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K76

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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 6:34 pm


I guess I can excerpt stuff at least. This is the start of a story that I've done about 8000 words of and have put aside since. But I like the start.

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Where most people saw only a narrow, muddy street, Ed Wolf saw an intricate mesh of gears and cogs, writhing and twisting, spinning and fluidly rearranging, stretching across his vision and beyond to the edges of the Earth and even to the edges of the cosmos. Every snowflake that fell and every gust of wind that whistled by set some of them into whirling motion, and these few set their neighbors spinning, and their neighbors' neighbors, and thence mapped each and every cause to a billion subtle effects spanning the breadth of the universe. The learned called these interactions Chaos Theory. He called it his sixth sense.

If he really focused, he could imagine a certain cog moving and observe how it would influence the others. Sometimes he'd lay abed all night, awake, moving this cog and that to decide what he should say to a certain girl, or how to avoid another beating. His sense wasn't perfect, though. Nowhere near so. When he tried to look more than a few hours ahead, or at a matter made up of more than a few influences, thousands of cogs would spread themselves to infinity in width and depth in an undulating jumble far too complex to make sense of. Only through agonizing effort could he ever divine the truth he sought, however tiny, from such an uncaring ocean of prophecy.

The sky was the same ashen gray as the snowy ground, and the rest of the visual world bled a ruddy red from the brick walls of Pittsburgh. It was the sort of day Ed would be content to spend without stepping foot outside his home, but the stars had insisted it was important that he did. His parka kept out the worst of the deep winter's chill, but he still shuddered now and then when some tendril of cold somehow sliced through.

He came to the mouth of an unplowed alley and briefly looked around before entering. Nervousness began to tighten his heart as he stamped through the ankle-deep snow. He knew there would be at least some disagreement, and perhaps a lot of it. Perhaps too much. And in that case, the stars did not show a kind future.

When he gazed upon the stars, they showed him things that the gears and cogs never could. Rather than showing all of the possibilities that might be, the stars showed the possibilities that needed to become reality. Ninety-nine times out of a hundred, they were nothing more than pretty lights in the heavens, but on the other few occasions they leapt and cavorted in a cosmic dance to imprint upon the blackened sky their exhortations and demands. Never were they suggestions. The stars always spoke urgently when they chose to speak at all, and to ignore them was to invite possible ruin. Something powerful spoke through the stars, neither angel nor demon, and concerned with a far grander scheme than either. Whatever it was, it would not accept disobedience. Those who refused to be its pawns were almost always met by a nebulous force of bad lack that would eventually master them.

Voices flowed over the cracked bricks of the alley - first a young woman's, subtly agitated and harsh, and then in response a man's, solid and blunt, but with an undertone of tiredness and learned indifference.

NOW WUT HAPPENS?
PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:07 am


Me makes stories. Really want them to be books/movies someday. whee
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:29 am


I've done alot of random writing my poetry varies. I dont like it all the time but idk this is a random one,
[ Your eyes petrify me at every glance
Your hands mend my heart with every chance
Your lips pierce my love like diamond tipped lance
Your beauty captivates my soul.. ]
(very random writing for someone long ago...)

I also have alot of idea for songs i written a few but I'm trying to sell em and I dont feel like posting them but i wrote this one day when I was soo at peace with life riding the ferry acroos the ocean from vancouver to victoria bc.. Its just a chorus but anyway
[Some make the tides reawake, bring my scars I wont break, Leave my shame behind! I won't need it. And when things come undone, just be sure not to run, Keep your head held high! dont forget it.]

(It's a working progress lolz)
PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:56 pm


I love writing. especially poems. I share some if you would like me too.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 2:45 am


MY MOST FAVORITED POEM
WHAT THE…

I’m there without knowing
I kill without hesitation
you cannot see me… you are frightened of me… yet you know what I am and how I work thus you are not scared and I grow weak because of you
you mind when you don’t you kill me when I try to kill how can I be the same for all yet different to all you run form me and try to hide yet you cant I always creep up and get you some how
how could it be
how should u look
as they look
what do they see
as they come they go as you dream your mind is week as u come u go as this happens your valuable and susceptible to the evil which no one should live on
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:41 pm


I love writing short/not so short stories. I'm terrible at formal poetry, though, so here's some prose I'm planning on using as the beginning/theme of one of my stories.


Moth to a Flame

In life, there are moths and there are flames. The majority of us are moths; fluttering around, looking for answers. Some sort of satisfaction, to make us feel like we matter, in the grand scheme of things. We don't care how hot or bright the flames are, as long as we're kept warm and safe in our own little illusion that nothing's wrong. That our lives are the way we've always dreamt them to be. We can't be reasoned with. Not really. In fact, even if we do realize how harmful the flames are for us, we won't stop trying to reach them until we fall to the ground. Dead.

Flames, on the other hand, yearn for the worship we moths are more than happy to provide. Their eternal lust for our attentions cannot be smothered. Not even by the rain that befalls them, when they realize that they are just one small flicker of the universe. Their tendrils of heat will flare towards us moths fervently. Desperately. And we will comply. We will throw ourselves into the flame, to prove its worth, because we seek our own answers.

Perhaps, we think, this is all there is. And it will be, because we cannot reach the conclusions to our own answers. We can only guess and wonder.

And hope we're right.

We're all fools without answers. And sometimes…

Sometimes, when all you have is questions, you're drawn to the ones with all the answers.


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:21 pm


Rei Akira-Chan
Me makes stories. Really want them to be books/movies someday. whee
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I know how you feel!!

I too shall put up some ideas...
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