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 Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 9:52 pm
You are the apple...
@jolly: 1st avi is a bit too simple; can you add more to it? 2nd avi is again a bit too simple and the purple of the skin and blue of the eyes either need to go, or there needs to be more of each color is the whole avi.
@Gewd: I like where it's going, but the upper torso, mainly around the neck, is too cluttered.
@Therapist: 1st avi I dont much care for. The remade one could use more black.
@Banshee: If you could distribute the black/red/gold throughout the avi like the wings, it'd be awesome.
and I am your core.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:23 am
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:35 am
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:51 am
Rock4ourRock You are the apple...
@Gewd: I like where it's going, but the upper torso, mainly around the neck, is too cluttered.
and I am your core. All i could do was change the hair since the clutter came from one key item.  But i did make another one.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 3:48 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 4:27 pm
♪♫•*¨*•.¸¸❤¸¸.•*¨*•♫♪ ♪♫•*¨*•.¸¸❤¸¸.•*¨*•♫♪ ~feedback please~
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 5:05 pm
You are the apple...
@Crooked: Could you add a little more, particularly to the torso?
@jolly: 1st avi could still use a little more, 2nd avi I'm not much caring for.
@Gewd: 1st avi is lookin' good, could use stuff on the hair, though. 2nd avi I'm not likin'.
@Therapist: I'm likin' it, but it needs more.
@tears: Far too simple for my taste.
and I am your core.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 5:20 pm
ılıll|̲̅̅●̲̅̅|̲̅̅=̲̅̅|̲̅̅●̲̅̅|llılı ılıll|̲̅̅●̲̅̅|̲̅̅=̲̅̅|̲̅̅●̲̅̅|llılı ˙·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠·˙ ·٠•●♥ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♥●•٠· ~feedback please~
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 6:14 pm
Here's one with a little less.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 7:02 pm
Do not think I could've kept the hair since the crown and hair were one item. Here another one.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 7:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:52 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:56 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:50 am
You are the apple...
@tears: Add more to the first one and possibly get rid of the background?
@BlueMoon: I'm liking the add ons to the first version, except for the Infinite World. As for your second avi, I'm not a big fan of full black avatars. Try that with a different color, if you wish?
@Gewd: I was gonna say you could've just kept the hair and add to it, but then I saw the edit and was like "O.O So close to amazing!" It needs just a little bit more on the heada nd i think it'll be my first fave.
@Stars: Give me just a bit more white on the torso?
@Vampy: I'm not liking it, sorry.
and I am your core.
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Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2012 6:48 am
Man, making me work hard arn't cha (:
Here's the black one, I tried to switch it up.
Here's another one:
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