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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:47 pm
 What a fun summer festival! What's this white girl doing here though?!  She's ready to go surfing! The water is colder than you think, sweetheart...  Summer conventions are afoot, and this suave nerd knows exactly how to make the fangirls swoon. You want to take a photo? Of course you do!
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:27 pm
Clutter: I really like it but that's probably in part because several items were used more than once. One of the rules is each item is only utilized the one time but feel free to try again.Gold Shop: I really love this as a great starting point. A couple of the creams don't mesh quite right and there could use a little white near the bottom as well.
Clutter / Layer: Ohhh red + white + black + pink is such a fantastic combination choice. I love the head as a start (especially the face itself and the horns) but I'd like to see a bit more in the way of clutter (additional items).Festival: The bright colours definitely make me think of summer though I'd like to see more in the way of matching overall. Colour matching is almost always what's most important to me <3
Surfing: This is my favourite of the three submissions but it's a little bare. I know a surfer girl probably wouldn't be wearing a whole heck of a lot more to the beach but maybe can find anklets and/or other items to help spread the colours out. Obviously you don't have to make it cluttered or item heavy, just a tad more?
Cosplay: He's cute and I like his story but he doesn't really grab me as a summer avi.
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:49 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:46 pm
Summer: Barrett on vacation. Yeah, he's totally having having fun...totally.
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:47 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 6:23 am
Summer: While that certainly is a very summery avi the colours don't really match up well and it seems a bit bulky with the dual backgrounds. If possible try to spice her up and add more items (or different ones) to the avi as well? <3Gold Shop: I actually preferred the first submissions as the base just because each f the added items seems to jar the avi a bit colour wise and draw the eyes there specifically . We still have the same issue as before with the different creams as well.
Clutter / Layer: I like how the torso came together though the wings/bow seem a bit bulky to me. After those are removed I'm not sure if the needle will take away from the avi or not - we'll just have to wait and see ^_^ Going in the right direction though. I have also added a link on the categories section with some examples of the type of clutter I am looking to see.Ahahaha. He looks like he's having a blastie. And so patriotic too! Though this isn't super on board with colour matching it made me smile enough that it makes the cut. <3Gold Shop: I am always a sucker for black+red. I also like that the reds are mostly used as an accent colour though the red in the torso is so dark is falls a bit in the background, making the avi seem somewhat uneven. Also the skull in the middle throws me a bit. Maybe touch up the torso and see if you're able to add any red to the top? ^_^
Clutter: Love the colour combinations but the gold in the middle really seems to dominate the avi. I have also added a link on the categories section with some examples of the type of clutter I am looking to see.
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:48 am
The gold shop can wait till later. >x< 
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:50 pm
Great to see another one of your contests! This one's for the category Gold Shop Items Only. Thoughts are welcome, as usual.^^
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:10 pm
Clutter: I made a couple changes just to even out the colours - if you don't mind then I'll go ahead and submit ^_^ Oh ty dear - it's so nice to see you joining again <3
Gold Shop: I really like the colours you've chosen (as usual) and the creative way you put the items together. I think a bit more pink on top if possible would be fabulous.
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:39 pm
RabidKitten Clutter: I made a couple changes just to even out the colours - if you don't mind then I'll go ahead and submit ^_^ Oh ty dear - it's so nice to see you joining again <3
Gold Shop: I really like the colours you've chosen (as usual) and the creative way you put the items together. I think a bit more pink on top if possible would be fabulous. I don't mind. smile
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:45 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:17 am
RabidKitten Oh ty dear - it's so nice to see you joining again <3
Gold Shop: I really like the colours you've chosen (as usual) and the creative way you put the items together. I think a bit more pink on top if possible would be fabulous. Wouldn't wanna miss it. xD Better? There aren't a lot of pink head items that match with the rest, unfortunately.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 12:47 pm
Summer;  I hope it counts as summer.. emotion_sweatdrop
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