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 Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:35 pm
Summer: I really like this for a summer concept. I'd take a closer look at the colour matching however. (ie: the orange in the vest, the pink from the shoes, etc). I think if you play around with it a bit more you'll be able to smooth it out very nicely.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:52 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:54 pm
that's alright, the second one was just for fun, haha.  This was the only belt I found that went over the tux
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:01 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:23 pm
Well I'm an idiot. I thought the categories were all kinda criteria. Not categories... >.>
SO. I shall be creating new ones.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:36 pm
Summer: Yup I am definitely liking what you did with this avi. I made a couple small changes - if you don't mind the edits I will be happy to submit.Gold Shop: Yes I see what you mean. I added a few items to try and help balance the two colours - If you don't think it's too much I'll go ahead and submit?Gold Shop: I like the white + pink choice but it's a bit too simple - look at adding more items and work on keeping the shades similar?
Gold Shop 2: Same feedback as above ^_^
No worries my dear <3
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:39 pm
@ Everyone: Please remember that there is NO price limit and it doesn't need to layer on Gaia at all. So the sky's the limit folks - you can really take your time with these avis and make them your own.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:53 pm
First is summer, of course. I mean, what would summer be without hiking? The great outdoors, fresh air, a lovely breeze... Mosquitoes... ALL THE MOSQUITOES... Oh Brennivin, we do love your designs. If only they didn't cost so darn much.... Then this lovely bride could afford a dress, and proper nutrition too! The poor girl has turned gray from the lack of money for sustenance!
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:28 pm
RabidKitten Gold Shop: It felt like a bit too much gold at the throat so I made a couple minor additions - if you don't mind them I'll be happy to submit.
Summer: Same as above - a couple changes to even out the colour distribution.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 8:22 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 4:17 am
Summer: I lol'ed at this entry. While I would normally look more for colour matching the smiles were worth it - submitted.
Gold Shop: I like the story behind the avi though I don't care for the veil itself. I like to be able to distinguish all the parts of the avi <3
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:09 pm
Heres a few more clutters. 4laugh Clutter(Female) Clutter(Male) EDIT: Heres some more Gold Shop ones! Gold Shop(Female) Gold Shop(Male) EDIT 2: I'm not sure if this should be under summer(Bright Colors) or Clutter(lots of it! xD) Summer?/Clutter? EDIT 3: Here's the final one for right now Clutter
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:52 am
Clutter: Wow that's so bright and I really like the colour combos used here. I noticed the Zodiacal was used more than once so I made a couple small changes - can submit if you don't mind the additions?
Clutter 2: I also really like the colours on this one but it seems a bit bulky to me. Some items (the bag, hair, hair wing things) push the avi out a bit more than I usually like. Maybe focus more on cluttering the avi just on the body itself?
Gold Shop: I think it's a good start for this avii - it can be difficult chwne you are mixing oranges with either golds or yellows because you need to focus on the colour balance. Maybe add a bit more of each colour if possible?
Gold Shop 2: I like him. It's fairly plain but the colours are balanced so nicely. ^_^ Submitted.
Clutter: Normally I would ask which you would prefer to enter it under but I think this avi is more cluttery (that a word?) than summery. The wings give it more of a seasonal vibe but they were one of the items I was going to see if you could bear dropping lol. I think it makes the avi a bit too bulky but I am in love with these colours. Maybe focus on distribution and adding a few more items and resubmit?
Clutter 2: This is adorable for a start. Again for clutter maybe look at adding some more items like in the examples on the first page? Really like where it is headed though.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:22 am
RabidKitten Clutter: Wow that's so bright and I really like the colour combos used here. I noticed the Zodiacal was used more than once so I made a couple small changes - can submit if you don't mind the additions?
Clutter 2: I also really like the colours on this one but it seems a bit bulky to me. Some items (the bag, hair, hair wing things) push the avi out a bit more than I usually like. Maybe focus more on cluttering the avi just on the body itself?
Gold Shop: I think it's a good start for this avii - it can be difficult chwne you are mixing oranges with either golds or yellows because you need to focus on the colour balance. Maybe add a bit more of each colour if possible?
Gold Shop 2: I like him. It's fairly plain but the colours are balanced so nicely. ^_^ Submitted.
Clutter: Normally I would ask which you would prefer to enter it under but I think this avi is more cluttery (that a word?) than summery. The wings give it more of a seasonal vibe but they were one of the items I was going to see if you could bear dropping lol. I think it makes the avi a bit too bulky but I am in love with these colours. Maybe focus on distribution and adding a few more items and resubmit?
Clutter 2: This is adorable for a start. Again for clutter maybe look at adding some more items like in the examples on the first page? Really like where it is headed though. Clutter 1: Sure! That works. I fixed the Last clutter one: Clutter(Fixed) I'll be working on the other ones wink
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:45 am
Clutter: It just seems a bit bulky for my tastes. Maybe drop some items that make it seem so wide and focus on keeping it closer to the body?
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