Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[penned ignorance]

I like it alot, actually... but it seems devoid of any colour. I can see the accenting reds in there but it just doesn't do it for me.  

[Trish the Stalker]

The layered look is pretty cool but seems a little bit too mish-mashed for my tastes and I think it seems more randomly thrown together than anything else.  

[Large Inmate]

The shorts don't go with it. I'm iffy on the socks as well.
Kinda looks like two avy's severed at the waist and put together as this one.  

[WhisperingSouls]

still love it

<3  

[Talvi Kakumei-no-kun]

I are poll whoar!  

[Large Inmate]

The only thing I like is the head.
Everything else is just slapped on as if your cold and need warmth from many layers of random things.  

[Talvi Kakumei-no-kun]

Why thank you smile

Everything of yer avatar is perfect for me o.O  

[CR Kyrie]

The black tail doesn't work with the rest of the blue scheme O=

Ranuu

Alrighty then. It's time for me to make a game cool

I had this idea just now, and thought it would be fun. Every person who posts will have one thing that could be done better on the avatar above them. This will be delivered in a constructive way, and there shall be no flaming whatsoever, because that's just mean ( emo )

I'd love to start, but I'm the first poster, so there's nobody above me.

Ready...
Set...
Go.

Come on guys, follow this please. If you don't have a criticism toward the avatar above you, leave it to someone else, or try really hard to find something.  

[Magical Maiden]

Your avatar is too dark! *shot*

I kid, but the Shadow spirit seems out of place with its purple-ish eyes. I'd say something darker, buts thats impossible.  

[Arcanas]

I like how you pulled off the archer look

Although I don't like the ears much, but alas, the archers had pointy ears.

That, and the top seems far too modern for how I'm currently remembering how the archers were dressed.  

[Erverain]

Good, as usual, but the thing sticking out of your hat doesn't seem to fit.  

[Large Inmate]

...
Somethings off but I just can't place it.. Maybe with the staff and the vampire symbol? Or the green cape and the symbol and staff?
Greh, I can't place it.  

[Talvi Kakumei-no-kun]

The tatoo looks weird on you now that I notice it! biggrin  

[Erverain]

It looks like the lint filter in my dryer...  

[Taeryyn]

Not really my kind of thing, but it's not bad or anything. Some red towards the top would make the pentacle-thing stand out less.