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| THIS. IS. SPARTA! |
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 Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:48 pm
gonk
Wearing set, but its understandable.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:54 pm
Not a set, per se. There are actually three sets within this little grouping.
But yours could do without the smoke, maybe. I don't see anything wrong with it, I just need to nitpick something.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:20 pm
Ooh you look all shnazzy Erv...
I can't really find anything to critique here... gonk
(And holy crap. I actually changed up my avatar~ Critique away, folks ^.^)
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 11:08 am
whoa...it's not so busy...
I'd do away with the mask though, just me
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 3:20 pm
there's a bit too much on ur avi, I think...
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 5:39 pm
I've got issues against that particular starter set... stare But it's better. Everything seems to be going together a little better but I think it could still use a tweak or two...
And by the way Arc, which mask are you referring to? Just out of curiosity, that's all...
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Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 12:40 am
I don't think you should get rid of either of the masks... in fact I think you should look at how the HIPster Red glasses interact with what you have and maybe move the imp to the other hand (it blocks your face).  Click my eggs/hatchlings to make them grow please.
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 3:54 pm
I checked that out. But the red ones make my eyes look all bug-like >.< And this is the only hand I can hold it with.
Now as for you. I like it, but the black items seem to be concentrated in one spot, making it hard to see some of them (I'm mostly referring to the winged anklets and the death whisper on your hand(though I eventually notice since I start feeling like something's staring at me >.<)). I like the color scheme overall though...
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 2:15 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 7:21 am
The change in style from the out side to the inside (drawing style) makes it look strange. Prehaps something more heavy there instead of the light cloth
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:48 pm
Sorry, Sav, but the props and the cape have to go.
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:34 pm
the fire sword stands out much to much i think you'd be better off with just the katana
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 10:05 pm
just change the boots. Those are too strangely mishapen.
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 10:12 pm
Yay, underboob!
Seriously, I'm not actually used to seeing your avi's face...
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 8:15 am
Speaking of face, there's something weird about yours.
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