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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 7:59 am
[Psychotic Violence] It's amazing. I really like it.
More to happen please. -Giggles.- ninja
-Swears i'm not pervy.- >__>;;
*Laughs* Theres nothing wrong with being a perv XD Thaks for your comment i'll update soon
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 2:31 pm
Ehehe. n__n;;
Yay, i'll look forward to the next chapter! Very talented. :3
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 3:06 pm
[Psychotic Violence] Ehehe. n__n;;
Yay, i'll look forward to the next chapter! Very talented. :3
Thanks! I've been writing Yaoi since i was 13 and in 21 too you do the math on how long ive been doing this XP
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 11:12 pm
OMG your going to continue this right? I need to see the fourth part. heart whee
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:18 am
SmexyPanda OMG your going to continue this right? I need to see the fourth part. heart whee Yeah im going to continue Ed needs to come back and give roy hot mansex at least once before i finish this! ^_^ heart
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 12:53 pm
My point exactly but just don't ruin by asking marriage. I read a fanfic for HP and yeah snape was crzy. He gave harry the talk. rofl And Malfoy yeha don't get me started pirate
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 4:38 pm
~Riyu Umi Renku~ My point exactly but just don't ruin by asking marriage. I read a fanfic for HP and yeah snape was crzy. He gave harry the talk. rofl And Malfoy yeha don't get me started pirate Hmm well can they at least propose to each other? I alreayd have a cute easter scene planned out *Pouts*
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 6:48 pm
easter? Can Ed be in a cute bunny suit for Roy? =^.^=
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Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 1:11 am
Scar_the_Ishbalian easter? Can Ed be in a cute bunny suit for Roy? =^.^= A bunny suit...um maybe *Sweatdrops and mutteres under her breath* Damn why didn't I think of that!
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 10:32 am
I like the story premise here overall so far. It is enjoyable. The only questions I have is whether this is a beat draft or if this is considered to be a finished work and wasn't Edward around 14-15 when he joined the military? I could be wrong in this but I was pretty sure that's how old he was.
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 11:05 am
Toadie-Odie I like the story premise here overall so far. It is enjoyable. The only questions I have is whether this is a beat draft or if this is considered to be a finished work and wasn't Edward around 14-15 when he joined the military? I could be wrong in this but I was pretty sure that's how old he was. Yeah this is the best draft of this story and edward is 16 here anyway so in my mind he's legal ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 11:11 am
Actually when both people are mature enough I don't see anything wrong with a 10 year age difference. As it is my parents are 8 years apart. It's not something I'm going to hold against anyone if the couple is truly happy.
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:33 pm
OMG! It's like... Jade Queen of the Dammed from ff.net!!! -squee- heart I just love your fics!!! 3nodding Is this one posted on ff.net? blaugh I'll go check and review! 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Jun 20, 2006 9:03 am
bitterSweetFate OMG! It's like... Jade Queen of the Dammed from ff.net!!! -squee- heart I just love your fics!!! 3nodding Is this one posted on ff.net? blaugh I'll go check and review! 4laugh Like OMG!!! someone on Gaia knows me from FF.NET! XP Yes thats me ^_^ you will thats nice Im really obsessed with FMA ficlets at the moment right now im writnign three at one XP Im such a busy girl ^_^
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:52 pm
I was sad when I got to the end of chapter 3. xD It's so good! <333 I love how sly Roy is. ninja heart
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