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 Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:33 pm
The_Mistress_Of_Music Rosey_Nitemares I would love to try this, though how do we know what is in your inventory? Click on the avatar base in the first post and it will redirect you to her inventory on tektek.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:46 pm
My first submission, hope you like it.
Would definitely appreciate some feedback.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:58 am
Hmmm not in love with the hair because the gold is pretty pretty prevalent there where is is mostly used as an accent colour throughout the rest of the avi. Also Zodiacal was used twice (but if you are changing the hair that will take care of that) I think maybe black hair with different gold items would fit best for this one as well as some gold bracelets.
The addition of the Antique Shop looks a bit off because of the creamy colours - they are kinda competing with the golds I think. Too bad the teal in it was great! Maybe drop that and look at other items that match the rest of the colours?
This is a fun avi ^_^ I don't usually care for lips (unless they come already attached with eyes - you know the whole face thing) and the gold from the crescent moon doesn't quite match with the other more dull golds. I'm really focused on colour balance and clutter this time around so leg mods might not work as well because it can be so hard to clutter them up.
I love the hair in this one and have only ever used it once so I'm pumped if you can bring it together. Again the gold in the moon doesn't match up with the others on the avi and I'd like to see a bit more of clutter throughout the avi (arms, legs, head) The antique shop vest is a great start since it's got some clutter potential on it's own.
Thanks for helping clarifying with the other contestants how my inventory work - appreciated!
The red in the pendant still stands out a bit too much for me and there isn't quite enough red in the avi to make it flow. I tried tinkering around with it a bit to see if I could help bring it together and I didn't have much luck with the red and blue items. Might not work out
Oh I am SUCH a fan of orange and black avis - anyone that has seen my previous avis knows I am such a sucker for black skin tones since they make the other colours pop. The Sphinx does not layer properly with Lumiere Noire though (found this out the hard way sadly) - remember to check layering before submitting ^_^ It's too bulky for me personally with the wings and flowing skirt but the colours are a good start.
I'm not a super big fan of this avi for me though I do like the colours. I like more of an even, organized clutter throughout the whole of the avi and the colours to be spaced evenly ^_^Please don't spam my thread with these types of posts. If you want help with a particular avi or items the appropriate place would be the Questing forum. Make sure to read all the rules for that particular forum before creating a thread though.Well you can never get good until you practice - and I think these are great starts!
I'm a big fan of the Spring Nymph (and any other items) that come pre cluttered for you - the Gogh Reed dress is a bit too bulky for me and the golds don't all match up but other than that it's a good begining point. If you're looking at using that hair you'll want to try and incorporate more cream into the avi for an even colour balance and those legs while one of my favs can be hard to add items to for that cluttered feel.
Sharp avi ^_^ I don't really love that particular hair (which is funny because it's the reason I originally got that item) and the pink in the hat doesn't really match up throughout the rest of the avi. Maybe focus more on making sure the same colours are appearing evenly throughout the avi (head, torso, bottom) and adding a few more items?Nice colour choice (purple+black+gold) for the avi though it's really too bulky for me with the hair+wings+cape. I'm more focused on the clutter as well as colour balance, so it's important that the majority (if all isn't possible) of the shades used are the same or very similar.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:44 pm
ok sorry i don't know that it did't apply to contest i coulden't under stand the rules i have trouble understanding stuff it part of my mental disabilty asbergus syndrom i have difficulty under standing certin things so sorry sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:47 pm
I'll be finishing these when I get home Sunday. Hopefully I won't forget.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:26 pm
The pixie clips will layer below the red horns, other than that layering should be as shown. Total Value: 8,139,302 Gold After Exclusions: 0 Gold [Item Information]And because I thought this looked rather nice, here's an edited version as well. Total Value: 8,562,302 Gold After Exclusions: 0 Gold [Item Information]
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:29 pm
I love all the pale colours - really makes the red stand out beautifully. I think the Picolitrosso's Urn goes smashingly with it but I think for the contest I will keep it without - though it took some time to finally come to a decision lol. Submitted.
EDIT: After all that I decided to go with the one that included the bird lol
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:57 pm
RabidKitten I love all the pale colours - really makes the red stand out beautifully. I think the Picolitrosso's Urn goes smashingly with it but I think for the contest I will keep it without - though it took some time to finally come to a decision lol. Submitted.
EDIT: After all that I decided to go with the one that included the bird lol lol I couldn't pick one either. Glad you like the outfit, though! ^^
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:37 pm
Well, I messed with the butterfly since it seemed to be the only one with hope razz
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:32 am
The wings and jacket still seem a bit bulky for me - I trimmed it down a bit if you'd like to use this as a new starting point ^_^ Also with the pearl accents in the hair we might want to look at adding some white as well <3
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 9:30 am
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 8:21 pm
Definintely better but still a bit bulky...maybe chunky - what's the word I'm looking for? lol I think it's really just a couple items that stand out to me - would you mind these changes?
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 8:45 am
RabidKitten Definintely better but still a bit bulky...maybe chunky - what's the word I'm looking for? lol I think it's really just a couple items that stand out to me - would you mind these changes? That works for me Also toyed around with a new one:
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 2:25 pm
I love these three colours together but the avi is too simple for me. I'd rather see many smaller items together for a cluttered look (like my current avi). Big fan of the mask but that's about it for this particular one.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 4:18 pm
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