Username: RafeRavel Name: Richard of the Golden Gryphons Class: Lord (M) Birthday: November 5 About: Richard is a young Lord with his skill in swordplay only rivaled by his heart of gold. His feiry red hair matches his personality, and he often forgets his manners. At sixteen, he sees every battle as a game to be won, though he does his best to keep his peoples needs first. He prefers to keep a strong relationship with his troops, beleiving that comraderie is the foundation to a powerful army. The boy also makes a point of cleaning and sharpening his blade after every battle. He loves rare steak, noodles, practicing swordplay, and flirting with girls his age.
Skills: Dual Strike+ :increases the chance for a Dual Strike occurring by 10%. Inventory: Rapier [Mt 5 // Hit 90 // Crit 10 // Range 1] :: 35/35 Uses [Effective against Beast and Armor]
Vulnerary :: 3/3 Uses :: Restores 10 HP
Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:09 pm
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Hahaha AMG Rafe. You don't even know. He's like Joshua from Sacred Stones and Shinon from Path of Radiance mixed in one. I love him.
Two things, though: 1. He can't have a 0 in Magic for Personal Growth. Min is 15. 2. Can you put [Effective against Beast and Armor] for the Rapier? It gets 3x Weapon Might against units matching those descriptors.
Hahaha AMG Rafe. You don't even know. He's like Joshua from Sacred Stones and Shinon from Path of Radiance mixed in one. I love him.
Two things, though: 1. He can't have a 0 in Magic for Personal Growth. Min is 15. 2. Can you put [Effective against Beast and Armor] for the Rapier? It gets 3x Weapon Might against units matching those descriptors.
My bad, I totally forgot about the minimum 15 bit! -.- And editied, hope everything looks square! I was hoping you'd like what you saw, I'm thinking about making him a sprite too. :3
Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:18 pm
RafeRavel
My bad, I totally forgot about the minimum 15 bit! -.- And editied, hope everything looks square! I was hoping you'd like what you saw, I'm thinking about making him a sprite too. :3
I assumed so. After all, you got it right on your first character. Looks good! Approved and Accepted!
Hmmm.... I should probably draw up a sketch or something of Vali.... It looks like the Manakete have a dress code of skimpy clothing, though....
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Posted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:23 pm
Just updating with what I'm seeing, class-wise:
Terei - Manakete [Special] [Accepted]
Rafe - Dark Mage [Magic] [Accepted] - Lord (M) [Main] [Accepted]
Username: Paidi tou Selini Name: Kalyna Class: Thief Birthday: November 12th About: When a life that wants for nothing produces a personality that wants everything, there are rarely more than two paths. When that person discovered that she was betrothed to a man she didn't know and insisted she didn't like, suddenly only one of those paths began to look appealing. Kalyna abandoned her noble heritage at the age of 14 and fled to the Free States, where she has lived for the past 4 years. Combining her socialite upbringing with quick hands and natural acrobatics has allowed her to continue getting what she wants, but greed is a powerful thing and she knows that in war vast fortunes are won and lost; and with careful observation and good timing, those fortunes could end up in her hands. She loves spicy foods and shiny trinkets most of all.
Username: Paidi tou Selini Name: Mahina Class: Dancer Birthday: March 6th About: Born and raised on the road, Mahina is as wild as she is exotic. She loves nothing more than to be the center of attention, but can never stand to be in one place for long. Unlike her peace-loving parents, she has no qualms about taking up the sword and fighting for what she believes in. She has a particular weakness for sweets, but her greatest passion is and shall always be the art of Dancing.
Birthday: February 10th About: The only child of a noble family, she was orphaned at a young age and raised by her paternal grandparents. Following in her family's traditions, she joined the military as soon as she was able to. She places loyalty and honor above all else. Likes long walks through the woods.
Skills: Speed +2 Inventory: Bronze Lance [Mt 3 // Hit 90 // Crit 0 // Range 1] :: 50/50 Uses Vulnerary :: 3/3 Uses :: Restores 10 HP
Username: Liquidor Name: Dianna Class: Archer
Birthday: March 15th About: The eight child of a farmer, she quickly left home for a better life. Learned to hunt when times were lean, both at home and on the road. Quick to pass judgment on others and slow to forgive. Always looking for a reason to stop and smell the flowers.
Birthday: January 8th About: The first daughter of a middle-class merchant, she has been sheltered in schools all her life. First to volunteer, if it means helping others. Tries her best with mixed results. Likes to picnic on warm, sunny, summer days.
Skills: Resistance +2 Inventory: Heal [Range 1] :: 30/30 Uses :: Restores a small amount (10 + Mag/2) of HP to an ally Vulnerary :: 3/3 Uses :: Restores 10 HP
Edited : 9:30 pm PST Aug 30, 2013
Posted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 11:23 am
Paidi tou Selini
Haha I like their individuality. Noble-raised thief and passionate artist.
Their base stats and class growths are good, but I think you forgot the "min of 15 points" in a stat when doing personal growth. So, Kalyna's HP and Def, as well as Mahina's Skill, need to be changed.
Also, it's "Vulnerary".
But yeah, besides the above things, it looks good!
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First of all, I love how you got three classes with a "something +2" as their starting skill.
Ok one blurb question: If Tamma was orphaned at a young age, how could she follow in her family's traditions? Would she know these traditions or are they the traditions of her new family? It would almost make more sense to just not make her an orphan.
Can you put [Flying/Beast] after Pegasus Knight (for Class) and [Beast] after Troubadour? Oh and [Effective against Flying] for your bow. For your Heal staff, the small amount is 10 HP ( and I've decided + Mag/2 ) [ So your Heal is 11 HP ]
Stat-wise, there were little problems, but... Archer Def class growth is 10, not 15. And your Archer also has another 5 points left to spend in personal growths.
Besides that, it all looks good.
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Posted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:32 pm
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Oops, I had read that as total min/max. All fixed.
