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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:17 pm

Okay, I drew a new sketch. I would be so happy if you could red-line it and tell me what I did wrong. XD

I was experimenting with drawing new eyes, haha. This is going to be the picture I'll do for my finished one this weekend. Just need some anatomy help.

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I tried changing some of the things that I thought looked wrong the next day.

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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:31 am

Oh, can I also be your mentee too? I need a lot of parctice regarding anatomy and it would be great if you can help me improve!

Please? Ahahaha...

Here is one of my finest work... It was hard too... By the way, I'm into Anime more!

This one!

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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 11:59 pm

Ren:
I'll red line it and post it in my next post O uO
but ill just go ahead and tell you some of the mistakes i see
the hips are a tad big, chest area should be widened just a bit
uhm the head looks a bit small to me its prolly the hair it looks flat maybe try adding some more volume to it O nO ill redline it and show you what i mean

Keichaos:
oh i like the design O uO
and yes you can be a mentee
but before i add you i wanna see if youll reply to this > n>
post i dun want any students who dun post much

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:15 pm

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Ren:
I'll red line it and post it in my next post O uO
but ill just go ahead and tell you some of the mistakes i see
the hips are a tad big, chest area should be widened just a bit
uhm the head looks a bit small to me its prolly the hair it looks flat maybe try adding some more volume to it O nO ill redline it and show you what i mean

Keichaos:
oh i like the design O uO
and yes you can be a mentee
but before i add you i wanna see if youll reply to this > n>
post i dun want any students who dun post much

eeee<3
Thank you much much.
I hate how I read crits then look back at the drawing and see how obvious some of the mistakes are. Haha. I'll try rushing and fixing what you say before you redline it. I fight a lot with head sizes. XD You'll really notice that in some of my drawings. I used to draw MASSIVE heads then I realized I wanted to make it more anatomically correct.

Also, do you have any advice for designing clothes? All my clothes are so boring. D: I try using tektek sometimes to get outfit ideas but aside from that I'm so blank.

And also, I'm doing three posemaniac 60 second sketches a day(well...more than that. XD I just pick the three I like the best) And I plan on reporting on progress every three days. biggrin This is because I'm an overachiever that loves drawing too much. I'm also trying to do one bigger semi finished sketch each day. So I'll be posting a post with that this evening when I finish todays.

Thanks for your help so far, Flip!

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P.S. Sorry if I'm too active. You can just tell me your busy if you don't feel like commenting. Haha.

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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:32 pm

your welcome O uO
and hahaha XD i still ask some of my more experienced friends if they see any anatomy mistakes in my drawings sometimes
anywho heres the redline O uO
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body~made it curvier cause well guys have curves too ;D hahah
that one arm~ it was too thin so make sure you thicken that up a bit
muscles~ added in some muscles cause well.. i have nothing better to do XD
hair~see how a little volume in the hair can really make a big difference? O uO

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:51 pm

FlipMaester

your welcome O uO
and hahaha XD i still ask some of my more experienced friends if they see any anatomy mistakes in my drawings sometimes
anywho heres the redline O uO
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body~made it curvier cause well guys have curves too ;D hahah
that one arm~ it was too thin so make sure you thicken that up a bit
muscles~ added in some muscles cause well.. i have nothing better to do XD
hair~see how a little volume in the hair can really make a big difference? O uO

Holy crap. I really see what you mean about the hair. XD Looks much, much better with volume. I generally make my arms little stick arms -FAIL- D:
The arm with a bit more muscle looks awesome!
Man, thanks so much for the redline. (It really looks like he uses the awesome extra volumizing shampoo, yay!)

Hurrah, Thanks! Feet are so much fun to sketch, but when it comes to refining I'm like all over the foot models in posemaniacs. D:
Off to hopefully fix mine. Will post it back here after refining.
(I'm up really late on weekends, hehe. So I'll probably do all this drawing after I watch Ghost Adventures. Less distractions at night.)

The way you drew the upper torso really, really helps me. <3

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Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 7:17 pm

Uhmmm, could I apply as mentee?
I'm weak in anatomy, so maybe you could help me improve
I'm into anime and cartoony stuff
but I'm trying to do some more styles

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- my deviant art :"]

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 10:33 pm

sure thing if~~
you reply to this before Kei does > 3>
and i love your coloring

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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 1:41 am

Oh, I'm very sorry for the late reply! And I am willing to be your mentee! Ahahahaha... blaugh So, am I accepted?

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:30 am

Thanks for the compliment
. . . but Kei already posted before me
so . . . I'll just go find another mentor
. . . emo

*sigh*

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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:49 am

Death Faust IX

Thanks for the compliment
. . . but Kei already posted before me
so . . . I'll just go find another mentor
. . . emo

*sigh*

I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to give you false hopes... sweatdrop

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:14 am

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Thanks for the compliment
. . . but Kei already posted before me
so . . . I'll just go find another mentor
. . . emo

*sigh*

I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to give you false hopes... sweatdrop

Nothing to worry about
. . . and you don't have to say sorry

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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:32 am

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keichaos

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Thanks for the compliment
. . . but Kei already posted before me
so . . . I'll just go find another mentor
. . . emo

*sigh*

I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to give you false hopes... sweatdrop

Nothing to worry about
. . . and you don't have to say sorry

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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:39 pm

Alright, I've been working on my weekend fully done piece assignment today. Although I got one sketch done of a guy as requested. Working on another. :3
I re-did the legs like 10 times, and used the pose, but they still look bad. D: I cannot figure out why! Heeelp!

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Edit: omg. I looked at it before I went to bed. D: omg. The torso is so crooked. -facepalm-

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