Critique the Avatar Above You -or die-

[Erverain]

The flaming hair just doesn't seem to work...

But then again, I really have no taste...  

[124-C]

I like this avatar, a lot. The limited number of elements help keep it from the disorganized mess that plagues Gaia. I like how you changed up the classic Prada color scheme (which was getting to be so cliche) by switching which color was the accent.

If I were to pick an element that bothers me, it would have to be the eyebrows. It's not bad, just, bothersome.

-Tsuji

[EDIT] Sorry, Erv, I missed ya while typing. I'll write one for you too.
[EDIT 2] Ok, Erv. All in all, I think that the avatar feels cluttered. You have too many different elements. I like the base that you have, but in adding the dragons and bird you lose focus.  

[Erverain]

It's very Jimmy. Ve-e-e-e-ry Jimmy. The bird throws off the duplicative effect, though.

As for the clutter, half the stuff I've got on here is actually gifts from other people that I said I'd wear. I suppose I could cut back, as it were.  

[Arcanas]

Well, to be honest, as much as I like it, oddly enough, the bird seems the most out of place in the entire ensemble.  

[WhisperingSouls]

i love it! very charming, looks like a great gentlemen  

[Taeryyn]

xp You seem to end up having the post directly above mine fairly often, so I feel like I'm ragging on your avvies alot.

Anyway, it's not remotely original. It's not hard to do a decent avatar with little gold. There are lots of nice items that are cheap, and it would look like you put more work into it if you mixed and matched, instead of just using a set.  

[Arcanas]

I do love the use of pink and blue, although pink isn't one of my favorite colors. I do like how you incorporate the use of the wings in just about every single avi you do.  

[Large Inmate]

I don't like the blue and the black together at all. The whole avy just seems bad or off to me.
New colors.  

[Magical Maiden]

It looks like you threw a bunch of random items together. D:  

[Arcanas]

I like the unique use of the sleeves...hard to get that to work unless you've got an Asian like theme going on...I don't however like the gills...never really been a fan of them, and think they look...odd  

[WhisperingSouls]

iwant a diffrent one! gonk  

[Erverain]

It's a set, so it balances well enough. It's just... not very original.  

[xfantasyxloverx]

The only thing is that it's a little cluttered around the waist area. I'd suggest taking off the bag or the sword. Otherwise, very nice!  

[Large Inmate]

The hat.
The rest looks okay, not that aww inspiring or anything. The hat is a different or is too much of a different shade from the other browns.  

[CR Kyrie]

I love the hair, and I think the last outfit you had went with it very well... but the purple in this one clashes with the blue-green tint in the hair, and that's tragic.

It's as if you have two working avatars. The head as one, and the neck downward as another one. They just don't come together very well.