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 Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:18 am
Stars Flying Thank you ^o^  Feedback again?
Honestly right now I can't think of any improvements, I love it c:
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:22 am
streets of nowhere Yay! It has been a while since we've had a big one hasn't it?
I love the idea behind this one, very original. And I can certainly see a Christmas tree. It's hard to point out exactly what I want changed about this avi, the bottom half is lovely but at the head it seems a bit random, the bottom has a sort of ordered chaos of Christmas but the mask just looks unorganised.
Also there is the small bit of pink red on the face/neck there where the rest of the avi uses a brilliant red.
Yes, it's been some time. Thank you very much for the feedback! I'll try to work on the head part some more. ^^
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:24 am
sachara Feedback, please~~
#1I'm not really a fan of the skirt, I think it's just that it's too much green in one place, I'd suggest looking at putting a red skirt over the top to break that area of green up a bit.
#2 I think a green hat would work nicely
#3 Look at some bracelets, again there's a large area of red on your arms that needs a bit of breaking up
But overall it looks nice, and very Christmassy
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:28 am
chelsey mcneil feed back???? ilu
I'm getting a real snow queen vibe off this which is pretty cool, and quite different from others I've looked at so far.
Have you looked at making the skin completely white? Because I think that would look good.
Also I think a crown would top it off nicely ( and fit with the snow queen image c; )
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:45 am
Neptune Bride So, this is my attempt at doing Holly Claus. The only problems I had was the dress isn't quite right and i couldn't get a fox and a wolf to work together, so since Tundra's more central to the story than Lexy, I decided to put him in. http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2529/4184961799_62259628df.jpg reference Oh, and feedback plzkthnxbai!
Whilst I am totally fine with you using this theme it needs more careful execution. Whilst there may not be a dress that fits exactly you could use a combination of tops and a skirt to get that appearance, and I feel the whole thing would look better with some gold in the top.
Also whilst she wears a circlet it's gold colour is the important as the purple stands out as being "wrong"
Also the eyes should be more delicate, try looking at some eye items rather than gaia standard issue ones
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:56 am
icabanana tektek entry- feedback please^^
I feel like with a few changes this could make a very convincing Christmas angel:
#1 Add some wings c:
#2 Take off the red hair piece and the belt, the other reds you use are much softer and there's no other green so these don't add anything productive to the overall look
#3 Add something that hints of snow. The belt is the only thing that makes me think of Christmas (and I know I told you to change it) but with the above changes it's a softer avi and snow is a much softer colour. Snowflakes or a carol o nick snowglobe would work well.
#4 If you need to bring some more red in to balance out the stockings use a pinker red head/belt item.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:00 am
Inappropriate Hobo This is the best I can do. Rate it between 1 - 10. Thanks.
I'd give it an 8. It looks very top heavy considering the small body/legs compared to the large hair. But it does have a Christmas feel with the nutcracker type element. Also I think it looks good overall, the colours are matched up well
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:04 am
I like the first one, I think the ice lolly works better than the cupcake. Just one more thing, try it with some green leg warmers. I think they'd finish it off nicely c:
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:10 am
kandymom13 kandymom13 My try for the christmas avi! (oh and the number contest!)  ( I forgot to put feedback on my post! New I forgot something...) So Feedback Please
It's nice, it's simple. Could you put some red in the middle (a belt or similar) I'm also wondering if you could add some small hints of black, because there's the black antlers and the leaves on the hair piece are almost black and I feel like there needs to be a bit more (or change the antlers to white ones)
Other than that I'm not sure that it feels very Christmassy. Maybe add some snow just to make it clearly winter
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:18 am
Angel2222 Angel2222 X-Mas: streets of nowhere could you give me some feedback on my entry?
It's a good starting point, there is a continuous colour scheme that's well balanced. Now it needs some little details. I'd recommend:
#1 Some red and white on the head - a hat or hair piece or similar.
#2 A white handheld item in her front hand would balance her out a bit
#3 Change the leg warmers, those ones look scruffy, where the new green ones look neater. I'd then suggest putting some stockings to cover the rest of her legs
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:20 am
HimeSama_Hiro streets of nowhere CONTEST NO1
MINI TEKTEK CONTEST where can i submit my entry (if i will still edit it )
If you want some feedback and want to edit it you post it in this thread.
When you've finished editing you send it to me.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:27 am
Cream Plush May I have some feedback?
Dashing! I always find it hard to give feedback on "character" tekteks but I'll try:
The shirt is very blocky, I find the dutiful butler vest/shirt to be a lot easier to look at plus it would allow you to see the belt.
Try adding a hat - reddish/brownish. Maybe a hint of gold. Just to add some interest to that area
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:35 am
RabidKitten streets of nowhere You're the first person to use green as a main colour, which is nice c: The hair is distracting me. Over the rest of the avi there's more of a gold detail and then the hair is just this strong band of it. Also I'm not sure about the anklet, I'd say try using some white socks instead (and I'm gonna update the rules to say this but even if it won't layer properly on gaia as long as it layers that way on tektek it's fine to use it)
This one's definitely better c:
I can't see anything on it I've got the urge to change. The only thing nagging at me is the hair. But I've had a look through and the only other one I think might work is from secret retreat. I'll leave it up to you which one you use though, they both have their merits and the more I look at it the less sure I am ><
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:41 am
I think if you're gonna go with winter it has to all be cold colours. I'd suggest you get rid of the red hair and replace it with something blue (preferably the same sort of blue as the skirt)
I'd also change the shoes to that darker blue so it's spaced throughout the tektek.
Take off the pink gloves as well.
Finally I'd say you should look at using a blue/white skin to make it completely wintery
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:51 am
HimeSama_Hiro OR changed hair as well as the eyes :
FEEDBACK
I prefer the second one.
I think you should look at using a white/blue skin just to give a completely ethereal appearance, also if you can find eyes without black detail, that are a white/blue colour I think they'd work well too.
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