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 Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:50 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:53 pm
Don't feel like you have to have items that are expensive! smile Go for more items at a lower price, if you want. I'm not a fan of the sash, the red? It doesn't fit well. I also don't like the Enchanted Book's effect. I prefer items that are all ON the avi. No backgrounds, special effects that are large like that, no companions, ect. I also just can't get myself to like the skirt or shirt, they don't seem to match either. one is yellow and the other blue. I don't want to come off as mean smile I just am looking for something here and hoping to get it from someone <3 If noone shows promise in a couple hours I'll have to up times and prizes.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:13 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:18 pm
Not cluttered enough, but I LOVE the direction! And it's only at 225k. You still have another 760k left to play with! smile Use your imagination! :3 I like the teal and cream and gold. How about using the Daughter of Snow's antlers and getting a different hair style to work with? I enjoy the majestic look rather than royal or faerie razz
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:20 pm
This. Is. Amazing! Use that last bit of gold to see about getting something more in, maybe something that will swirl for the character, like a sparkle, or anything else that can decorate her, but still stay close to her body. (That is hard to explain, but when it comes to items, as long as they are close to the avatar's body, I see it as okay.)
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:22 pm
This is a good start. I'd love for you to take the remaining gold left and add a little more though. Something by her feet, or something that swirls around her (nothing large or bright/overpowering). I'd just like to see the full 1 Mill being used smile
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:33 pm
It's my first try at a clutter look any feed back so i can improve would be helpful!  Total Value: 1,228,458 Gold After Exclusions: 406,958 Gold
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:35 pm
D-ment Psyche It's my first try at a clutter look any feed back so i can improve would be helpful! Total Value: 1,228,458 Gold After Exclusions: 406,958 Gold Wow! You went a way i wasn't expecting. Well, first off, I was hoping everyone would catch on that I am looking for a teal/blue and cream look. So I won't accept the black. But in terms of cluttered, I don't thinks it's too cluttered. But there is a lot going on, yes. Care to try again with the teal/blue and cream color scheme? smile
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:37 pm
Dressia D-ment Psyche It's my first try at a clutter look any feed back so i can improve would be helpful! Total Value: 1,228,458 Gold After Exclusions: 406,958 Gold Wow! You went a way i wasn't expecting. Well, first off, I was hoping everyone would catch on that I am looking for a teal/blue and cream look. So I won't accept the black. But in terms of cluttered, I don't thinks it's too cluttered. But there is a lot going on, yes. Care to try again with the teal/blue and cream color scheme? smile ok I'll go try again!
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:56 pm
how is this one? Total Value: 1,815,340 Gold After Exclusions: 993,840 Gold
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 1:57 pm
D-ment Psyche how is this one? Total Value: 1,815,340 Gold After Exclusions: 993,840 Gold I do not like the hair at all. And the wings should be scrapped. Take the gold from those two items and get a new hair, and some other items or clothing that help add to the atmosphere. The idea of cluttering up the avatar is to make sure theere are layers to look at. smile But the rest of the idea is good!
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 2:10 pm
Dressia D-ment Psyche how is this one? Total Value: 1,815,340 Gold After Exclusions: 993,840 Gold I do not like the hair at all. And the wings should be scrapped. Take the gold from those two items and get a new hair, and some other items or clothing that help add to the atmosphere. The idea of cluttering up the avatar is to make sure theere are layers to look at. smile But the rest of the idea is good! Well hopefully 3rd time's a charm how does it look? I tried taking your advice about layering items. Total Value: 1,731,888 Gold After Exclusions: 910,388 Gold
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 2:18 pm
D-ment Psyche Dressia D-ment Psyche how is this one? Total Value: 1,815,340 Gold After Exclusions: 993,840 Gold I do not like the hair at all. And the wings should be scrapped. Take the gold from those two items and get a new hair, and some other items or clothing that help add to the atmosphere. The idea of cluttering up the avatar is to make sure theere are layers to look at. smile But the rest of the idea is good! Well hopefully 3rd time's a charm how does it look? I tried taking your advice about layering items. Total Value: 1,731,888 Gold After Exclusions: 910,388 Gold Yes yes yes! You got it!!! ^_^ I'm going to save this one in the first post for later. I am so glad you got the jist! <3 Good luck against the other ones submitted <3
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