Callsigncaboose
Hm, yes, mechanics. My first question is why are your scores so low? Assuming you took the second array, I think you may have misplaced your 14. Or wait, I see your post says Elf, but the sheet says Eladrin. Did you switch it at some point? Which is it? Because your racial modifiers will change. I'm going to assume you meant Elf, since you wrote down their racial bonuses. (Also, are you going with Beastborn or Vetryis?)
Feats and skills look good. (Though minor typo for Animal Empathy.) Gear is almost good. The Battlecrazed weapon is 840, and an Adventurer's Kit is 15, so that puts you 5g over limit... But I think I'll give it to you since you were a good sport by taking the Primal character with a decent reason for her being there. You may want to record your Rage Strike in your power list.
Aaaaaand I think that's it.