((Well done, I enjoyed this thoroughly. Thank you for the inclusion. If I may, I would like to ask that the contractions in Fading dialogue be changed (can't to can not and we're to we are)? Fading does not use contractions. Sorry, I feel the heel to even mention it. I made a solid outfit for the group picture. ))
Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 6:40 pm
Yay story time, loved it~ Hehe poor Gigi, the last to realize. >w< If it's okay, my current look for the group part? owo
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 6:41 pm
Mo_4011 -Anon-
Yeah I think minus-lightning would be better. I'm gonna put the group picture toward the beginning when all their names are first mentioned, before all the action.
Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2016 6:48 pm
AlwaysFadingAwaySlowly
It's okay, that's why I ask. It's an easy fix, anyway~
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 7:08 am
Radiant Anon Solsi
It's okay, that's why I ask. It's an easy fix, anyway~
((Still, thank you just the same. ))
Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 9:15 am
Gigi of the Ribbons
I don't know how I missed this post...I must've been in a rush earlier. My bad! But I saved a copy of your avi just now.
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