'm near, um, trees! Yeah, trees! Celestial Burden: *finds muffin peeking from the tree* There you are! I found you! Then why are you near a tree? *gasp* Don't tell me...*evil-eye* You ripped my birthday present to you didn't you! Muffin: Yip! *sweat* I, uh, I...Hey, what's that behind you! Cestial Burden: *turns around to look* Ack! Please don't be some spider-thingy! You better not be pulling my leg Muffin! Muffin: (sorry about that Celes...but I can't let anyone find out what i look like when I get water on me...) *jumps into the lake behind him* I'm sorry if this was a bad time to post one of my ideas or if it is not to your liking...
*points to front page*
It doesn't mean you couldn't use it, but.... it doesn't make sense with the understanding I had, and what he front page has, of what Muffin's situation was. Then again, you're the writers....
The dialouge also tastes a little of parmesean. It's better than chedder, but I'm sure we'd all rather have a dairy product we can atleast pour into a glass. Yogurt, atleast. Otherwise Erius will laugh at us. We dont' want that.
Well, then again, I'm not really a writer here, so it is entirely up to you... it's just that I was getting a lot of agreements with answer number six, and I figured it'd be best to be consistent with what the people said they wanted.... Could this perhaps be how she learns of Muffin's tentacleyness? GAH!!! too much to read
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:33 pm
Sanzoskitsune Starlaa You're so nice... you're like a mother mrgreen How old are you? I'm sorry if that's personal! LOL thanks redface I'm 20 actually but I love kids, well babies in particular, my dad thinks I should be in a career where I work with kids lol, you shiould be a pediatrition (I can't spell for my life)
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:35 pm
Starlaa Sanzoskitsune Starlaa You're so nice... you're like a mother mrgreen How old are you? I'm sorry if that's personal! LOL thanks redface I'm 20 actually but I love kids, well babies in particular, my dad thinks I should be in a career where I work with kids lol, you shiould be a pediatrition (I can't spell for my life) It's all right I can understand what you're saying, and actually I'm majoring in Psychology so it should be fun to see how I use that to work with kids 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:35 pm
I apologize, K0m0d0, I shall pay closer attention to what the ATG have decided.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:36 pm
Starlaa Sanzoskitsune Starlaa You're so nice... you're like a mother mrgreen How old are you? I'm sorry if that's personal! LOL thanks redface I'm 20 actually but I love kids, well babies in particular, my dad thinks I should be in a career where I work with kids lol, you shiould be a pediatrition (I can't spell for my life) You should be a coriner that way you can work with kids internal organs HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!! i'm kidding
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:37 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:38 pm
Sanzoskitsune Starlaa Sanzoskitsune Starlaa You're so nice... you're like a mother mrgreen How old are you? I'm sorry if that's personal! LOL thanks redface I'm 20 actually but I love kids, well babies in particular, my dad thinks I should be in a career where I work with kids lol, you shiould be a pediatrition (I can't spell for my life) It's all right I can understand what you're saying, and actually I'm majoring in Psychology so it should be fun to see how I use that to work with kids 3nodding Awesome, you're like my dad, he's a therapist, now.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:40 pm
should n't do that to me man i can't take that much at one time
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