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 Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:03 pm
Gold Shop
Clutter
Summer
*sigh* Its been a while since I last did this. xD
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:35 pm
a different crowded entry
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:53 pm
Giving the male side a try...
Gold Shop
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:08 pm
Gold Shop: I really like which colours you've chosen here and how you've brought them all together. Submitted ^_^
Summer: That's exactly how I want to spend every waking moment of my summer. Well maybe minus the seal. But you've definitely captured the essence of the season. Submitted.
Clutter: Wow - very well done from a colour balance perspective. Normally I wouldn't care for bulkier items (the fan) but it meshes very well with the rest. There are multiple items used more than once though - if you would like to remove some and resubmit?
Gold Shop 2: I really like the colours chosen for this avi but the items itself seem a little half-hazard to me. Especially the bow and apron together.
Clutter 2: I love how the colours pop on this avi but it's a bit too busy for what I'm looking for. I added a link to some clutter examples to give a better idea of the theme. ^_^
Summer2: I think this is a very well put together avi and like the overall look though it doesn't put me in the mind of summer. It might be the underwater effect with the bunnies.
Gold Shop 3: Wow I really like the male - very good work with the colour distribution. Submitted. Gold Shop: I definitely like the edits. I think the only thing that would be needed to have it added to the list would be some more red along the top? A hairclip, headband, flower, etc? ^_^
Clutter: I really love what you did with the creams. Gaia is starting to pay attention but creams are still incredibly hard to work with. I think if you added some gold to the arms and bottom and evened out the particular shades of gold we'd be there. Gold Shop- and I know it is so hard to work with that colour when limited to the shops. I like how it evens it out though - submitted ^_^Summer: I actually think this is a very interesting idea for the Summer category. I think it could use some more in the way of colour balancing (I know this can be difficult with the tail and think you have done a good job so far) The white in the jacket seems a bit off as it isn't present anywhere else as well.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:50 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:19 pm
Fixed!
Clutter(Fixed)
Surprisingly easy to fix... xD
EDIT: Heres a new one I was working on!
Gold Shop
EDIT 2: Messed around with the previous beach one.
Beach(Fixed)
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:30 pm
clutter retry gold shop retry {two} summer entry {yay satyrs} gold shop male
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:57 am
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:38 am
Summer: I think that definitely is better. Submitted.
Clutter: Yup super easy and I actually like how the bottom is cleaned up a bit. Submitted.
Gold Shop: I really like it and think it's ready to be submitted but I think the Puggleston item isn't a shop item?
Summer: I still like the colour options used - I would probably drop the umbrella and background, and possibly and a bit more in the way of dark blue? I like it and think it's super close.Cultter: Awesome edits. I added just a couple things and dropped the mask. If you don't mind the changes, I'd be happy to submit?
Gold Shop: Yup - there it is ^_^ Submitted.
Summer: I really like this take on the summer avi. Normally I don't love backgrounds but it really suits here. Al I did was add the one item to bring some green to the torso and bottom. If you don't mind I'll go ahead and submit?
Gold Shop: I like that we're seeing more in the way of male avis as well <3 I like this (who doesn't like a b&w avi?) but maybe add a bit more in the way of while near the bottom?Summer: Sold ^_^ I'm always a big fan when one avi can fit into two separate categories and looks fab. Submitted.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:19 am
What the.... eek Gah, I knew there was something a bit off! Curse tektek for putting that in the gold shop section! xd Gold Shop(Fixed) EDIT: Fixed the Summer One. Now with glasses! 4laugh Summer(Fixed)
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:35 am
Gold Shop: It felt like a bit too much gold at the throat so I made a couple minor additions - if you don't mind them I'll be happy to submit.
Summer: Same as above - a couple changes to even out the colour distribution.
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 9:38 am
Yep, they look better to me ^^ I knew the legs looked a bit off... gold shop male retry gold shop male 2 {just for lols}
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:14 am
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:22 pm
Gold Shop: I like it with the addition of the anklet but the mid section seems off to me for some reason. The colours are right but maybe a belt to break it up?
Gold Shop 2: I'm not in love with the colours (particularly the face seems off as it's the only really strikingly white portion) and it's a bit blocky for my particular tastes.It's cute but which category are you submitting it for? My feedback will depend on that <3
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:36 pm
Summer I guess. I'm not to sure what to put it in.
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