Raga you got some splaining to do.
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You should have 0 nuyen. Nuyen that you have is worked out from a lifestyle that you have purchased and left over Nuyen from buying gear and so on. Nuyen = 0.
Lifestyle? Karl's a hobo? A literal murderhobo?
Skills? It looks like you've a ton on skills and you have skills like flight which you can't use since you can't fly. Also it looks like you've effectively bought the Athletics skill group and Stealth Skill group in their component pieces. It might be cheaper to buy these as a skill group as they're cheaper unless you intend to specialise some of them.
For neatness purposes could you seperate Languages from the normal knowledge skills or mark them as languages please?
You need to type your knowledge skills also Street knowledge of the underworld is different to academical knowledge of the underworld. Tis not abritrary,
Your Licenses arent marked as fake or real nor are they assigned to a specific identity please fix this.
Your commlink is fine just one thing to note that it can't handle the OS and all those programs at once there's always only going to be one that isn't loaded.
Gear: Docwagon belongs under identities and to a specific identity. Also without a number I assumed you've taken a standard year subscription.
Cyberware is fine
You've got a car but no skill to drive it or is it just your personal taxi. Lack of car license.
As we brits say. Sort it ooooouuuut.
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