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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2015 5:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2015 11:51 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 12:09 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 5:04 pm
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Southern Cross Nemesis one slightly reworked Thork, ready for dm approval. I will try to think of a backstory at work. Edit: Not incredibly proud of how it is worded, but Backstory is in...
I, uh... I presume 'Warriors Surge" is the same thing as "Half-Orc Resilience", and "Running Charge" is the same thing as "Swift Charge"?
Your 2 racial bonuses are Endurance and Intimidate, but you have Nature instead of Intimidate listed instead ^-^'
You don't have your Furious Assault racial encounter power listed with your other powers.
Hmm... in your listing of powers, I again see "Warrior's Surge". Where did this come from? I don't see it under barbarian or racial listings...
For the most part, everything else is fine, including most of the backstory. I think, for the sake of clarity, I do need to mention something though:
The PCs had gone through a skill challenge to get everyone indoors to safety and off the streets, which they succeeded. There were some casualties, but not nearly as much as there could have been if they had failed. But the monsters had shown up just after dusk, and retreated into the darkness of the outlying forests just before dawn.
Why I bring this up, is that I'm not sure if you want there to be any ambiguity about what happened to Miranda. She very well could be someone MIA - that's not unusual amidst a natural disaster. Currently most of the townsfolk are either meandering, fortifying, or still hiding, so there hasn't really been a proper headcount or anything. The town guard/militia (all volunteer, since the most they've ever needed it for was to break up drunken brawls and help deter thieves) have their hands full trying to prevent people from fleeing the town to minimize the chance of the missing magic artifact leaving Clearwell; meanwhile, most of the number are riding out to try and catch up with anyone who HAS left before everything went to shite.
So Miranda could be MIA, could be out on a patrol, could be perfectly fine, could have been grievously hurt... I'm leaving it up to you, but I think there should be a teensy bit clarification, so I know how to handle it smile
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Southern Cross Nemesis Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 5:40 pm
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Rain Yupa Southern Cross Nemesis one slightly reworked Thork, ready for dm approval. I will try to think of a backstory at work. Edit: Not incredibly proud of how it is worded, but Backstory is in... I, uh... I presume 'Warriors Surge" is the same thing as "Half-Orc Resilience", and "Running Charge" is the same thing as "Swift Charge"? Your 2 racial bonuses are Endurance and Intimidate, but you have Nature instead of Intimidate listed instead ^-^' You don't have your Furious Assault racial encounter power listed with your other powers. Hmm... in your listing of powers, I again see "Warrior's Surge". Where did this come from? I don't see it under barbarian or racial listings... For the most part, everything else is fine, including most of the backstory. I think, for the sake of clarity, I do need to mention something though: The PCs had gone through a skill challenge to get everyone indoors to safety and off the streets, which they succeeded. There were some casualties, but not nearly as much as there could have been if they had failed. But the monsters had shown up just after dusk, and retreated into the darkness of the outlying forests just before dawn. Why I bring this up, is that I'm not sure if you want there to be any ambiguity about what happened to Miranda. She very well could be someone MIA - that's not unusual amidst a natural disaster. Currently most of the townsfolk are either meandering, fortifying, or still hiding, so there hasn't really been a proper headcount or anything. The town guard/militia (all volunteer, since the most they've ever needed it for was to break up drunken brawls and help deter thieves) have their hands full trying to prevent people from fleeing the town to minimize the chance of the missing magic artifact leaving Clearwell; meanwhile, most of the number are riding out to try and catch up with anyone who HAS left before everything went to shite. So Miranda could be MIA, could be out on a patrol, could be perfectly fine, could have been grievously hurt... I'm leaving it up to you, but I think there should be a teensy bit clarification, so I know how to handle it smile most questions can be answered, the first Thork was a full Orc, one in MM. If that is a problem, I can change it.
As for Miranda, I meant it as MIA...
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 6:54 pm
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Southern Cross Nemesis Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 7:34 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 8:26 pm
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Southern Cross Nemesis No biggy, the orc is now half-human. Will chamge all orc entries later, as i find them... I should have checked your limits, just didn't think about any problems outside of level between the two games. Sorry...
Only thing I see, is you need to throw your +2 Nature into +2 Intimidate.
Also, it appears your stats were: 5, 1, 6, 6 = 17 (+2 Con -> 19) 3, 2, 4, 5 = 12 (+2 Dex -> 14) 5, 1, 1, 3 = 9 2, 1, 6, 4 = 12 6, 4, 5, 2 = 15 5, 6, 2, 6 = 17 Which means you shorted yourself 2 points of handsome Charisma! crying
Everything else seems to be in order.
I'm going to presume that Thork is a half-orc that has a lot of dominant orc-genes present, rather than a 50/50 hybrid. I can ttly see him easily being mistaken for an orc, if you want him to be.
The reason for my no MM race limitation, is because I don't like making exceptions, and I always feel D&D should kind of be... heroic-appearing. But people seem to have a passion for monster races. Rather than allow some and deny others unfairly, I just exclude them all. I'd... rather not have a "heroic" adventuring party of a kobold, an ogre, an otyugh, an owlbear, and a mimic. Yes, that's a slight exaggeration, but that's how the direction of PCs seem to have headed over the past couple years and for the life of me, I cannot figure out why.
One of these days, I'll have to run a mixed-monster-race game to make up for all the times I've had to tell people 'no' sweatdrop
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Southern Cross Nemesis Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 3:43 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:13 pm
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Southern Cross Nemesis Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 2:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 2:33 pm
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Southern Cross Nemesis Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2015 3:11 pm
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