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 Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:04 pm
Daruna smiles slightly at Kazzi's open curiousity. "Dont worry about it, its, well" He smiles. "Its actually kinda different, i like it."
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:17 pm
Kazzi smiled back and brought her hand to her side. "What's it like being able to stay underwater as long as you want?" Kazzi liked swimming, even though she wasn't very good at it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:26 pm
"I couldn't imagine not being able too." Daruna says. He couldn't imagine life in a desert like the Gerudo Desert, a place with no water...
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:28 pm
Solon rolled his eyes.
"Not much difference between the water and earth; I don't get why people think it's that neat zoras can stay under it."
He crossed his arms.
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:33 pm
((Ryu, do me a favour and step your grammar up a notch Capitalize the first word at the beginning of a sentence and names other than your own character's name. Make it happen. Second, you're missing a lot of apostrophes ('). I can't tell if you don't know or you're just plain lazy, but please check my announcement you're not sure. Bad grammar will not be tolerated. Little simple things such capitalization saves me a lot of frustration and trouble.))
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:01 pm
Kazzi looked over at the man. "Well, when you didn't grow up around it, it's pretty fascinating." She replied sharply.
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:11 pm
(Alright, sorry. I normally have too many apostrophe's, so thats why that happens. The capitilization has just kinda been an issue I need to work on. And i'm not quite sure what to say right now, so i'll let it roll for a minute.)
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:47 pm
Lina noticed Daruna talking to some unknown people and hurried over. "Hi Daruna!" Lina said in a cheery voice.
((I think that Daruna should've saved Lina from drowning in the lake; that is how they will know each other. Is that okay?))
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 9:19 am
Zelda started to stroke Kazzi's hair as she sighed. "I love it near Lake Hylia..." She said to herself.
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 1:16 pm
Solon sighed. There was no point in changing the mind of a mad person. He just hoped she was keeping on her medication.
"Well, I guess it's useful."
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:20 pm
((Hey guys, I don't want to be mean, but try and proof read before you post... I see a lot of common grammer mistakes and such. Make sure you capitalize you 'I's and such. No offense, but I am getting tired of editing.... If you see a mistake, fix it! don't leave it for us!))
((Please get this straight before I pull my hair out...
Its= possession
It's= verb contraction.
Your= possession
You're= verb contraction
Were= verb (past)
We're= verb contraction (we are)
It isn't rocket science))
((And good story line by the way. Creative.))
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:34 pm
(Thank you. I only claim partial credit however. This was hashed out with a friend, then tried in the forums. It just sorta stopped out there, so as I said, i'm trying to rez it here.)
(Will edit later.)
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:27 pm
(Ok, so, time to try to bring this back up.)
Daruna looked off to the side when he heard the familiar and cheery voice of Lina. “Hello Lina.” He said, smiling slightly, then looking back at the others. “I personally prefer the water, but everyone is entitled to their own opinion.” He says, trying to sooth over the little debate that had sprung up between Kazzi and Solon.
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:47 pm
Solon sighed, there was just no reasoning with people.
"I guess so..."
He saw a girl walking towards them, and suddenly grinned, straightening up.
"And helloooo miss."
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:58 pm
( I might as well add to the mistakes that people have made (and I edited) be sure to get things like "there" and "their" right, you know? Good example: "There is the triforce!" - like pointing something out or telling somebody where to go. Another example: "Their wolves are outside, be quiet." possession of an object or etc. I'm not trying to saying you're stupid or anything, just that awareness is key here, be sure to read over what you type. Now..... RESUME ROLEPLAY!)
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